Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][R1/2][fanfic] A Midwinter Night's Gift
From: Steven Thesken
Date: 1/3/2001, 12:11 AM
To: DB Sommer
CC: ffml@fanfic.com





DB Sommer wrote:



How sweet. A QD side story. Probably should have mentioned that in the tag

long though.





Oops.  My bad...





Hi all,



This is a little Quantum Destinies Side-Story to (hopefully) tide you

over until I finish editing Chapter 15 for general release in a day or

two.  Chapter 16 is delayed a little until I finish another side-story

that leads into certain events in that chapter.



Just so long as you're working on it, man! :)





Slave driver...  :)





*** Earth  0.000,0.000



Kinnosuke Kashuoh watched the snow falling outside the window of his

room as he leaned against it, his breath fogging the glass for a moment

with each exhalation.  A discarded book of substantial thickness rested

on the desk immediately to his right, one of many textbooks from the

Imperial Academy.  He had been lost in the author's words for the past

few hours, studying his favorite subject matter,



Cheap porn?





Well, with someone like Kinnosuke, that is also a possibility.



propelling the Kashuoh Family to the forefront of the Minor Families of

the Empire's nobility.  As the majority stockholders in Genom, itself

arguably the largest provider of biotechnological marvels in the world

today, money and power had become their birthright.



Just so long as they don't invest heavily in Plaid leisure suits or

something.





Interesting notion.  Kinda scary too.





I



Kinnosuke possessed that hunger in abundance, but he chose to hide it

behind a quiet exterior, biding his time as he carefully planned out

his future path with meticulous detail.



Right down to when he went to the bathroom.





Kinnosuke: I leave nothing to chance!  Victory is is the details.





  He kept to himself at the

Academy, and he had no friends to speak of.



Kinno: They would be just dead weight anyway. Besides, most friends don't

like to lick your boots, which is a prerequisite when hanging around with

me.





Exactly.  You have a good grasp of his character in this story.







She was perfect for him.



Kinno: Now I shall laugh maniacally. WAHAHAHAHA!





Kodachi: I love a man who can laugh like that.







A Midwinter Night's Gift

A Quantum Destinies Side-Story

A Ranma 1/2 Fanfic

By Jurai Knight (sthesken@earthlink.net)





This story takes place before Chapter One of Quantum Destinies.  It is

a prologue of sorts, and a kind of Christmas story.



Oh I see. At least for Kinno, anyway, eh?





Yep.







Kinnosuke was not surprised, but he was disappointed.  The old man

rarely spent any time with him, leaving his only grandson's care to the

synthetic humanoids that made up the entirety of the manor's servants.



Only one? Hmm. Surprised there weren't any others. But I suppose sharing the

wealth with them would be unaccpetable to Kinno.





The Kashuoh Family has never been a prolific bunch.  There might be a cousin or

two though I could bring in.





Nana was the only mother he had ever known, his parents having both

died in some sort of accident when he was still an infant.



Oh. I see now.





Yep.







Entering the dining room, he hardly noticed the two servants bowing to

him.  He swept by them, two pretty young women of Nordic appearance,



Their Valkyrie helmets were the giveaway.





One reader compared them to Mihoshi clones, which is a chilling thought.  :)





their faces identical, even down to the vacuous smiles on their faces.

They were each dressed in a pale blue kimono, and their teal-colored

hair was worn up in a traditional hairstyle.  A bar code was tattooed

across the nape of each girl's neck, signifying their origins in one of

Genom's inception facilities.



My. my. They've been at this for a while, eh?





Oh, only aboyt 20+ years.  :)







Nana was another sort of Lilith, designed to function as a personal

bodyguard.  But many other types also existed, ranging from servants to

inhumanly attractive consorts for the wealthy and powerful.  Samaels

were more often sold to be personal bodyguards and soldiers, but Genom

also produced a few versions that could act as servants and companions.



Of course. Women of money  and influence would want their toys as well.





Kodachi: Hmmm.



Ranma: No.



Kodachi: But-



Ranma: No.



Kenseiko: They make wonderful gardeners, too.



Nodoka: Really?  Genma dearest, do you think we could afford one?



Genma: Err...



Soun: I could get one that looks just like my departed wife.



Nabiki: Daddy!  Don't you dare!



Ranma: This could get bizarre really quickly.







Nana watched her young charge out of the corner of her vision as she

quietly ate her dinner.  She could sense his disappointment, and it

saddened her.  Her ears flattened slightly, reflecting her mood, as she

took a bite of her dinner.



I'd change one of the 'her dinner' to 'her meal' or something just to break

things up.





I tend to repeat myself in my phrasing.







"You seem distracted, Nana," observed Kinnosuke between bites of food.

A hint of concern rested in his voice and glinted in his gaze.



"Pardon me, Kashuoh-san.  I fear I was lost in thought."



"You were smiling, so I guess they were happy memories."



Nana smiled more broadly, and then she said, "Yes, they were quite

happy ones."



Aww. How sweet.





When I first started writing this story, I thought Lilith's could also be used

as surrogate mothers.  Gives some new insight into the scene where Nana says she

first say Kinnosuke as a baby, eh?







"Your grandfather has instructed me to bring you to Genom," replied

Nana.  "There is a surprise for you tonight, a gift for you."



The catgirls, no doubt.





Like it was any sort of a surprise.  :)







Kinnosuke's driver, another replicant,



I do take it they have an unusually high amount of replicants because they

own the facility, yes?





Yes.  This is also why Kinnosuke is a little warped.









