>From :Brian Randall [brian@azurite.org]

And unbidden, the tears came again. How cruel, how unfair that all

of the love that Belldandy felt was echoed so hollowly through her, her
partner in the doublet system. <<

Are you really familiar with the arc regarding the Doublet link? Or is this
story that far alt?
Be careful, because if you screw up on this every reader will know by June
2002 or thereabouts.
Other than that, I really can't find anything to comment about.

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