Subject: [FFML] [ff][eva.scifi] NEGEV Ch 01: Wuss Boy/Zombie Girl (revised)
From: "E.L.Toh" <teloong@cwcom.net>
Date: 12/10/2000, 8:20 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

My thanks to Harold Ancell, Rocci Cirone, Glazius Falconar, Alain 

Gravel, Jerico Mele, D.B. Sommer, Long Tsun, Darth C Wader and 

Jonathan Wang for c&c.



NEON GENESIS EVANGELION was created by GAINAX.

Space Sci Fi influences from various sources.



NEGEV

Chapter 1: Wuss Boy/Zombie Girl

by E.L.Toh

contact: teloong@cwcom.net or toheel@singnet.com.sg

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A.D. 2118. Galactic core outer rim planet 'Reuben'

First Expeditionary Force



   Vice Admiral Jakob Van Heemskerck was grim as he relayed the news

to the ExFor Commander. The battle of control of this first planet was

going badly. "AJAX to ARIADNE. We've just lost the HECTOR." 



   "Acknowledged, AJAX," came the response from the command carrier,

"This is Admiral Bearn to Destroyer and Frigate Group 3. Fill the

breach and press on with the attack."



   "We're hitting it with everything we've got! N2 warheads and our

main guns are having no effect at all! Request..." The transmission

from the Group 2 lead destroyer PLUTO was abruptly cut off as a 

particle beam sweep across it and its two flanking ships. Their hulls

were torn apart as easily as tin foil, disgorging twisted wreckage and

orange flame.



   "ARIADNE to all main battle cruisers. Concentrate your forward

positron cannon fire on these coordinates! On my mark!"



   'Jean Bart Bearn is trying to break through the enemy's defensive

field with a coordinated burst of firepower,' thought Van Heemskerck

as his bridge crew linked their targetting computers to the flagship.

A hellish red nimbus of heavy energy built up in the front of each

surviving battle cruiser, including his own.



   "FIRE!"



   Nearly two dozen surviving battle cruisers simultaneously poured

forth their rage, the red beams streaking towards a single point. 



   The resulting collision of energies momentarily flooded the AJAX's

sensor arrays with white noise. As the interference cleared away, Van

Heemskerck's eyes widened in disbelief. 'This is impossible!'



   Their enemy was unscathed. 



   Van Heemskerck watched in horror was another particle beam shot 

right through the ARIADNE. The super-structure of the once proud 

flagship folded and fused like candle wax in a furnace before erupting

in a huge ball of fire.



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



Present time. A.D. 2124. The United Nations Defence Force spacedocks

in geo-synchronous orbit around Europa, the ice moon of the gas 

giant, Jupiter. 



   Milling around the docks were mining vessels and freighters. 

Mixed detachments of missile frigates, ungainly hammer-headed battle

cruisers and escort carriers held formation, awaiting the coordinates

of their next designated staging point.



   In contrast to the busy humdrum of the main spacedocks, the 

installation on the dark side of Ganymede was much more subdued.

Laser turrets and hunter-killer probes made sure that ordinary 

commercial and military traffic did not stray into the vicinity of

this classified shipyard.



   It was therefore more than a little unusual when a prowler dropped

out of warp just a few hundred klicks from the installation. Half a

dozen security and weapons systems immediately locked on the newcomer. 



   With a mental command, the pilot sent his clearance code which 

disengaged the defence systems. 



   As the fighter approached the installation, it became clear that

the shipyard was really a girder-like exo-skeleton encasing a massive

warship. It resembled an old style aircraft carrier without the 

conning tower. Part of the propulsion systems jutted out prominently 

from the stern in the form of massive triple barrels which were 

complemented by huge arch-like folds flanking the starboard and port,

extending their way to a third of the ship's length from the stern. 

He could easily see the ship's name which was spelt out prominently 

on its port bow.



   "Wussboy to NEGEV, permission to dock."



