Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Ranma/Saber Marionette J][Lime]Strangers in a Strange Land: Chapter 14
From: "Kevin D. Hammel" <kevinsff@pacbell.net>
Date: 12/27/2000, 1:33 AM
To: Christopher J Olsen , ffml@fanfic.com

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From: "Christopher J Olsen" <GAMERS@prodigy.net>

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Subject: [FFML] [FFML][Ranma/Saber Marionette J][Lime]Strangers in a Strange

Land: Chapter 14





...



Just as he was resigning himself too not seeing any of the other

famous Marionettes a redheaded one walked in from the back.  <That must

be Bloodberry,> Chodo thought.  <Funny, I thought she was bigger then

that.  She's tiny.>



    "Yaa, yaa, Ranma.  Bread is here," Lime chanted, causing the

redheaded Marionette, who had been setting up tables, to glance up.  She

looked at Lime with a broad smile, and then switched her view to Chodo.



    Even from across the room, Chodo could see a film suddenly cover the

Marionettes eyes as her body went rigid.  "Uc, Uc, Uc," she stuttered.



Gods, what happened here? Did Ranma finally meet her mate? Was this

young man's resemblance to (Ukyou, one would guess) enough to

overcome the psyche's resistance to bond with a human? We shall

see.



And if Ranma DID, what about Akane? Mayy she have already bonded

to Ranma?



Or is this just a colossal red herring I went for?



It makes the talk between Ranma and Nabiki about Akane in the

last chapter very important.



    Lime looked at the small redhead in puzzlement, and asked.  "Ranma,

what's wrong?  Are you making a joke?  Is it a game?  Can I play?  I can

do it too.  See," Lime's body went rigid, and she started to stutter

out, "Uc, Uc, Uc," as well.



    Chodo was getting nervous.  Their was no other human in the

restaurant, and he had a sudden vision of him being accused of damaging

the, no doubt expensive, Marionette.  Nervously, he said, "I don't think

she's playing, I think she's jammed."



    "Jammed?"  Lime asked, turning to look at him.



    "Yea, jammed.  I use to have a mixer that did it all the time.  I

was always having to give it a good hit to get it going again."



    "I can do that!"  Lime said in excitement.



    "Wait, don't!!!"  Chodo yelled, but too late.  Lime delivered a

might blow to the back of the redhead, who went flying through the air,

and through a wall.



    Chodo beat a hasty retreat.



Interesting scene.



        *****************************



...



    "Akane?"  I don't think I've ever heard of an Akane.  Are you one of

those Gartland Marionettes?"



    "No, those are Panther and Lynx.  I'm a new one.  I was only built a

little while ago."  Akane flinched a bit at saying those words.  It was

still a hard concept to adjust to.



    "Well, I guess it had to happen.  I'm sure we'll be seeing more and

more of your type.  I'm rather looking forward to it.  I wouldn't mind

owning a sweet thing like you myself."



    Akane flinched again, harder.  If it was hard to think of herself as

a thing, it was even harder to hear herself referred to as something

that could be bought and sold.



However, she is.



She felt her temper flaring up, but

managed to control herself, barely.



...



"But you're one of those fancy Marionette's, why would your master



Marionettes



want you to take a job with us?"



...



    Akane turned just as a tall slim man stepped in the door.  She

blinked once, and stared, her eyes going wide in shock.  Her arm came

up, and her finger pointed at the man.  "Uc, Uc, Uc," she stammered.



    The man stopped and stared.  "Not again," he said.  He stepped over

and guided Akane out the door.  "Here you go, Sugar."  You go on home

now," he said, closing the door behind Akane.



Sugar?



    "What was that all about?" the man behind the counter asked.



    "Damned if I know," Chodo said with a shrug, "and I've got bread to

bake."  Stepping around the counter and back into the kitchen, he

slipped the large metal baker's peal he used for self-defense off his

back, and hung it on the wall.  Taking a second to make sure his long

brown hair was still secured in a ponytail, he then went to work getting

the next day's dough ready.



Ponytail?



An interesting situation.



        *********************



...



Nabiki took a deep breath.  "Well, lets start with the easy question

first.  Ranma got me up early to start training today... but a question

came up.  Just how exactly do we learn to do... physical things.  You

know, like martial arts.  Ranma explained that a human has to repeat a

move over and over, even after they're doing it perfectly, so that it

will be part of their muscle memory.  That way you can do that move

without having to really think about how to do it."



