[Orig] 
They Walk In Light 2
by Aescension
Synopsis:
   We continue with Screw's little adventures in
daily life. ^_^ 
Review:
   For one thing, this is not the sort that you 
would find on the FFML. Tell me, how many people 
have sent response to this? ^_^

   Anyway, the prose is good but the details are
just wonky. Kate Moss? 7-11? I thought this was 
a freakin' alternate world from several references
in the earlier chapter and in this one. Please be
consistent. 

Of course, given the way the rest of it is put together, how sure are you that he's being inconsistant? Any character can break characterization, given a a reasonable motive. It definitely seems to be in an alternate world, but what if those little things that are dropping aren't flaws. Methinks there's a method to his madness. 



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