   There was a brief pause in the radio comms, interspersed by mild 

crackling from the background cosmic radiation.



   "Wussboy, this is NEGEV. MAGI will adjust your approach vector. 

Docking will be in the Seventh Cage."



   "Understood."



   With that, the prowler veered to the right, entering the command 

carrier via the opening double doors of a hangar within the port arch.



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   Shinji 'Wussboy' Ikari removed his helmet and stowed it in the 

cockpit before disembarking from the prowler. Hangar techs and DRDs 

had already started their maintenance runs on his fighter craft as he

threw a jacket over his skin-tight blue-white flight suit and made his

way towards the exit where there was someone waiting to receive him.



   "Lieutenant Commander Ikari Shinji, reporting for duty," he said,

saluting formally.



   "Welcome aboard," replied his superior officer as she returned the

salute, "and I see you're still as much of a tight-ass as ever!" 

Misato broke into a grin. 



   "Oh, come on, Shinji! 'Lieutenant Commander Ikari Shinji, reporting

for duty,'" she imitated in mock serious fashion, "Really! It's not

like we're complete strangers, you know. Still, it's great to see you

again!"



   Shinji rolled his eyes. "Well, I suppose it's good to see you too

... Hey, cut it out!" he protested as she mussed his hair.



   "Awwww..." pouted Misato, arms akimbo, "you're no fun. You know,

you used to be such a cute kid. Well, at least you're grown into

something quite yummy." 



   "And you haven't changed a bit," sighed Shinji, his expression 

between annoyance and amusement. "I can't believe someone as 

irresponsible as you was promoted to Commodore. With your very own 

command! High Command must have gone completely off their rockers!

Nice uniform though."



   "Congratulations accepted!" said Misato cheerfully, as she twirled

around once to give him the full benefit of her red jacket, black 

blouse and short red a-line skirt. Well, make that very short red a-

line skirt. "It's not reeeally my own command though. This is an 

Admiral's flagship after all. I'm more like the XO."



   "I thought the only XOing you do is from a cognac bottle."



   "Oh yeah, that reminds me! I've got to show you something really 

great! This baby may not be my command but I still got to do some 

really nifty modifications to the ship!" winked Misato.



   "Oh no," groaned Shinji, a hand over his face, "not some new 

private beer stash again..."



   "Nope! It's even better! Come on! Let me show it to you. Gotta 

see it to believe it!" Misato grabbed his arm and began to pull him 

down the corridor.



   "Hey! Let me go! I've got to..." 



   "Your girlfriend can wait! She's waited six months since you were 

assigned to a tour on deep space patrol! However... the wonder of the

universe that is Commodore Katsuragi's Onboard Microbrewery cannot!"



   "What about reporting to the Admiral?!" offered Shinji rather 

lamely, even to himself.



   "Your dad's in a meeting. Man, you must be desperate to get away 

if you want to use him as an excuse. Don't worry, the beer's good! I 

promise!"



   "Misato!"



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   Earth. A globe of blue interspersed with swirls of white and 

brown-green patches.



   Around the moon is a continuous metal ring of uneven proportions.

The Lunar Orbital Defence Ring.



   An asteroid hurtling towards Earth from the depths of space.



   A frantic volley of fire from the positron cannons on the LODR

impact against the asteroid, breaking it into several chunks before

those are, in their turn, reduced it to space dust.



   The holographic replay of these events fades.



Present: 

General Secretary, United Nations



United Nations Security Council Representatives for

North America

Central & South America

Europe 

North Africa & Middle East

Sub-Saharan Africa 

Central Asia, 

South Asia, 

East Asia & Oceania



Admiral of the Fleet, Fleet High Command

Assistant Chief of the United Nations General Staff, Planning

Assistant Chief of the United Nations General Staff, Intelligence

Assistant Chief of the United Nations General Staff, Operations

Assistant Chief of the United Nations General Staff, Logistics 

Commanding Officer, Planetary Defence 

Deputy Commanding Officer, NEGEV



Observer Status:

Committee for Planetary and Lunar Exploration (COMPLEX)



   "That was too close," remarked the monolith carrying the voice 

transmissions of the United Nations Security Council Representative

for North America.



