OK, here it is. It's probably OOC and everything else wrong with a fanfic.
LOL. Still if you like it, please tell me. Thanks.
Hidden Power: Part 1
By W0nderboy/SSJ4_cloud (They are the same person by the way.)
"Ranma No Baka!!!"
Ranma flew out into the sky and disappeared. Akane panted, tired from
the huge punch she had just delivered. Damn Ranma! He was such an idiot!
Why did she have to put up with his crap everyday. Everyday, the idiot made
her mad. And he enjoyed making her mad. Why did she have to put up with it?
Tears ran down her eyes. Why? Why? She had been feeling more tired
lately, but then again, she had been feeling more powerful. It was like a
curse. From what she had noticed, when she got angry, her power increased.
That meant, she put more power into her blows and Ranma would be in more
pain. Something she wouldn't mind, but afterwards, she would be out of
breath and would feel pain hitting her sometimes near the side of her stomach.
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Ranma landed in a nearby pond. Ranma-Chan stepped out of pond with her
hand on her ribs. More broken ribs. It hurt. He knew he deserved it.
Still, did that uncute tomboy have to hit him that hard? God, the pain was
worse then usual. It was like she had gained strength all of a sudden. It
could of been from her training, but it couldn't be possible. It would take
years to developed such strength, especially in that one punch. Her punches
were usually strong, he was used to them. This one was different. It was
like this one was not only stronger, but it was her not the punch. She was
so uncute!!!
"RANMA!!!!"
Ryoga. Why of all times he had to show up?
"Damn you!!!"
Ranma stepped sideways and stuck his foot out, thus tripping Ryoga and
sending him flying into pond. What an idiot. She reached into the pond and
pulled out P-Chan.
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"Increased Strength?"
It was now night. Both of them were back in male bodies. A fire had
been created for them to keep warm. Ranma nodded. "Yeah. I have this
feeling, that Akane's strength had increased. That's how I ended up farther
then usual. I thought you might know something about it." Ryoga shook his
head. "I never heard of it before, but I guess I need to see it myself."
Ranma nodded and took a sip of water from half a cocanut. If you follow me,
and DON'T get lost this time, I'm sure we can get back before breakfast. He
stood up.
"Is that all you care about Ranma, your STOMACH?" Ranma nodded. I don't
care what happens to that uncute tomboy. If you haven't guessed already, she
is why I'm here right now."
"Well I know you deserve it. But how? Was this why you mentioned
increased strength?" Ranma nodded. I'm going to sleep. We gotta get uip
early to make it back in time. I got school tomorrow. "Night."
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Ranma was fast asleep, but Ryoga had his mind elsewhere. Akane, poor
Akane. While in his travels, he heard a strange rumor. One about a creature
that one destoyed a whole town. Was Akane... He didn't want to think about
it. "Ranma, you're a real jerk sometimes, but I think Akane needs you more
then me. There nothing I can do." Ryoga stood up. Ranma was fast asleep.
"Good luck Ranma. You'll need it." Then he left to areas unknown.
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Akane was in massive pain. It had hit her earlier then expected this
time. Poor Kasumi was a nervous wreck. Worried that she might die. Akane
calmed her down, telling her that she would not die, she would be alright.
Still... Still she was nervous. What if it was something that couldn't be
cured. Kasumi had order her to bed, and was out getting some medicine.
Akane knew she had to stay awake until Kasumi got home with the medicine, but
her eyes drooped, and finally the girl fell asleep.
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Kasumi finally came in with the medicine. Noone but her knew that Akane was
sick. Her father go into panic, Nabiki would make out her will, and Mr.
Saotome... Well he would probably be eating bamboo. She was relived that
everyone was asleep or it had looked like. Ranma had not come back yet. He
would be back by now. She went into Akane's room and noticed she had fallen
asleep. Kasumi smiled. "Akane." She covered her up with a blanket. She was
about to get to bed, but she thought she saw some glowing. "It can't be...",
she thought. When she went over, there was nothing there. "Must of been
some fireflies." Then she went to her room.
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When Ranma woke up, he realized that it was the afternoon. He was late!
He dashed as fast as he could to the school.
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When Akane woke up, the pain was gone. She shrugged it off. She was
going to be late for school. After getting dressed, she ran down the stairs
to get breakfast. Darn that Ranma. Because of him, they were going to be
late again. "Hurry up Ranma, we are going to be late!" Kusumi turned to
Akane.
