Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][Draft][Miyu][Alt]Deceptions - Part 2
From: Kyhdin@aol.com
Date: 12/8/2000, 1:25 AM
To: hitomi@ndirect.co.uk, ffml@fanfic.com
CC: ironoak@fsnet.com

Scorecards! Get yer scorecards here! Can't tell who's human without a 

scorecard! Get yer scorecards here!



Okay, let's see, in one corner, we have Miyu, and, by association, Larva. In 

another we have one of the Old Ones. There's Mayumi and her family, who are 

apparently all Shinma, and Chisato doesn't exactly seem to be powerless 

either.



I do have one or two questions though. I can buy that Mayumi and her family 

can't see Loren for what she is, but wouldn't Loren know? I mean, the Old 

Ones, at least as far as I know, were/are Gods. I mean, she should have 

picked up the fact that Mayumi's not what she seems right off the bat, or at 

least gotten a funny feeling in a house full of Shinma.



Granted, a Shinma human guise might hold up under casual scruitiny, 

especially when Loren has no reason to take Mayumi at anything other then 

face value but after watching her scare those punks away, and she had to feel 

it when Mayumi lost control in the park, wouldn't Loren choose to probe a bit 

more closely?





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