Elas Bibat wrote:

Before the Age of Serenity:

    The heart crystal hovered, shining with a multi-colored light,
over the writhing form bound to the slab-like table.

    The light from the crystal were

lights

    But of all the figures in the room, the one bound on the table
would draw the most attention over the two siblings. It was vaguely
human in form, struggling to escape from the light. Limbs, tentacles
and pseudopods erupted from the dark form trying to attack the woman.

Since Endymoon was such a putz anyway. :)

    Where there was an unidentifiable mass of vaguely organic
features before, a woman's form was evident. A rather well-formed
woman's form

two 'form's close together. Perhaps 'well-endowed' would be more suitable.

 as evidenced by the shapely curves that seemed to go

on forever,

since they were in the form of a mobius loop.

curves that went up and down at exactly the right places,

and a face that seemed like an angel's framed by golden hair.

    Suddenly, Serenity plunged her hands and the heart crystal
deep in between the valley of the woman's breasts.

Whoa! Usagi's a lesbian here too? Donny must be rubbing off on you. :)

The woman's eyes

flashed open in an instant, revealing lovely blue eyes,

two 'eyes' close together. Perhaps the second 'revealing lovely pools of
azure' or something along those lines.

    "The Third Child has been created. From now on, she will be
called Venus. Take her to her designated quarters. I will come and
take care of her later."

Heh. Interesting way of creating powerful senshi. They do seem to be too
resiliant to be human at times.

    "I was lucky that our friends from Yuggoth managed to intercept
one of the Great Mother's Spawn when it was passing through the Rim."

    Endymion arched an eyebrow and gave her a meaningful look. "In
exchange for what?"

Usagi: Ticket so the next Sailor Starlights concert.

    "More likely they would like to plumb our non-linear thinking
patterns in the most throrough way possible," dead-panned Serenity.
"I have Klark-ashton, one of my acolytes helping out. He has already
managed to soulmeld several Earth cats with Mi-Go mind spores. I have
a few ideas for creating human bodies for them."

Heh. Cute as well.

    "Why not? If I use one of the buds and meld it with a ghola,
I could give us another Child. Actually, I have several other ideas for
other Children. Some Deep One half-breeds are seeking help for their
condition and water magic runs deep in Deep One blood, even those
diluted by human blood. Then there are the Sons of Fire. Eibon has
managed to capture one and I have a thought on melding it with a human.
All in all, I have the capability to double the number of Children
we have..."

    Endymion sighed as Serenity continued her explanations. He could
not blame his sister for seeking allies in the strangest places. In the
war that was to come, strength and power as long as they are on your
side was

power, as....side, was

all that was neccessary. He shuddered to contemplate what

their opponent's weapons would be.

Jigglypuffs, Tellytubbies, Barneys, and other unspeakable horrors.

    "Also, I am worried. They are not totally human. The possibility
that they may turn against us high."

Well, humans have a bad tendency to turn on humans as well. :P

    "Sister, you are either a genius or a madwoman.

Most of the former were also the latter. :)

Nice, somewhat mysterious work. enjoyed it.

D.B. Sommer


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