"Ranma isn't here. He hasn't returned yet."
Akane became upset just as Kasumi went upstairs. She began to glow.
"What to you expect from that...IDIOT!!! That.. Ouch!" She grabbed her hand
to her stomach. The pain had returned. "Akane, are you alright?", asked
Tendo. "Yeah dad, I'm fine." She smiled. She grabbed her lunch and ran off
before Kasumi saw her.
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"What's wrong with me?" While Akane ran (And hobbled) down the street,
she was thinking about what was going on. She decided to go to Doctor Tofu's
first. Maybe he could figure out what was wrong. There was still time
before school started.
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A figure watched Akane walk down the street while eating an apple. It was
her alright, there was no other person. He squeezed the apple into
applesauce with his hand. She was easy to find, now all he had to do was
eliminate her...
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And now the disclaimer. :) Ranma 1/2 was made by Rumiko Takahashi. Please
do not sue. You really won't being getting anything from me except bus
fare...
Hidden Power: Chapter 2
By W0nderboy/SSJ4_Cloud (They are still the same person by the way.)
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" means talking
<> Means anything seen inside it is a thought
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Editor's note. I changed the ending a bit. Like the last little part. Part
3 is coming soon!
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Part 1
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The pain worsened as what seemed like miles away before she got to
Tofu-San's. The pain finally became too much for Akane and she dropped on to
her knees, the pain worsening. She now regretted hiding this from Kasumi.
Now she was going to pay for it. She doubled over and collapsed on the
ground. Her vision was blurring. Not good. "I'm sorry Kasumi. I'm sorry
for lying to you Kasumi, please forgive me." A tear ran down her cheek.
"Please fo...give..." Then she passed out.
When Akane awakened, she found herself in a bed. "So this is what it's
like to die." But then she saw a familiar face hanging on the wall. Betty?
She looked at the skeleton. It was Betty, which meant... She had survived
But it looked like she was at a hospital. The pain had weakened a bit. She
looked around. No one was there. She gave a sigh of relief and fell asleep.
When Ranma finally got to town, he went back to the house. When he got
there he saw Nabiki setting on the steps. She looked depressed.
"When have you been?" She turned her head. "Everyone was looking for
you."
"Well I..."
"Well come on, we have to get to the hospital, I was waiting for you."
She went back into her depressed state. "Akane just fainted. Doctor Tofu
was able to help but.... Ranma?" Ranma was gone.
Akane felt the pains worsen, she wanted to crawl up and die and it looked
like she was going to. She closed her eyes and prepared to meet her fate.
Suddenly, she felt like she was being picked up. She couldn't open her eyes
much, but when she did she saw someone wearing overalls, a pair of sunglasses
and a read bandanna on his head. "It can't be..." Then Akane woke. She
clutched her fists. <"Captain Porkbun..."> Her state of thought was broken
by Dr. Tofu. "You're lucky. Somebody found you and brought you to me and I
brought you here. You had us worry." He smiled. Akane smiled. "You have
some visitors." Everyone came. Kasumi and Tendo to Kuno and Kodettchi, even
Shampoo and Uyko were here. Mouuse step forward. "We heard you were ill, so
all of ended our differences and came to see you Akane. He turned around.
"1,2,3..." Everyone shouted out, Get well Akane Tendo!!!" Akane was touched.
Trying to find Akane's room was like a maze. And he had brought these
flowers for her too. While trying yet again to follow the nurse's path, he
heard a doctor and a nurse talking. "Well the patent is fine, but did you
every see something like that before?"
"Yes doctor." She shook her head, I have heard of somebody else having
that on their body. What should we do?"
"We should leave him alone. It's none of our business."
Ranma went on his way, he wondered what they were talking about. In his
hurry, he ran into... "Hey Ryoga, are you to see Akane?"
"Akane's here? What happened?"
"Let me guess, you got lost."
"What happened?" He almost told Ryoga a huge fib, but he calmed down and
explained what he was told from Nabiki.
"And those flowers are a way of sucking up?"
"Hey shut up! That isn't important right now."
"I wish I had brought something. I can't see her like this." As Ryoga
began to leave, a janitor appear to mop. "Hey buddy, can I borrow that pail
of water? Thanks. Oh Ryoga...."