   "There was no risk to Earth. We had land-based and Earth orbital

defence systems locked on this latest asteroid," said CO, Planetary 

Defence.



   "Even though our defences at Ursa Major, Proxima-Centauri and 

Jupiter intercepted most of the asteroids in this latest attack, that

one still managed through and come within several thousand kilometres

of our home world," noted UNSC Rep East Asia & Oceania.



   "We may not be so fortunate next time! If there is a concerted 

strike against us, an even larger swarm of these asteroids could 

overwhelm the defences. If even one got through, we could have a 

repeat of the Second Impact of 25 years ago!" protested UNSC Rep 

North Africa & Middle East.



   "We should strike at the source of the problem and eliminate it 

once and for all," stated UNSC Rep Central Asia.



   "No one can fault that logic. But although the Committee for 

Planetary and Lunar Exploration has managed to narrow down the star 

systems in the galatic core that have been the source of the

asteriods, the total loss of our First Expeditionary Force - dozens

of capital ships and tens of thousands of personnel - represents a

serious setback to our efforts," opined ACUNGS, Planning.



   "If that wasn't bad enough, there are strange and powerful 

entities guarding the key planets that bar our route into the 

galatic core. These 'Angels', as designated by COMPLEX, are unlike

any foe we faced before. If these entities were to venture out of 

the galatic core, the results could be devastating for us!" noted 

UNSC Rep Central & South America hotly.



   "Which is why COMPLEX and UN Fleet High Command have been working

on NEGEV," said ACUNGS, Operations. "Vice Admiral Fuyutsuki will 

explain the proposed strategy."



   Star charts and schematics began feeding through to the other 

members of the meeting.



   "The NEGEV is the largest command carrier ever built, over 1,600

metres long and laid down according to the Amagi class aspect ratio.

It is able to operate without support ships as it incorporates

features of a warship, research vessel, production facility and so 

on. Ideal for deep space missions, the NEGEV will reconnoitre and

clear the way - enabling the spearhead elements of the Second 

Expeditionary Force to secure lines of communication for the main 

fleet. We expect Project E will provide the solution to our Angel

problem..."



   "We expect a white elephant, built to satisfy the megolomania of

Ikari Gendou, to be able to face an enemy that decimated an entire

fleet of our finest ships?!" interrupted UNSC Rep South Asia.



   'Damned Gendou always sticks me the most tedious tasks,' groaned

Fuyutsuki mentally. Taking a deep breath, he then drew on his 

scientific expertise to fend off the opposing arguments. And failing

that, to browbeat his opponents into submission with obtuse technical

jargon and sheer obfuscatory long-windedness.



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   "Have you heard about the pilot that just transferred in, sempai?" 

asked Maya as she looked up from the vast array of engine room 

instrumentation before her.



   "You mean Shinji?" responded Ritsuko who was keying code into 

Melchior at lightning speed. With one hand. The sound of her 

keystrokes were almost musical, set against the soft constant hum of

the air scrubbers in the ventalilation system.



   "Yes, that's right. He and Commodore Katsuragi seem to know each

other really well. Do you think they're...? Well, not that there is

anything wrong, in principle, with someone older seeing someone much

younger," winked Maya with her last comment.



   "Haha," laughed Ritsuko dryly as she continued to type, "it's not 

like that at all, Maya dear. Misato was his mentor and guardian at 

the Academy since his early teens. You could say she's like a big 

sister to him."



   "Oh, I see. I didn't notice that in his file," nodded Maya.



   "And now that he's here onboard, you won't have to chance to

harrass you-know-who." Klak-klah-klak-klak-klak.



   "Hey! I do not harrass!" protestd Maya. "And besides, who cares 

about her? You're the only one for me, sempai!"



