It's got potential in my opinion, but I had a little suggestion to go along
with your idea.
Use the 'ol Ranma gets stuck in his cursed form for whatever reason bit, and
have this be Genma's idea to resolve the agreement without bringing shame to
himself and his son. He brings Ranma, now known as Kitsune and poses him,
now her, as Ranma's twin sister. I recommend Genma making up some elaborate
story about Ranma's death that makes him out to be the worlds greatest man.
somethin like saved a baby from a burning village and then single-handedly
defeats a mongrol hoard before dying at the hands of their general. Y'know
something unbelievably far-fetched like Genma would do. Of course Ranma was
opposed to this idea but finally went along with it anyway. Other
interesting factors include Ryoga's eternal seacrh for Ranma and instead of
finding him finding his "sister". Then you have Nadoka who Genma knows
should she ever visit she's gonna be creating alot of problems, I.E.
spilling the beans that Ranma doesn't have a twin, so you have Genma going
out of his way to satisfy his wife looking for her son and still keeping the
Tendo's in the dark. Then you have Shampoo, wanting to kill Kitsune since
Ranma can never turn back into a guy. And Kitsune's enrollment into Furikin
high and come up with a whole new set of reasons for Kuno to go nuts over
her. Of course you have the three different sisters and how there feelings
for Kitsune would be alot different then their feelings for Ranma. Like
Akane becomes real good friends with Kitsune and they have a growing bond.
Then have later on a cure for the curse arise which involves some bad-ass
fighter like maybe redoing the herb saga with the new twists or somethin,
and Ranma now has to decide wather she wants to become a guy and risk losing
her friend Akane forever, since Akane has opened up to her and this whole
time Kitsune has been lying really big about herself. Add all the mooshy
drama of Akane seeing Kitsune change and then dictating her reaction, does
she forgive since they had grown so close? Or does she kill! :) Yeah I know
theres a lot of cliche material in there but I think strung together as such
would make for a really great fic!
whoops! I guess that was a lil more than a 'little suggestion'. oh well, got
the wheels in my head turning, it was fun!
later
-Greg
From: "Fox The Wanderer" <fox1@colla.com>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Subject: [FFML] [RANMA] [ALTERNATE] [IDEA] [FREE] ? (Here Comes Kitsune)
Date: Wed, 3 Jan 2001 05:02:11 -0600
We see the usal scene with a red-haired girl and a panda walking down a
rainy street. But unlike usual the two aren't fighting. Skip ahead and you
see the usal scene at the Tendos. Start with Soun gets postcard and skip
ahead to Soun answers door and sees Panda. Now for some changes. The girl
gives the panda a thermos and it poors hot water over it's head becomming
Genma Saotome. Explanation of Jusenkyo curse. Nabiki points out that
"Ranma"
is a girl. Soun ask if "Ranma" has a curse to turn into a girl. She and
Genma appear sad. Finally she says that her name is Kitsune and she's not
cursed. She's Ranma's twin sister. Soun ask where Ranma is. She says that
Ranma will never be showing up. That they will never see him again. Soun
ask
what she means by that Ranma won't show up and what about Ranma marrying
one
of his daughters to unite the Schools. Kitsune says that is impossible ,
Ranma's dead. The Tendos appear shocked and ask what happned. They say that
it was one year ago when they were all three training and came accross a
bandit gang. They defeated most of the bandits. When they were leaving ,
bandit leader jumped out hiding and opened fire with a machine gun. Ranma
jumped in front of the two of them and knockd them to the ground. Ranma was
torn aparet by the bullets. Genma usewd the Kajin Raishen Dan to kill the
bandit leader.
Later when Soun ask what now Genma says that the promise was to unite the
two Schools and they can still do that by having one student be sensei to
the other. A match will be held to determine who gets to teach one school
to
the other one.
Well what do you think of this idea. Be sure to C&C me on this.
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