Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic] Mystery Fusion #20

    The wall behind her was lined with carefully maintained weaponry --
none of them loaded, of course. It was a hobby, though... and she did
have ammunition, hidden as that was.

bit awkward at the end. "hidden as it was' perhaps?

I hate to make an actual contribution, but I think

", hidden though it was." might work.

although I might have infinitively split. ;-P

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