As it is common knowledge Rumiko Takahashi's characters are entirely her own.
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Ranma stood silently in the Tendo Dojo, comtemplating whether or not everyone would show. He had invited all those who felt or had decided they had the right to marry him. He could really care less who showed because he knew that the one to whom he would finally reviel his heart would be there. "You may enter." he said in a simple mono-tone.
"Ranma..."
"Nice to see you Akane. Come in and make yourself comfortable."
Akane walked in, glancing left and right. There really wasn't much to see, besides Ramna. Ranma was dressed in what appeared to be his usual clothes but at a second look Akane noticed they were much nicer. His shirt almost glowed in the places where the sun hit it and his pants seemed to flow around him in the light breeze that floated through the door.
Ranma watched as Akane sat in the middle of the dojo facing him. >She really is kinda cute sometimes< he thought.
Ranma continued to wait, he knew that the others would be there. He had more than enough time but that wasn't a problem either. It didn't matter if he waited for every one to show up because he knew that the one to whom he would finally reviel his heart would be there.
Ranma glanced towards the door "Ra-...Ran-chan"
"Come on in and have a seat"
Ukyo walked in and sat uncomfortably next to Akane. >I wonder what Ranma meant when he said he had "made my final decision"?< Ukyo thought as she watched Ranma.
"Nihao, Arien!" Shampoo called as she bounded throught the door moment behinds Ukyo. "So you finally going tell everyone you pick me?!"
Ranma snorted."Now is not the time for games Xian Pu, if you would be so kind as to have a seat there next to Ukyo..."
Shampoo was taken by surprise when Ranma correctly pronounced her name, glancing around warily she sat next to Ukyo.
The three "formal" fiancees had arrived but Ranma felt that he should at least wait until the time was right before he said anything. Besides he knew that the one to whom he would finally reviel his heart would be there.
The "three" sat in an uncomfortable silence. But they all knew that Ranma had a good reason to bring them all here and decided it would be best to wait.
Slowly people started to filter in, but it wasn't just those who felt they had a "claim" to Ranma.
Genma and Soun showed up of course. They were expecting Akane to be chosen and had no doubts in "the fine boy".
The Kunos were there, Kodachi seated herself next to Shampoo who inspite of her warior upbringing inched away slightly. Tatewaki stood just outside the dojo deeming it infested by a "fowl sorcerer" but claimed that he would vanquish the "cur" if the reults were not favorable.
Ranma had not spoken a word to anyone since Shampoo had showed up. Many of those began to wonder why Ranma appeared to be so calm when they all knew that he could be causing alot of trouble with what he had to say today. Ranma knew there would be trouble, several people would be hurt and others were going to be confused. Yet he stood in the dojo calmly it didn't matter what happened he knew that the one to whom he would finally reviel his heart would be there.
Ranma glanced around the dojo one last time as he prepared to speak. "I am glad to see that all who recieved my letter showed up. I would also like to thank you for being patient, civilised, while you waited. As I said in my letter I have made my final decision. And by that I mean that I have decieded to whom I will formally propose to, after that I am no longer and eliglble bachelor. This means that anyone else who felt that they could claim me without my consent will have to settle in court with my lawyer. I am not joking, I amd not trying a new technique, this is real and this is final.
The dojo was utterly silent as Ranma steped towards the crowd. He reached behind his back and pulled out a small black box. Finding his beloved he bowed on one knee before her and opened the box.
"Will you marry me, Nabiki Tendo?"
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Well not too bad if i say so my self. C&C, Re:, MyST, and all other responses appreciated.
I don't know if I'll continue this, could be fun, could have already been done but...who cares!
Hope you enjoyed it.
Cyberdine