Akane looked around. Only three people were missing. Ryoga, Nabiki, and
Ranma. Ryoga was probably lost in Antartica ("No, wait", she thought, "He's
already been there before.") Nabiki was watching the house, or scamming
people. She knew that Nabiki really didn't give a damn about anyone but
herself. Then there was Ranma. Did he really care about her? No, he was
probably off goofing off or eating noodles. He had no real reason to come,
that jerk! He wasn't welcome here at all. Something shaped like a snake
moved in her bed. Akane gasped. No, it couldn't be! She grabbed it and
shoved it underneith her. "Is everything ok Akane?", asked Ukyo. "
What do you mean?"
"Well you were blushing, and I thought your temperture was rising. Well
anyways, Shampoo and I have something to talk to you about." Shampoo came
forward.
"We sorry we caused you any trouble."
"What Shampoo is saying is, until you recover Akane, we won't go after
Ranma. OK?"
<"Well they can have him for all I care. They mean well, so I guess I
should thank them.">
"Thank you."
"No problem, but remember, only until you are better." The nurse came
in. "Who are all you people? Only relatives are allowed in here.
Mouuse step forward. "For your infomation I am her uncle, and they...",
pointing to Shampoo and Ukyo, are her aunts."
"And the rest are relatives too?"
"We have a big family."
"Well anyways", said the nurse, "Visiting times are over so you all need
to leave, ok? She needs her rest."
After everyone left, the nurse frowned. Relitives her ass. She would
have to remember to have them all banned from the hospital grounds. She
opened the door and left.
Still no Ranma. He didn't come. Maybe he didn't her about her. Who was
she kidding, he would never show up. Suddenly she heard a female arguing
with the nurse. "You gotta let me in there. I need to see her, this is
important. The argument continued, this time the doctor was involved. "Ok,
I'll wait."
The doctor entered the room. "Um, there is another visitor for you."
Probably Nabiki. "Did she have short brown hair and say that she was my
sister?" The doctor looked surprised.
"Yes she did say she was your sister, but..."
"But?"
"She does not have brown hair and it is not..."
The door was kicked open, awaken a few people for sure. In stepped a
girl in a black dress and a covered hat that blocked her face.. "Oh my poor
sister. I came to see if you were alright." The doctor stared bugged-eyed
at the girl. The nurse asked, "Should we kick her out for you?"
"No that's ok, she can stay." As they left the girl asked for some tea.
They mumbled a bit as they left. Akane turned to the intrutor. "OK, who are
you and what do you want?" The nurse came in with the tea. Just as she was
about to put it down, the girl "tripped" on something and knocked the tea
over. It didn't hit the nurse, but it splashed all over the girl. The nurse
apoligized and said that they would bring something to clean off the dress.
As she left, the girl ask for more tea. "And some water please.", said
Akane. The nurse left mumbling some nasty words.
"Now look what you done. First you intrude into my room, then you spill
tea? You are such an idiot!" <Ranma... Why aren't you here to do that?>
"Geez, you'll always be that uncute tomboy, won't Akane?"
She knew that voice, it was muffled, but she knew it well.
"Ranma?"
Ranma pulled off the hat, then the dress revealing his usual clothes. "Sorry
I'm late, Akane. I found out from Nabiki, so I dashed out to here as fast as
possible. He hold out his arm and moved it around. Akane looked confused.
Suddenly, a bunch of flowers came out of his sleeve. He pulled it out and
gave them to Akane. "Oh Ranma..."
"I bet you think that's all, but I'm not done yet." He reached into his
shirt for a few seconds, and pulled out the little black pig.
"Oh P-Chan!" P-Chan ran up and snuggled up to her. "Where did you find
him?"
"He was just wandering around." Akane gave him a hard stare. "Well,
truthfully?"
"Yes. Truthfully." <This outta be good...>
"He was on your bed waiting for you."
"Really?" Ranma nodded. "Oh P-Chan..." She looked at Ranma. "Thank
you Ranma. I... I love this gift. It's the best thing I have ever recieved,
to see you and P-Chan not fight." <Well, I wouldn't exacally put it THAT
way.", thought Ranma> "You did get along, right?" Akane began to glow. "Of
course we did."
"Good." She stopped glowing then realized that P-Chan was scratching on
her bed. "What's wrong P-Chan?" She picked him up. "What's a matter."
Then it hit her. Had he seen it. No, he couldn't have. Ranma picked up
P-Chan and stuffed him into his shirt. "We better leave now." He grabbed
the dress and put it on. "I guess I have to sneak outta here as a boy."