   "Yeah right," snorted Ritsuko, "now, let me see, what were those 

fusion reactor calibrations again?"



   "But you are! My heart belongs to you and you alone!" declared 

Maya as she glomped onto Ritsuko's arm.



   "Just keep that in mind the next time another skirt crosses your 

path," harumped Ritsuko who finally gave pause to her keying in of 

commands. Brushing a stray lock of blonde hair aside, she reached for

a ready mug of coffee, fresh from her own customised Cup'o'matic.



   "Oh sempai, you're not being fair! I..." Maya's voice trailed off 

as she blinked once in surprise. Then, slowly, she shifted her gaze to

the instrumentation around the two science officers.



   Ritsuko's visage scrunched up into the sourest of grimaces as she

took a sip of her coffee. 'Uugh, this tastes more like toothpaste.'



   "Sem-pai..." Maya enunciated the honorfic slowly with just a dash

of nervousness creeping in.



   "What is it now, Maya?" asked Ritsuko absent-mindedly as she 

began to disassemble the coffee machine while muttering to herself

about configuring the damned thing right this time and why it was

important to humour Maya by allowing her assistant to address her

by that honorific.



   "Sempai, I think we have a problem," said Maya who was sporting

a huge sweatdrop.



   "Hmmm? Oh, that. Don't worry about it. My little tweak to 

Mother's algorithms will give the propulsion systems a 2.5% boost

in efficiency! All those red lights, dials and indicators should 

return to normal riiight aaabout... now."



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   Shinji threw his arms against the right bulkhead of the corridor

for support as the whole ship suddenly seemed to spasm violently. All

the lights went blacked out for a second. And with the return of

illumination, came the sound of alarm klaxons. 



   "What the..." 



   And then from absolute chaos, it reverted to 'A-O-Kay' before he 

could even complete his thought.

   

   "..."



   Shinji shrugged and continued along his way. After a lot of 

trekking around the expansive interior of the command carrier,

he finally found himself at his desired destination.



   Entering the holodeck, he noted that the simulation portrayed the

setting as a large hall filled with pillars that were spaced widely 

apart. Illumination was provided by occassional circles of light

beamed down from an unseen ceiling far above, creating intermittent

areas of deep shadow. A low mist crept around the floor - just to

add to the atmosphere. 



   'Hmm. An armed melee combat training scenario,' thought Shinji.

"MAGI, load Wussboy melee weapon beta."



   He gripped cold steel as a glaive appeared in his hand. He hefted

the broadsword and, satisfied with its weight and balance, swept it

in a wide motion from his shoulder to his waist. Poised with the tip 

of the blade pointing at the ground, Shinji awaited the attack.



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   "The activitation of Unit Zero was successful. A satisfactory

synchronization ratio was achieved by Zombie when Unit Zero was

assimiliated with a prowler and then later, a combat mech," reported 

Admiral Gendou Ikari, hands steepled just under his nose, as he

addressed the single monolith before him.



   "And what of Unit One?" asked Lorenz Kihl, his holographic image 

towering over Gendou's seated figure.



   "I have been informed that the pilot and his prowler has just 

arrived. We should commence the preliminary trials in a few hours

time."



   "From the reports, I've gathered that this pilot, call-sign

'Wussboy'..." Kihl paused momentarily.



   'I'm sure that stupid boy must have deliberately chosen that 

call-sign so that he could find a new way to embarrass me.' Unbidden,

this thought surfaced in Gendou's mind for the umpteenth time over

the past few years.



   "... this pilot," resumed Kihl, "is your own son. Aside from the

suspicion that you're packing the crew of NEGEV with your relatives,

and former colleagues, he has got quite a disciplinary record. Three

counts of insubordination. Among other things."



   "We have been through this before. And you've seen all the test

reports," said Gendou flatly.



   "Yes. But it still remains to be seen whether the selected pilots

or EVA Units will prove their worth in combat," noted Kihl gravely.



