Brian Randall wrote:
This one's exceptionally... off.
Not as off as my latest one was, I'd wager. :)
I think it's a spamfic, but that
doesn't quite convey the sheer... dross that this story is.
I think you're a bit off and it probably does.
Turnabout
is fair play?
18:15 start
In the downstairs bedroom of the Tendo home -- the one that had once
housed Happosai -- three figures lay strewn about aimlessly, all of them
snoring heavily.
Once housed? Something happen to the little bugger?
A fourth figure groaned, doubtless from the strain of the previous
night's exertions, and rose to stumble towards the bathroom, past a
disapproving look from Kasumi.
Who had wanted in on the action.
Of course, no one had ever bothered to closely examine what would happen
in an extended relationship with multiple others
Exhaustion and probably early heart attacks, in reality. :)
... what was the plural
form of spouse, anyway? Spouses?
'Orgytime' works for me. ^_^
But like it or not, there were three others in a relationship with her,
once rivals, now... She shook her head. She didn't want the three of
them. Not at all. It wasn't that they were bad people, it wasn't even
that she didn't love them...
it was that whole nymphomania problem that had just recently made it's
presense known.
Because she _did_ love them, but, not as much as... no sense thinking
about what she had lost.
Ah, must be Happi, since you mentioned he no longer used his old bedroom.
She spat, "Feh. I gave up what I thought I didn't want... and..." She
trailed off, staring at the bucket again, and wondering what she was
going to do next.
Dry out, probably.
The curses weren't nearly as much of an impediment as she had originally
thought they would be, but... something about the relationships just
didn't... make her happy. A crazy Kuno as an in-law was scary enough,
but being married to one...
Now that was the way to go. He's put out all the time.
And she knew that she had to respect and love someone who was that...
loyal, and eager to defend her name, but... it was nothing she had ever
expected. She had thought that she would only fill her original
obligation, and then... well, she would be married to the one she truly
_did_ love,
Daisuke; Yes! Finally I have a love life.
without having the faint unhappy sense that what she felt
for her current spouses was... manufactured... somehow.
More like contrived. :)
And gods, managing a relationship was awkward enough, but when the three
of them all decided that they were 'in the mood'... it wasn't easy,
Hey, it's easier for a gal than it would be for a guy. :P
and
she expected they got a lot more out of it than she did. And then
children... when the time came for that, she _knew_ it was going to be
messy.
Why, Kasumi would have to wash the sheets three times a day, probably.
"Tell me about it. I was wondering though... if... you..."
"You want to add me to your little... harem?"
Well, since I already added Pink, Link, the water pail lady, Kyoko Otonashi
from Maison Ikkoku...
Akane smiled. "Some days," she whispered. "I wish it could have been
just you and me... but..."
Ranma silenced her with a kiss, then said, "Don't worry about it too
much. I'll get used to sharing you with Ryouga, Kuno, and Mousse. As
long as I get you too."
Akane: Actually, I was hoping you would do it as a girl sometimes and take
the heat off me.
"What are you going to do about Ukyou, Kodachi and Shampoo?"
"Er..." Ranma flushed, looking away. "They decided I wasn't exactly,
er... necessary. I got really tired one night and convinced them to try
girl/girl..."
Akane laughed, "Oh my..." Maybe it wasn't so bad after all...
Heh. Nice wicked turn in the end.
Amusing piece. It was brief enough that I didn't spot any spelling errors.
Decent enough spamfic.
D.B. Sommer
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