Akane giggled. He put on the hat and just as he was about to leave, he ran
into the nurse again. The water remained in place, but the tea once again
spilt on the dress. Ranma dashed out before anything could happen. Akane
watched as the nurse shook her firsts as Akane's "sister" was heard running
down the hall with a bunch of swearing in the process. The nurse gave Akake
her water and at the same time, took a peek at the scrap tied to one of the
flowers. It said get well soon, love sis. AKA Linco. So her name was
Linco? Not many people went by that name. She did get a chance to see what
she looked underneith the hat. (But not when she left, because she had been
covering her face.) She looked like she gain alot of mustle when she left
though strange... She would be banned though, so it didn't really matter to
her. She heard the girl would be held for a few more days. The doctors said
that they found something interesting.
It was near midnight. Akane couldn't sleep. And she knew why. It was
what P-Chan saw earlier. She reached underneith her blanket, and check to
see if anyone was there. Noone was, good. She reached behind her and
grabbed something then pulled. It hurt, and she felt a bit parlized, but she
had to do it. Finally she heard a pop. She pulled it out and loked at it.
"You have been trouble for a long time, I should of gotten rid of you a long
time ago." She saw a trash can down below. She stuggld to get up and she
opened the window and dropped the item down towards it. Then she closed the
window and went back to her bed.
You can say truthfully, that interestings end up in garbage heaps, food,
electronics, even money. But when the garbage truck tossed the can in front
of the hospital into the trash truck they failed to see an interesting sight.
It looked like a tail, a monkey's tail, except, there was no monkeys around
here...
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Part 2
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A few days later Ranma was in the attic. Kasumi had remembered that
there was a recipe in there she thought would be perfect. She thought there
was no harm in sending him up there. "What are you doing?" Ranma turned
around with a pile of papers in his hands. Nabiki went over and grabbed them
from him. "This is none of your business! What are you looking at anyways?"
The papers were old drawings in crayon.
"What are they anyways?"
"They are really important papers."
"What? THESE??? Hahahaha!"
Nabiki frowned. "So are they yours?
"No, they're Akane's."
"..."
"And before you say anything, it looks like she was still very young when
she when she drew them." Defensively, she asked, "What did you see?"
"Nothin'. Just what was on those papers." Nabiki looked through them.
"Interesting. These are pictures of me and father and Kasumi and Akane and
mother..." A tear ran down her cheek as she went through each one. "Uh
Nabiki? <Better change the topic.> Who is this?" He point to a partally
covered picture which was a face of a person wearing pair of sunglasses and a
read bandanna on his head. Or it looked like it, and at the bottom it read...
"Captain PORKBUN!!!??? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!"
WHAM!!! "Ranma get a grip." Ranma rubbed his head. "Ok...Ok. Do you
happen to know who he is?"
"Akane used to have a great imagination."
"That doesn't tell us much."
"I'm saying, RANMA, that he might of been like... have you ever had a
imaginary friend when you were little?"
"Well um...HEY!"
"Jeez, I was just asking. We better get out of here. Oh yeah." She
went over to one of boxes and dug in there for a minute then walked over and
gave Ranma the piece of paper. Give this to Kasumi. She left Ranma in the
attic. Ranma looked at the paper, it was written in this strange language
that he couldn't at all understand, why would Kasumi want this. He dug
through the boxes trying find what Kasumi had asked for, then went down in
defeat. <Well, there's two hours wasted. Kasumi will be disappointed to
hear that I couldn't find it.> He went downstairs. When he got there he ran
into Kasumi. He told Kasumi that he couldn't find the recipe, then gave her
the scrap of paper. She studied it for a bit, then thanked him and asked him
to return it. She did not look disappointed at all. Ranma went up to the
attic, but instead of putting it back, he stuffed it in his pocket. He
wanted to do some research of his own.
Akane was out of the hospital the next day. They said it was her
appendex. She was greeted by everyone, well not everyone. Ranma was absent.
Ranma grumbled to himself. He had his teachers look at that paper.
Noone knew what it meant. Why was it at the Tendo home. He grabbed his
jacket and started to walk home.
A man was watching Ranma. He knew it was almost time.
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And now the disclaimer. :) Ranma 1/2 was made by Rumiko Takahashi. Please
do not sue. You really won't being getting anything from me except...Gee, I
guess nothing.
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