Ok, this is fine, but three posts of a single chapter is getting to be too
much.  But since this is your first try, that's ok.  But I suggest that you
get a couple of pre-readers to help bake your story into a final version,
which gives you a much larger (but spottier) audience reveiw.  The final
version is supposed to be posted to the RAAC (rec.arts.anime.creative).

And as for the expansion, Kuno's most likely oblivious to OTHER nations
nobility.  Though there have been some fun fanfics where Ranma turns out to
have 'higher' blood than Kuno.

Firethorn


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