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[snippee snippee]
I can't speak to "General Time Paradox" in specific, having not read
the earlier chapters carefully, but I have noticed in the past that
often with serialized stories, when the author thinks hesh is
creating "mystery & suspense" hesh is actually just confusing or
annoying the reader.
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It may be because I've been hanging around my computer too much but I had
this
image of Sailor Pluto standing in front of the Gates of Time and it suddenly
flashing
blue and her shaking her hand and flicking it off and on again to reboot.
Pluto is to a BSOD
as
Saturn is to a Dr. Watson
either way you know your in trouble
JML
AKA
John-Martin Lotz
johnl@tomatoweb.com