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I'll have to wait to comment on this when I actually receive
Chan Wei Lik's original reply. :)
NOTE to list members: I've been having some trouble over the
last week or so with posting, replying to, and receiving
FFML mail. If I have not responded to anyone who emailed me
or emailed the list on Hearts' Healing, please check with me
and see if I received it or not. As of now, I've responded
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Thanks,
D.F. Roeder
>-----Original Message-----
>From: ffml-bounce@fanfic.com
>[mailto:ffml-bounce@fanfic.com]On Behalf Of
>Chris Mattern
>Sent: Saturday, December 23, 2000 12:12 PM
>To: weimin@pl.jaring.my; ffml@fanfic.com
>Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/OAV Tenchi][Repost]
>Hearts' Healing 2, Part 1
>
>
>----- Original Message -----
>From: "Chan Wei Lik" <weimin@pl.jaring.my>
>To: "FFML (E-mail)" <ffml@fanfic.com>
>Sent: Saturday, December 23, 2000 09:10
>Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/OAV Tenchi][Repost]
>Hearts' Healing 2, Part 1
>
>
>> While the rest of this chapter is exceptional,
>the section where Ranma &
>> Tsunami talk feels like it could use some work.
>Shifting the responsibility
>> for the assimilation to Sasami was ok, but
>judging by her words you are
>> saying that Sasami forced Tsunami to do what
>she feared the most in the
>> first place?
>> Throughout the section you repeatedly mentioned
>how she was afraid of
>> merging, afraid of its consequences. Then BOOM
>she wanted it all along? It
>> just sounds wrong.
>> Tsunami has had years to think about what
>happened. I think her explaination
>> could have been better.
>>
>Well, I thought it was pretty understandable.
>Sasami was afraid that
>merging would distance her from Aeka and
>Ryouko--which it did. And
>merging was inevitable, unavoidable. The only
>thing she could think
>of that would make the merging bearable would be
>if she got Tenchi, who
>was, she felt, the one person who would continue
>to treat her as one
>of the family. And the only way to get Tenchi
>was to beat Aeka's and
>Ryouko's time by merging *right now*--a
>twelve-year-old girl was
>scarcely going to be able to stake a claim to Tenchi.
>
>And Sasami's fears about merging distancing her
>from Aeka and Ryouko
>were, to a certain extent, self-fulfilling, since
>grabbing Tenchi
>away from them would hardly endear her to them...
>
>Mr. Roeder has set up a interesting group of
>relationships, and the
>ones around the Ranma side are equally
>interesting. I'm looking
>forward to seeing how it plays out.
>
>
> Chris Mattern
>
>
>
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