    Lorelei nodded.  "I understand the theory.  Marionettes can learn in

much the same way, especially Saber Marionettes.  You're nervous system

is very sophisticated.  It learns much the same way a human's does,

opening up certain pathways to work faster when they are used over and

over."



    Nabiki blinked.  "Well, Ranma will be happy to hear that.  She

wasn't quite sure if her training methods would work the way they're

supposed to."



    Lorelei nodded.  "Her training techniques should work fine."



Good.



She



tilted her head curiously.  "You said this was the easy question.  What

was the hard one?"



    Nabiki hesitated.  "Well... it's sort of complicated.  You see, last

night...."  After an embarrassed explanation, Nabiki shrugged.  "So...

can you help me figure out what's wrong?"



...



    Lorelei put a hand on Nabiki's wrist reasuringly.  "I'm sure we can



reassuringly I think.



...



Nabiki shook her head.  "If we do, then we do.  Lead the way,

Lorelei."



I am uncertain BUT of Lorelei rhymes with way, it's a cute line.



...



Lorelei hesitated.  "If you could collect data from a human female

to correct your current program... would that help?"



And the future of... never mind.



...



The older man stood up.  "I have nothing on my agenda more

interesting than what you have brought me.



Yeah, I'll just BET...



Quite frankly, I find this

problem fascinating.  The amount of useful data that we should be able

to obtain is more than worth my full attention."



    Nabiki rolled her eyes and muttered under her breath.  "I'd just bet

it is."



Oh... heh heh.



...



Nabiki sighed.  "Alright, if you insist on helping me, I doubt if I

can stop you."



True.



...



    Nabiki stepped in front of Lorelei to stop her pacing, putting her

hands on the willowy scientist's shoulders.  "Lorelei... calm down.

You're working yourself into a nervous breakdown.  Try to relax.  You

won't make a very good test subject if you're all tense."  Lorelei

nodded slowly and took several slow deliberate breaths, closing her eyes

tiredly.



    After several moments the longhaired woman opened her eyes, looking

calmer.  "Thank you, Nabiki."  Her brow knit slightly and she glanced

down at Nabiki's hands on her shoulders.  Nabiki followed her gaze and

her face flushed when she realized that she had been massaging Lorelei's

shoulders unconsciously, even going so far as to run her hands down her

chest a ways.  Both women blushed slightly, then simultaneously glanced

at Lorelei's bed.  Nabiki snatched her hands away with a gasp and

Lorelei took an involuntary step back.



    "Oh my."  Lorelei started at Nabiki with wide eyes, which slowly

narrowed in understanding as she watched Nabiki's obvious distress.  She

opened her mouth to reassure the suddenly emotional marionette, then

closed it.  Her eyes narrowed a bit more and she smirked very faintly

before concealing it.  "Oh my, Nabiki....  I had no idea....  Is that

why you want me to relax... here in my bedroom... with you?  Were you...

offering to 'relax' me?"



    Nabiki's eyes went wide.  "No!  No, you're misunderstanding me!  I

wasn't trying to...  I wasn't trying to get you into bed, really!  My

hands had a mind of their own!  I wasn't doing it on purpose...."



    Lorelei giggled.  "Now you know what it feels like when you tease

people, Nabiki."



Cute. Turnabout is fair play.



    Nabiki blinked dumbly.  "Huh?"



    Lorelei started laughing out-loud.  "Oh my... the look on your

face.  If you could only see it!"



...



"Lorelei!"  Baiko shouted as she came in.  "Are you alright?"  She

and Tamasaburo came closer, threateningly, but Lorelei was quick to wave

them off.



Oops.



Lorelei blushed and giggled at the same time.  "I'd be to

embarrassed to ask... but I suspect they might have misunderstood

slightly."  She had turned over in their struggle and looked up at

Nabiki's face.  "Nabiki, in the future, could you try to regulate your

strength better?  You started to hurt me a bit at the end there."



    Nabiki paled.  "Oh no...  Lorelei, I'm so sorry!"



    Lorelei shook her head.  "I'm fine.  You stopped as soon as I asked,

thank you."



    Nabiki sighed.  "I keep forgetting how strong I am in this body.

Are you really OK?"



This makes me think that Akane and Ranma are literally made for

each other.



...



