This looks like a very interesting start to this story.  I'm sorry I can't 
give you fuller C&C, but I'm stuck using evil webmail this summer and my time 
has been pretty short of late.  (In part because I'm running an online AMBER 
DRPG campaign in which the Love Hina cast plays an important role.  ^_^)  But 
I wanted to let you know someone did read and enjoy it (namely, me), although 
as far as I can tell, no one else gave you any feedback (I may have missed 
it).

I'm going to guess from the dreams that Suu-chan is actually from the Chaos 
side of things from her dreams, or at least has been there.

Anyway, good job, please write more :)

John Biles

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