Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma] Daughter of Amazons: The Chase
From: "Leif Johnson" <leif_wj@yahoo.com>
Date: 6/29/2001, 9:36 PM
To: "Kit" <third_child@hotmail.com>, <ffml@anifics.com>

        His eyes shut tightly, trying to keep all of his
fathers words out, but it was useless. 'Women are week,'

## weak (Monday is a day of the week, weak is the opposite of strong)

        He looked up at the tent. 'No, he maybe a poor

## may be (Maybe Genma has a turnip for a brain. It may be because of a
breakthrough in genetic engineering.)

        With one last heavy sigh, he climbed into the tent
and his bedroll. He would have thanked the kami for it not
raining on them for the past few days, he hated the smell of
wet panda, but he figured with his luck, it would probably
just remind them.

## Heh.

        Something moved in their tent, and it wasn't the old
man. Carefully looking up, he saw two inverted mountains of
soft flesh.

## RANMA: My blaring alarm-clock days are over! Now THAT'S a way to wake
up!

        Jerking his eyes fully open, he felt a hand slam
against his mouth and the tip of a blade against his neck.

## Or maybe not.

Looking directly up, he found two soft brown eyes gazing
deeply into his own. 'She's cute,' he thought, then

## The first thing on his mind. Go figure.

remembered he was about to die. 'Okay, maybe cute isn't the
word.' The word 'tomboy' flashed through his mind.

## That'll be coming back, I can just tell...

        "Shush." The girl commanded. Ranma shook his head.

## "Shush," the girl

"Listen, not want kill you."
        'Great!' Ranma thought, 'I don't want to die!'

## RANMA: We're compatible!

        Ranma didn't need to be told a second time.
Absently, she hoped pop would be okay, but with the sound of
that girl chasing her, she was not about to turn around and
go check.

## During this exchange, until now, you've been referring to Ranma as
"he." Either one of the pronouns when Ranma is in his cursed form is
acceptable, but you have to stick with one.

        Shan Pu had been even more infuriated when Mir Or's
win hadn't been tossed out. With that ki attack, it was
obvious she was cheating. Using techniques that weren't
allowed to be taught to maidens. No one would admit to
teaching her though. They had even pointed out that it was
too rough to have been taught, that she had to have
developed it herself, therefore was legal in the tournament.
She had wanted to scream.
        All she had to do now was wait until she showed her
true colors, then the elders would listen.

## The main antagonist reveals her ugly, funny-colored head!
(figuratively speaking)

        He smirked to himself as he looked out across the
dark waters and star filled sky. Being able to see the stars
like this always made his troubles seem like they were far
away and insignificant. He took in a deep breath, tasting
the open sea-air. 'Kami-sama is in his home, all is right
with the world.'

## Hm.

        "Is clear night." A soft, almost musical voice
started him out of his revelry.

## Do'h!

        "Yea." He started, turning around. He suddenly found
his heart halfway up his throat, as the girl that was trying
to kill him stood between him and the rest of the boat.

## Now we see how well certain people's hold up to their promises...
Amazon Akane! Yah! Yah! I love it! I like the way the characters are
intertwined and related to each other (plot-wise). You've got a bitter,
but still loveable, Akane and a buncha enemies. Not to mention Cologne's
sneaky plans... Eagerly awaiting chapter 3. And don't apologize for
cliffhanger endings, they're the best method for retaining interest.

Leif Johnson

I have this strange aversion to extreme pain, okay?- Ranma Saotome
Now you see that evil will always triumph, because good is dumb.- Dark
Helmet



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