Ugh. Boy is my face red. Y'know. After reading this
thing, I really think I should have actually read what
I wrote. I feel like such a total moron with all my
typos and other assorted errors. Not to mention my
horrible grammar. Oh well, that's what the FFML is for
isn't it?
I wonder if I can C&C my own fic? No one's done it
before right?
Here I go.
-Many misspellings of "Principal"
-Switching from present tense to pst tense in
mid-sentence (I have no idea how I do that)
-There are places where I deleted words but forgot to
delete all of them.
Shin is just has a hungry look.
Should be "Shin just has a hungry look in his eyes."
I'm gonna stop now because I'm so embarassed with
myself. As well I should be though. I'll try to editi
my stuff before I post it. I'll at least spell-check
it (i use notepad which has no spelling checker).
Expect a typo free chapter three. Hey that rhymes!
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Ryo Muhoshida --- the perverted artist/writer of Fallout Studios. If you love me, you'll go to http://www.falloutstudios.cjb.net
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