First, let me take this moment to say just how glad I am to see a fic based
off of my favorite anime of all time.

Second, let me say that it is well up to the level of quality I've come to
expect from you after the DP/Iria xover. All of the characters are dealt
with believably, even beautifully. Particular kudos for your treatment of
Gene, and Melfina's choice in hobbies.

Third, I disagree violently. It seems to me that the vast majority of what
we see of Melfina throughout the series is the half- or more than half,
considering how little the Maiden actually seemed to _do_- that remained
behind. I think that Melfina-the-Maiden took more the form of specific, fey
compulsions that no one, not even Melfina-the-Girl, understood.

*blinks* D*mn that's a convoluted thought.

Fourth, once I suspend my disblief of that one point and continue
considering, everything follows perfectly.

Thank you very much.

Blessed be.

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Nathan Baxter, Grand High Emperor of the Lobsters.
Author, Bubblegum^5, El Hazard: The Continuing World
(Now, if you've heard of both of these, THEN I'll be
impressed.)
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