   "And for the Units to be operationally ready for combat, we will 

need the Dreieinigkeit Combine's S2 engines. The limits of battery 

technology mean that, at present, EVA Units Zero and One cannot 

function for more than fifteen minutes at a time without an external

power source. Umblical cables are fine for experiments but are barely

acceptable even for limited land operations."



   "I am well aware of that," replied Kihl, "the Combine is in the

final phase of its testing of the S2 engine production model in

concert with EVA Unit 02 at the Ursa Minor facility. My question to 

you is whether you can keep continue to keep the plebians on the 

Security Council at bay without our intervention."



   "I am sure you and I both have supreme confidence in Fuyutsuki's

ability to defend Project E," said Gendou whose lips curled into a 

smirk, hidden by his hands. "You yourself insisted on bringing him 

onboard. I have secured the qualified support of East Asia & Oceania,

Europe and North America. Besides, ours is the only weapon that can

defeat the Host."



   "Indeed," said Kihl as he acknowledged Gendou's points. "And to

ensure that we stay within the schedule, NEGEV should launch and then

proceed to rendevous at Ursa Minor in 72 Earth Standard Hours. There,

you will take the S2 engines, Unit Two and Valkyrie onboard."



   "That is acceptable."



   "Ikari, you and I both know that what is at stake here. We cannot 

fail." With that, Kihl's monolith vanished.



   Gendou remained seated, motionless, amidst the darkness and his

own thoughts.



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   Shinji whirled around just in time to parry a blow aimed at his

neck. He barely had time to recover from the force of that strike. Or

even to register the physical presence of his assailant - save for the

flash of two blood red orbs - before she retreated, with a backwards 

leap, into the shadow and mist.



   Gripping the glaive with both hands, he held it before him in a

guard position. He was starting to have to take deep breaths but 

hadn't broken into a serious sweat. Yet.



   Suddenly his six senses screamed at him. Right! Right! He spun 

towards that direction, swinging his sword to counter the rain of

thrusts and slashes that emerge from a humanoid-shaped blur of white.

His opponent pressed with her attack, making this the most sustained

encounter of the duel thus far.



   Shinji smiled to himself as he recognised the weapon she was using 

 - an extremely wicked sword favoured by the Ancient Egyptians. They

used the hooked end of the blade to puncture the shields, armour,

helmets and, subsequently, various body parts of their enemies. Then

he saw an opening. 



   His attempt to exploit it was countered at the last minute by that

hooked sword. Now with swords crossed at about shoulder level, he 

could just make out her person. Even so, it still shimmered and swayed

like a distant mirage. Shinji grunted and pushed forward with all his

strength, hoping to throw his opponent off balance.



   She had other ideas. With a subtle shift in her weight and a deft

twist of her weapon, Shinji found that not only was his glaive pried

from his grip and was taking a trip into the far reaches of the hall,

one way, he also realised he was over-extended and off-balance. In

other words, he was going to land flat on his face.



   Until an arm intercepted his waist on its way down and set him

back on his feet. As that left arm moved to encircle his back, the

right found its way around his shoulders as the Egyptian blade 

clattered onto the floor. A head of light blue hair nestled against

his left shoulder and Shinji found himself overwhelmed by a flood of

sensory and emotional signals. The fragrance of her hair, the warmth

of her body through her (snugly fitting) white flight suit, the 

sensation of her nuzzling his neck. He embraced her tightly for a few

long moments. Brushing back a stray lock of hair from her forehead, 

he gently stroked her chin and then lifted her face towards his. 



   "I missed you," she said quietly, those strange red eyes speaking

of wistful longing. Her right eye was framed, above the eye brow and

edge of her temple, by a metallic rim complete with tiny ports and

indicators.



   "I missed you too, Rei. It's been six months. Six months too long,"

sighed Shinji.



   Rei cocked her head slightly to one side. "Your swordsmanship has

slipped."