Nabiki continued to work on her wordlessly, and Lorelei sighed

happily, almost purring in pleasure.  "Oh Nabiki, this is so wonderful.

Do you know how long it's been since anyone gave me a backrub this

good?"



    Nabiki smirked to herself.  "Three hundred years?"



    Lorelei groaned.  "Oh no!  That makes me sound so old!  I was only

twenty-four when I went into cold sleep.  It's only been four months or

so since I got out, so I'm not even twenty-five yet.  At least

physically."



    Nabiki laughed.  "I've got you beat there.  I'm over five hundred,

but this body is probably less than a month old."



Of course, Lorelei is 300, but not a day over 24.



    Lorelei smiled.  "So I'm being molested by a one-month old?"



    Nabiki pouted.  "Why?  Don't you WANT to be molested?"



...



    Lorelei sat up, covering herself self-consciously with her hands.

"I'm sorry... I...."



    Nabiki sighed.  "Aren't interested in me that way?  I understand

that, Lorelei, and I don't blame you.  I've been acting like a

nymphomaniac... and not only am I female, but I'm not even really a

human...."



And, it can be argued, not REALLY female either.



    Lorelei sighed back, shaking her head.  "Nabiki, would you please

stop feeling sorry for yourself?  I'm not completely closed to the idea

of you and being... being together.  We're just moving a little bit too

fast."



    Nabiki blinked and turned around.  "You're not?"



    Lorelei hesitated, blushing slightly at Nabiki's stare.  "No, I'm

not.  Intellectually, I find you quite attractive, and emotionally, I

feel a growing bond to you.  I really do care about you, you know.  As

for my... sexual preferences...  I'm starting to wonder.  I never

considered myself attracted to women especially, but being with you

feels comfortable.  I've never been able to... play like that with

anyone... not since I was a child.  It's nice... just...  I just need a

bit more time."



Now this is an interesting development.



    Nabiki smiled.  "I'm not going to push, Lorelei.  Besides, even if

you were ready, I'm not.  Talk about not being wired right, huh?"  She

sighed.  To tell you the truth, I think we have something in common

there.  Before all this, I wasn't attracted to girls... well, not

exactly, anyway.  When Ranma first came to live at our house, I think I

started to realize that I wasn't repulsed by the idea either.



After all, she DID let her fingers do the walking when she first

saw Ranma...



After a

while I realized that I feel pretty much the same about girls as I did

about guys.  If they were cute, I liked them... and if I liked them, I

could feel attracted to them.  I just hadn't been letting myself think

that way until after Ranma showed up."



    Lorelei raised an eyebrow.  "Nabiki... are you... are you in love

with Ranma?"



    Nabiki's eyes widened and she blushed.  "No!"  She shook her head.

"I knew that Ranma and Akane were meant for each other after a few

weeks... and by then it was too late for me to go after her myself.

Ranma and I were never meant to be."



    Nabiki looked at Lorelei strangely.  "I've never told anyone else

any of this, but I can't seem to keep anything from you anymore."  She

shrugged.  "If you want to know if I'm attracted to her...  I am.



Interesting.



I

won't lie to you about that.  I'm a hundred times more attracted to you

than anyone else I've ever known, though.  It's probably just my maiden

circuit... at least most of it.  But even if I wasn't bonded to you, I

think might still have been interested."



...



    Lorelei sighed.  "I am not settling for anything.  "  Otaru is not

available, even if I was interested in him."



    Nabiki frowned.  "I'm still you're second choice... if that."



your, not the contraction of you are.



    Lorelei sighed again.  "I don't think we're getting anywhere right

now."  She glanced around for her clothing, spotted her sweater on the

floor next to the bed and leaned over to get it.  "Listen, Nabiki."

Lorelei held the sweater in front of her while she found the sleeves.

"If you keep looking for reasons why we can't be together, I'm sure

you'll find them.  You could find reasons why any two people can't be

together if you look hard enough, but that doesn't mean anything.  I

want to try and make this work between us, and that means looking for

reasons why it will work, not why it won't."



...



Lorelei smiled in understanding.  "You've never been in love

before.  Trust me, it makes you crazy."  Lorelei pulled her sweater on

over her head and hopped down from her bed, looking around.  "Now where

did the rest of my clothes go?"



        End Chapter 14



Wow. I'm really curious about the Ranma 'Ukyou' thing, too...





Kevin D. Hammel



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