"We are to proceed to Laboratory Four, Kashuoh-san," said Nana as she

was removing her own coat.  Beneath it, she had changed her usual

household outfit to a rather paramilitary-looking armorcloth jumpsuit

in dark green, emblazoned on one shoulder with Genom's symbol.  It was

zipped up to her neck, but it hugged her body snugly.  A heavy pistol

rested in a holster, slung low on her hip.  She looked like any other

Puma-class replicant bodyguard.



Ready to kick ass and have sex on command. :)





Nana: By your command.   :)







A short walk brought them to the correct lab, and Kinnosuke repeated

the same procedure he had used to get into



Recommend changin to 'used to enter'



"Hurry it up, Grandson," said the wizened voice with a hint of dry

amusement.  "I'm not getting any younger while you stand in that open

doorway like a ninny."



Heh. Nice to see he has a sense of humor.





Picture a cross between Quincy and Happosai.  I know its a weird concept, but

its oddly fitting, isn't it?  :)







"About time you got here," wheezed Kado in a semblance of a chuckle.  A

twinkle appeared in his ancient eyes.  "I was thinking of keeping your

present for myself."  He studied the boy before him, feeling a surge of

pride run through his withered frame.  Kinnosuke was a handsome lad, a

tribute to genetic modification.  Kado laughed aloud for a few moments,

looking forward to the day he presented the boy to those fools now in

charge of the Empire's pathetic excuse for a eugenics project.  He

would show them humanity's future, the ultimate man.  All of the risks

he had undertaken, the deals he had entered into, and every one of the

many sacrifices he had made, would be worth it for that day.



And he's just a wee bit sociopathic. Not much of a problem, really, as long

as no one got in his way or told him 'No.'





Pretty much.  But when someone refuses him...







"They are my gift to you, my boy," said Kado with a smile.  "Your very

own personal servants and bodyguards,



and you can have sex with them whenever you want.





What teenaged boy wouldn't want that?  :)





 a trio of adolescent catgirls to

be your companions.  Of course, this is also an opportunity for Genom

to test out these three prototype models under field conditions.  Merry

Christmas, Grandson."  He tossed a small spraycan to Kinnosuke, which

the boy snagged out of midair with ease.  Then, after standing up from

the chair he had been seated in, he began hobbling towards the door.

Nana moved to assist the old man, feeling his hand quickly move to

fondle her rump as she did so.  He cackled lecherously as she smiled

affectionately at him.



He'll be dead from a heart attack in the middle of sex by the end of the

night. Mark my words. :)





Not this one.







At the door, Kado paused and looked backwards at Kinnosuke, saying,

"I'll leave you alone to get acquainted with your new pets now.  A

quick spray of the neurophage compound you're holding will prepare them

to imprint upon you as their new master."  He fondly patted Nana's

backside once more, even as his gaze roved over the rest of her body.

"Take your time."



Toldya so.





One reader compared the Kashuoh Family to Ferengi.  I rather like the notion.

Can you imagine what some of the Kashuoh Family Rules of Acquisition would be?

:)







                   ******************************



Kado led the Puma to a nearby room he had prepared for this special

occasion.  A comfortable chair sat before a bank of monitors, all of

which were currently blank.  He picked up a remote control unit and

activated them all, as well as starting up the recorders.  He wanted to

preserve every one of these moments for posterity.



Heh. Dirty old man. I hope I'm this fiesty at his age. :)





Me too.







Kado reached down and stroked Nana's hair affectionately, hearing her

respond with a faint purring.  The path that led to this moment had

been a risky one, but the future of the Kashuoh Family appeared bright.

Through Kado's efforts, a new era for humanity would soon be ushered

in, and Kinnosuke's three gifts were the doorway.



Oh? There's more to them than meets the eye?





Ranma: Whatever it is, it will only get me in trouble.











Sitting down at the console, he flipped a switch, activating a pump

that quickly began draining the amniotic suspension fluid from the tank

of the first catgirl.  For simplicity's sake, he had decided to name

each of them after their series designation.



Makes sense.





Yep.







Flipping another switch, Kinnosuke watched as warm water sluiced down

from a spray nozzle in the top of the tank, rinsing away the remnants

of the suspension fluid from the catgirl's body.  A quick check of the

monitors showed that her vitals were good, and her cerebral activity

was slowly rising up from sleep mode.  He walked the short distance to

the cylinder, watching as the seals parted with a faint puff of air,

and then the front portion slid forward a couple of centimeters and

down into the floor.  The can of neurophage in hand, he sprayed a dose

of it into her face, knowing that it would absorb into her bloodstream

directly through her skin.



However she screamed and clutched her eyes, as it turned out to be a can of

mace his grandfather had given him. It appeared the old man really was going

senile.





Heh.  Several readers made jokes like this.





Makes you wonder if a second dose of the stuff will recalibrate the girls to

a new master, though.





That was the idea.  Otherwise you could never sell one.









"Hello, Master," she said with a bright smile.  "I am a Genom Lynx,

serial number 0001-LX1-1, the prototype unit for this series.  I am

programmed to act as a bodyguard and personal companion, as well as to

provide security for any premises that I am stationed at.  How may I

serve you, Master?"



Kinno: Do the macarena.



Lynx: Sorry. We weren't programmed to be that silly.





Kinno: Curses!  Foiled again!







Kinnosuke repeated similar instructions to what he had told Tiger, and

watched for a moment as the dark-haired Lynx smiled and bowed before

hurrying to obey.  He then turned his attention to releasing the blonde

catgirl.  The procedure so far had been oddly fascinating, a high-tech

version of birth.



Hmm. True. Now that you mention it. Hadn't thought of it in that way.



Nice work and a good look at the girls and Kinno. I approve. Now get back to

work on the the main story of QD. :)



D.B. Sommer



Yeah, yeah...



Later all,

Steve











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