Okay, I will say it straight; I don't like the
way Akane is in this story. She doesn't harass Ranma
unless she has a reason to, and she freely admits to
herself that she has no chance against Ranma as early
as volume 11 of manga. To see her trying to beat
Ranma's new seemingly invincible technique just
because
he won't let her hit him is really OOC. And if there
is a reason for her to act this way, I sure didn't see
it in your fic.
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