   "Well, it's a bit difficult to train when you're stuck in a 

cockpit. The result of Dad kicking me onto the deep space patrol

shift. By the way, I see you've been training hard on your cloaking

technique. Nice work," smiled Shinji.



   "You could still sense me," pointed out Rei who nonetheless blushed

slightly at his praise.



   "Only just barely. I..." 



   "Lieutenant Commander Ikari, come in please," announced the 

communicator, on the wrist of his flight suit, which had come online.

Shinji shrugged in vague annoyance.



   "This is Shinji. What's up?"

   

   "Please report to the Third Cage immediately," declared the 

disembodied female voice. While the request was worded strongly and

officiously, the tone of its delivery was surprisingly meek.



   "Acknowledged. On my way," stated Shinji as the transmission

was terminated. 



   "Anything on right now, Rei?"



   "Just this flight suit," she said with a completely straight face.



   "..." Shinji scratched his head and chuckled to himself. Despite

having a strong and long-standing relationship with her as well as

his ESP ability, sometimes he still couldn't tell if Rei was joking

or not. 



   "Come on," he said, taking her hand, "let's go for a walk."



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   "Excuse me, just *WHAT* are you doing to *MY* prowler?!" demanded

Shinji.



   Maya straightened her hair after Shinji's verbal onslaught. "Well,

what we did was to remove the old command module from your long range,

deep space fighter and replace it with a core and plug that forms the

nexus of EVA Unit One."



   "It looks disgusting!" protested Shinji, pointing at the outgrowths

from the new cockpit that had spread throughout the body of the 

prowler. They looked like a cross between varicose veins and tree

roots. A gnarled and bulbous cable snaked its way from underneath 

the Unit to a power source in the hangar.



   "That can't be helped. The EVA Units have a substantial biological

component that we can't completely modify to suit all of our tastes."



   "And what are these EVA Units anyway?" asked Shinji, still rather

distressed at the changes to his pride, joy and penis extension. Rei

patted him on the back lightly in an effort to comfort him.



   "Well, it's hard to explain simply," began Maya, "these Units are

designed to, theoretically, counter the protection of the targets of

the coming operation. They're designed to be transferable between 

existing UNDF weaponry, most importantly the deep space prowler and

the combat mecha, as it is anticipated that they will be deployed in

ground, atmospheric and space operations. This also allows for 

combined arms deployment as well." Her fingers were crossed behind 

her back.



   Shinji frowned at the number of caveats, explicit as well as 

implied that he heard in Maya's explanation. Unusually, he couldn't

sense if she was telling the truth. "This is part of Project E, isn't

it? The plan to penetrate the galactic core. This is my father's 

work."



   "Correct," boomed the voice of Admiral Gendou Ikari as he looked

down on all of them from the observation deck, high above. Drawn up

to his full height, his posture nonetheless indicated his sense of

ease. He was framed in the light from the deck's ceiling illumination,

casting most of his features in some shadow but not enough to 

completely obscure his slightly mysterious but definitely smug and

all-knowing smirk. "It's been a while."



   "Hi, Dad," Shinji responded without much enthusiasm as he winced

internally. 'He can be *such* a drama queen.'



   "You have been designated as the pilot and operator of EVA Unit 

One. The activation test will commence shortly. Doctors Akagi and 

Ibuki will oversee the experiment." The smirk had faded, replaced

with an icy, professional air.



   "Yeah, I'm fine, thanks for asking. Oh, by the way, I like the

beard."



   Gendou's non-response was to turn around and walk out of sight.



   "Alright,we're ready to start the experiment. Please enter the 

Unit now, like you would a normal cockpit," announced Ritsuko from

the control room of the hangar.



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



    'Oh marvellous,' thought Shinji sarcastically as the entry plug of

the EVA Unit filled with a viscous orange fluid. 'Well, at least the

controls are pretty similar to my prowler specs.'



   "So how do you feel, Shinji?" asked Ritsuko as a holo-screen of

the faux blonde scientist appeared before him.



