First of all, I'd just like to say that they were all pretty good. I enjoyed
reading them, and I found the premise of "Bad person shows the character how
much better off life would be without that character, but the character
chooses to go on living anyway."
But there's just one tiny little plot point I'd like to nit-pick: In the
movie "It's a Wonderful Life," when Clarence grants George Bailey's wish to
never have been born, George goes around and sees how much worse everything
would be without him. But unlike these fics, George's friends and family
could see, hear, and interact with him. They just didn't recognize or
remember him, and thought that he was a raving psychopath.
Otherwise, great work.
May you have a very merry holiday season, and a happy new year.