Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Lime] Burlesque
From: allyn yonge
Date: 12/3/2000, 8:04 AM
To: "D.F. Roeder" <dfroeder@flash.net>, FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>

I'm sitting at my key-board, frantically trying to get

my mail-box cleared out before the power goes (three

inches of snow on the ground and still coming down

hard) when I see a story by D.F. Roeder. A short

story.

A few minutes reading . . .what could it hurt?



LOL!!! <ouch> I think I hurt my-self.

(At the TABLE? RICE?)LOL! Ohhhhhh, that hurt. ^_*



Good job as always. 

(my only criticism is that, IMO only, you _might_ have

gone just a weeeeeeeeeeee bit overboard with your use

of {giiiive, yoooouuuu, etc.}

Very nice overall.

(now if I can only get an image of Akane with Ran-chan

slung over her shoulder out of my mind. <brrrrrrr>)

^_*







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and full of wonders." -Lord Dunsany



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