   "Like I'm being prepped for cyro or stasis," replied Shinji, who

swallowed some fluid in the process.



   "Don't be such a baby, Shin-chan," said Misato as her image

appeared next to Ritsuko's. "Rei had to spend a lot more time in an

entry plug for the development of the prototype."



   "That was just an observation, not a complaint, Misasto-san," noted

Shinji, "so what am I supposed to do in this test?"



   "For starters, we've started taking readings of your synch ratio,

that is, how responsive the EVA Unit will be to your mental commands,

very much on the same principle as your original prowler, except this

is more biological than mechanical, and it's much more sophisticated.

Right now, you're doing very well, over 60% on your first try. You

might like to know that the LCL, besides supplying you with oxygen and

other goodies, helps reduce any interference between you and the EVA.

I'm trying mint flavour this week. So what do you think?"



   "Errr... it kind of tastes more like coffee," came Shinji's 

slightly hesistant reply.



   A light bulb lit up figuratively over Ritsuko's head as she slapped

her right fist over her left palm in a 'Oh I get it now!' fashion and

her holo-image vanished abruptly.



   "Ritsuko, just *what* are you doing, wandering off like that?!" 

asked Misato, an eyebrow twitching.



   "Sorry," said Ritsuko, who had the good graces to look a little

embarrassed, as her image reappeared but this time she was carrying

her coffee machine, "I just realised something."



   "Oh man," sighed Misato, "don't you ever learn? Remember the

last time you got distracted and resulted in Rei's little accident?"

 

   "What happened to Rei?!" demanded Shinji, by now, rather anxious.

"No one told me she was injured!"



   "Oh, don't worry, kiddo," purred Misato reassuringly, "our great

scientist-engineer-doctor-rolled-in-one accidentally tapped into my

micro-brewery together with the LCL plant. Rei drank quite a few pints

before anyone realised what was wrong."



   "I never realised just how many bawdy drinking songs Rei knew!"

chipped in Maya.



   "Needless to say, Rei got a little tipsy and she totally trashed 

the hangar when she stumbled around with her combat mech," said

Misato.



   "Okay. Okay, rub it in, alright?" grumbled Ritsuko as her hands

absently fiddled with the Cup'O'Matic.



               -NE-              -G-              -EV-



   'I still can't get to sleep,' thought Shinji as he stared at the

ceiling, 'must be Ritsuko's coffee-spiked LCL.'



   'Well, this sure beats deep space patrol. Even if this outfit is

run by a total jerk who happens to my Dad. The XO is a lush and the

Chief Science, Engineering and Medical Officer is a scatterbrain but

they've both got their hearts in the right places. But most important

of all...'



   "What are you thinking about?" asked Rei quietly, her head resting

on his shoulder, her red eyes softly curious.



   "Sorry Rei, did I wake you?"



   "No," she replied and continued to gaze at him expectantly.



   "I was just thinking about how happy I am to be with you again."



   Rei smiled faintly while snuggling closer to Shinji.



   And sleep eventually stole over them.



      

APPENDIX A: International Law in Space



   International law in space had traditionally been governed by

the under-mentioned conventions, as agreed by the superpowers with

space programs at the time:



1967 UN Treaty on Principles Governing the Activities of States in

the Exploration and Use of Outer Space, Including the Moon and Other

Celestial Bodies (henceforth the 1967 Outer Space Treaty);



1979 UN Agreement Governing the Activities of States on the Moon and

Other Celestial Bodies (henceforth the 1979 Moon Agreement);



   The key aims of these agreements was firstly, to declare outer

space to be the part of the common heritage of all mankind - i.e.

no state was allowed to exert sovereignty over any part of outer

space, the moon or other celestial bodies. A corollory of this was

that the exploration and use of outer space was, in principle,

supposed to benefit all human nations and not simply those with the

capacity to do so.



   The second key aim was to prevent the militarisation of space

with explicit guarantees that it was forbidden to test or deploy

weapons in outer space. This was agreed upon by all parties as a

means to limit the spiralling costs of maintaining offensive and

defensive capacities.



