Heh, finally found some time to write up some replies to email.
DB Sommer wrote:
Ah, a DC fic. Sicne this is from the 'Plot? Don't worry, it will go away.'
man, I don't know what to expect:
Innocent virginal fun of course.
Ah, another fic I found for back when ffml was still down. A bit late,
but
here goes. For the squeamish, [Lime] tag may apply.
In your work? *Gasp* who'd a thunk it?
I know. Totally OOC of me, sorry.
And when is the next chapter of Lebian 1/2 due out?
Not sure exactly. It might be the next thing I work on since my current
idea seems to be taking shape to be along the lines of another one hour
fic.
Donny Cheng
A BLB production
BLB?
Blame Lara. Idea was 'borrowed' from her "A Saint Out of the Shadow" V-day
fic.
Okay, it was heavily stolen, sorry ^^;;
"Did you finish the diagnostics report?" Gendo asked, his voice
surprisingly steady and even despite his current physical exertion.
"This is hardly the time to ask that," Ritsuko gasped.
Hmm. With you I'm inclined to think this is teasing, but I wouldn't bet the
house on it.
They're fencing of course.
"Did. You. Finish?" Gendo asked again, louder and punctuating
every word with a thrust. His head was near hers now and she could
feel his breath against her neck.
"Y-yes," Ritsuko finally answered. She hadn't been planning on
giving it to him until she adjusted some of the results.
Too much innuendo. Must be something else.
Fencing.
Rather than
leave, she found herself being flipped over by him suddenly. She knew
what he wanted, but was not fast enough to get to her hands to avoid
the chafing. He never seemed to care if she was comfortable or not.
However, she found him motionless with his hand along her hip, and
found the time to push off the bed and onto all fours.
Very nicely done innuendo, I daresay.
Had very good help with these scenes, so can't take credit :P
She winced and her hands nearly gave way as Gendo swatted the
side of her buttock. She closed her eyes waiting for the next one and
was again surprised to find that it didn't come. Instead, his hand
remained where it had hit her, softly, almost teasingly. "It won't
happen again."
The hand delved lower, off the rise and swell of her ass,
'ass' is too coarse for what you've done so far. . 'bottom' would be a
better word
Okay.
He was admitting he was wrong? She snapped her mouth shut to
avoid the almost impish 'told you so' that was on the tip of her
tongue. Today was affecting her as much as it had affected Mo... the
Magi it seemed. She blamed the giddiness of the younger members of her
staff. Why, Maya's infectious joy almost caused her to crack a smile
when her assistant gave out chocolates to everyone, including her.
That it was a chocolate shaped as a dildo made her wonder, though.
That it came with batteries was even stranger.
She collapsed onto the bed, and a moment later he was finished.
However, instead of the usual sudden loss of him leaving her, she felt
him collapse atop her... but for only a moment. The reassuring hand on
her shoulder might have been him trying to find purchase. The tender
caress might have been his hand slipping on her sweat-soaked body. The
lingering touch might have been because he was tired. And the kiss....
Then he was gone, and she was strangely happy as she slept in her
comfortable exhaustion.
Hmm. Okay, it apparently was what it was supposed to be. You threw me there.
Nice prose. It flowed well, and I detected few grammar errors. Nice work.
I'm always open and honest about what's happening in my fics... eventually
:P Thanks for the commentary.
Time for another chapter of L 1/2. ^_^
Heh, just for you, I'll see what I can do.
D.B. Sommer