Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][SM crossover] A General Time Paradox - Chapter 2
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Date: 12/12/2000, 1:15 PM
To: rcarson@rcarson.com, ffml@fanfic.com

     Nor have you grown a giant drop of sweat on the back or side of

your head (I would imagine), nor do you pull out giant mallets from thin

air, nor do tic-tac-toe shaped veins pop out on your forehead, nor do

you become super-deformed or grow cat-ears or grow fangs or have a 

volcano

erupt from the top of your head or .... These are visual conventions

used in manga and anime, much as speed lines and light bulbs in 

thought

ballons may be used in American comic strips and cartoons,

True, true. These are practically impossible(not getting into quantum 

physics or debate about the nature of reality) things. Well, except

for face-faulting(toppling over because of surprise). Anyway, this kind

of(small) Anime, specifically, comedic mannerism *can* be learned, though

it's not exactly spontaneous... Getting back to the topic now...





and I'm

personally opposed to any use of them in a non-visual medium like

fanfiction. Instead, express the feelings or reactions that these

conventions symbolize the way you would in any story. If you're going to

pick out one or two, like sweatdropping or facefaulting, why not use

all the conventions? Aside from the fact that it would make a serious

story pretty silly, which is my objection.

True, but when not using these, a silly story becomes a whole lot

serious. Sweat-dropping, for an example, is often used as a reaction

to someone else doing something strange or embarrassing, but not

necessarily unexpected. A more "real-world" reaction might be, 

covering your face with your hands while mumbling "I don't know this guy"

or something like that.



Notably though, Anime characters tend to be more emotional and 

physically expressive than Real-world ones, and I do not wish this 

element to be lost, even when put into written form.



I am not, in general, in the favor of using short-cuts like "sweat-dropped"

or "face-faulted". However, I don't think they should be shunned just 

because people consider them to be 'unrealistic'. All four series, Slayers, 

Ranma 1/2, Tenchi Muyo and Sailor Moon *do*, after all, have their

comical elements.



There IS a problem there, though. In the anime and manga, all these 

visual elements make sense, and are, in general, quite amusing, so 

instead of using the "sight-gags" as shortcuts, perhaps a bit of descriptive

prosa might bring their original effect back to the story.



I think "An Awakening of Demons" is a good example of relatively serious

fiction, which still manages to express some of the visual comedy of it's 

original series. Maybe I should re-read that one, myself, to see how it's 

done.



*Sigh*

People these days, 

all they want is serious drama, dark things and depression.



Well, I think I'll manage, somehow.















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