   However, due to technological and political changes, pressure to

reform the legal regime in space finally coalesced in the form of 

the two under-mentioned treaties: 



2079 UN Treaty on Principles Governing the Activities of Commercial

and Corporate Entities in the Exploration and Use of Outer Space,

Including the Moon and Other Celestial Bodies (henceforth the 2079

Corporate Space Treaty);

	

2100 UN Treaty Establishing the United Nations Defence Force - Fourth

Protocol for Establishing a Fleet High Command for the Defence of 

Outer Space, Including the Moon and Other Celestial Bodies (henceforth

the 2100 Fifth Protocol);



   The principle of outer space as the common heritage and province

of all mankind was abandoned in all but name as territoriality and

sovereignty crept into the picture. The technological capacity to

exploit mineral and other resources in the planets and asteroids of

our solar system (mainly due to the discovery of warp speed travel)

meant that commercial activity in space needed to be regulated.

A system of auctioning various surveying and mining rights to 

corporate entities was developed. These entities, which were often

had governments as shareholders, then had legal personality in the

national courts of the state where they were incorporated. The 2079

Corporate Space Treaty merely codified what had, by that time, become

accepted if haphazard practice.



   The formation of a Fleet High Command for outer space (alongside

the Army, Navy, Air Force and General Staff arms of the international

and supranational United Nations Defence Force) marked the decisive 

end of space as non-military - although one must acknowledge the 

presence of armed para-military units formed by governments and 

corporations to enforce a semblence of order in the colonies and 

space stations. The new Fleet and its Space Marines Corp was deployed

to put an end to the massive outbreak of piracy and insurrections in

the outer star systems, percipitated by the temporary collapse of 

authority in the wake of the Second Impact. The last major holdout

against recentralisation was only reclaimed as recently as 2117 with

the fall of Proxima-3 in the Alpha-Centauri system to UNDF forces.



   The most significant development has been the Second Impact when

Antarctica was struck by a huge asteroid. The Earth was knocked off

its axis. The immediate blast, followed by widespread flooding and 

famine wiped out nearly half the human population. Various regional

and world powers were able to organise relief and recovery through

inter-state, inter-regional and international cooperation. The final

result was the reorganization of the world according to regional 

blocs - North America, Central & South America, Europe, North Africa

& Middle East, Sub-Saharan Africa, Central Asia, South Asia, East 

Asia & Oceania - to which states transferred theirs power of decision

with respect to outer space, especially when it was determined that

the Second Impact was the work of a threat external to Earth. For 

reasons of history and resources, outer space (and its attendant

organisations) continues to be dominated by the blocs of North 

America, Europe and East Asia & Oceania and the corporations that

span them. Thus, most of the colonies and installations will subject

to their legal codes as well as the relevant UN directives.



End of Chapter 1



AUTHOR'S NOTES

First off, disclaimers and acknowledgements. I know about >.< this

much about astronomy. If there are any factual errors, do let me

know. I'd be most grateful. Influences for this chapter consciously

include Starcraft, Star Trek, Starship Troopers (the movie), Farscape,

Babylon 5 and Revolutionary Girl Utena as well as Joyce Wakabayashi's

fic 'Urusai Asuka!'.



Secondly, almost the entire cast has been tweaked in (hopefully)

unexpected ways as compared to the original series. I was hoping to

write about Shinji without his usual hangups and to have a Shinji x

Rei story!



16 Oct - 1st draft.

18 Oct - 2nd draft: removed Gendou vs. Shinji slapstick to out-takes.

         Inserted activation test and current WAFF end scene. Title

         of Ch 1 changed from Gotterdammerung.

25 Oct - 3rd draft: New opening scene. Prowler entry scene trimmed.

31 Oct - 4th draft. Small but impt plot changes. 

14 Nov - Finally final. I hope. Plus HTML version.









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