On Thu, 25 Jan 2001 21:50:24 +0200 (EET) Esa Karjalainen
<eruuska@ratol.fi> writes:
Using a secondary mail...
Anyway, the bickering right after Ranma/Akane/Niku-men battle
seemed a bit too long, I'd suggest shortening it. Other than
that, this was of your usual (good) quality.
Actually, that bickering is more for me than the FFML. I needed
to get Ranma and Akane characterized in my head a bit, and didn't see the
need to cut any of it from the story.
Weird "canon" issues:
Spelling: Tiamat. She's female too, not that Ryoga would know it,
though. I guess you're going with more "Final Fantasy" approach, so
Yup, I'm using Final Fantasy, and other video game/anime lore,
more than actual D&D stuff, or fantasy book referenses. That's why I say
this isn't really a D&D crossover.
I won't bother you with the Tiamat/Bahamut legend. It's an
interesting
read, though, I suggest checking it out.
Really? Where?
Weird cannon issues:
155mm Howitzers are nice.
Yeah, but they're really loud.
Er, nevermind.
"Tomorrow sees undone what happens not today.
Indecision brings delays,
days lost lamenting lost days"
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Martial arts.
Enlightenment.