Subject: [FFML] Quickiee reviews....Music Box Angel and Rainy Day Sunshine Girl
From: "Robyn, Duke of Amber" <seraphim@sentex.net>
Date: 12/21/2000, 10:41 PM
CC: ffml@fanfic.com



Both of these are of course by Mathew Jonston and good reads.

 MB Angel...I like this but it sufferes in my opinion with the thing

which all stories based on unfinished or up in the air works...it ends

them.

Mari and Marie create odd triangle which looks *almost* resolved in the

original series....except that the android created by obsession has moved

beyond that developed real emotions.

 I'll admit I hate anything where a story is resolved...somebody always

seems to miss out---but then again, that's life (and art)

 I esp like the scene in the cafe.



 

 It's a Rainy Day Sunshine Girl.

 Can you review something that's "in progress"?

 Sure....as long as there is enough to review and this one does, and it's

worth looking at.

 The story has a Video Girl Ai/Amg feelong...with a little bit of Touch

thrown in as well.

 I quite enjoy this as well but only have one concern. In the last

episode new characters seemed ot be popping up right and left...there is a

tendancy to lose control or interest when to many characters demand to

much screen time. Now it may be obvious...but maybe not...but.. Who is the

imaginary sister? I keep thinking she's the younger self of the love

interest...or maybe she's not...

 hmmm.

 Looking foreward to reading more.





Neil



 

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