Subject: [FFML] [Hotaru no Kibun][Challange Answer][Lemon]Se no Hotaru
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Date: 12/1/2000, 6:39 AM
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This fic is written in answer to the challange to write a fic for a not well

known anime or manga, and Hotaru no Kibun, I think, fits the bill.



Disclaimer:  "Hotaru no Kibun" also known as Sexcapades is owned by and is

the copyright (c) of Jiro Chiba, Hot Milk Mangerotica, Eros Comix, and

Studio Protius.



Warning:  This fanfiction is based on a Hentai Manga called Hotaru no Kibun

(Hotaru's Feeling), which has lots of graphic sex, adult language, and a few

scenes of rape.  This fanfiction will have some sex at the end.  You have

been forwarned.  Seeing as this is a Hentai series, I figured that a Lemon

would be most appropriate for a continuation.



This fic takes place in the Tobe home, three years after the end of the

Manga, on Christmas eve.



Se no Hotaru! (Hotaru's Husband)

By: Jason Monti



 Mitsunari Tobe and his wife were racing around their home cleaning,

aranging, and preparing for their guests.  Well, actually, Mitsunari was

doing most of the work, for Hotaru kept having to take several breaks that

seemed to last longer than the time she spent working, but he didn't mind.

Seeing as his wife was eight and a half months pregnant, he just took up the

slack with a smile on his face.

 Their two-year-old daughter, Shiiko, named after Mitsunari's first wife, at

Hotaru's insistance oddly enough, was out with her namesake and half sister

and superstar child actress, seven-year-old Kisato.  They were taking a trip

up to the top of the sisters' favorite building, the Tokyou Tower.  They

could never get over looking out at the city lights and how beautiful they

thought it all looked.  The elder Shiiko and her daughter both loved Shiiko

the younger very much, despite the history that once brought animosity

between Shiiko and Kisato, and Hotaru, who they once percived as having

stole their husband/father respectively.

 "Hotaru, really, its not neccessary, you don't have to do help clean, just

relax, please." pleaded Mitsunari for the tenth time that night.  Hotaru

reluctantly complied.

 "Sorry honey, but I just want everything to be perfect, you know how those

women make me feel when their here." she responded, laying back on the couch

again.

 Speaking of "those women," the other guest that night was to be Actress,

Tamaki Ando, who was one of Mitsunari's flings when he was still dating

Hotaru, and ofcourse still married to Shiiko.  Tamaki had married some actor

she had apparently met at a party a little while after his divorse with

Shiiko went through.  Now she's pregnant with a child of her own, and much

to Mitsunari's secret reliefe, she holds no bad feeling about the lull in

her career as a result for own husband.  It was Shiiko's ruined career and

her animosity for him that destroyed their marraige and he really did not

want to see Tamaki unhappy.  Tactfully, he never told his Hotaru any of

this.

 "Did you get the KFC?" Hotaru called out to her husband.

 "Fuck, fuck, fuckfuck..." Mitsunari started yelling at himself while

griting his teeth and banging his head on the kitchen counter.  "I'll try to

get some, but we may have to break tradition this year.  I should have

grabbed some on my way home from work!  We have the strabarry short cakes

though right?"

 "Yes honey, we do, now get going before they sell out!"

 Mitsunari grabbed his coat and keys and headed out the door with a quick,

but deep kiss from his wife.  "Damn," he though, "I still love to kiss her

even after four years."



 "Come along Shiiko, Kisato" Shiiko called, motioning for the two girls to

follow.  "We musn't be late for Christmas-Eve dinner.  Kisato, I know you

want to see your father again."  Under her breath, she added "and neither

can I." as a single tear made its way down her cheek.  With an inaudiable

sniff and a wipe of her sleve, Shiiko smiled quickly and marched the girls

and herself to her car.



 "Dear, we need to get going, the Tobes arn't going to wait forever, and you

know how much I hate being late!" called Tamaki Ando to her husband in a

voice that betrayed the love she felt for him despite the stern words of her

command.

 "Yes honey.  Do you have my keys?"

 "Yes dear, now grab the gifts, and the dinner sake."

 "Got it."



 Mitsunari tumbled into his door with five buckets of KFC just as Shiiko

drove up to the curb.  "Whew, I got it, just in time too, I think that I

just saw Shiiko pull up."

 "Daddy, a little girl came running up and attached herself to his leg.

 "Hello Father," said his older daughter, much more reserved.

 "Hello Mitsunari." came a soft, but lovely voice behind the girls.  Shiiko

walked from her car to him and gave him a tight hug and a soft kiss on the

cheek.  The kiss lingered there a little longer than Mitsunari was

comfortable with, and as he moved to break away, his lips lightly brushed

with hers.  Both blushed.

 "You did that on purpose," he wispered.  She just looked up over his

shoulder and right at Hotaru, who was getting up from the couch.  "I

certainly hope that you've been taking care of my, I mean Mitsunari.  He

hasn't been working himself to death lately has he?"

 Hotaru stifled a giggle and answered, "No ma'me, I love my husband very

much and if he works to hard, I'll just work him a litte harder at home

until he's too tired to go to the station for a couple of days, its always

seemed to work in the past."  Both women were by now laughing and Mitsunari

had the good graces to blush profusely.



 The squeal of breaking wheels announced the arrival of Tamaki and her

husband.  He got out and went around to help Tamaki out of the car.  Once

out, the two made their way to the door where everyone else seemed to be

gathered.

 "Hello Tamaki, hows married life?" greeted Mitsunari.  "I don't believe

that I've met your husband."

 "Dear, this is Mitsunari Tobe, the station's best writer.  Mitsunari, this

is Shizuke Yamada." Tamaki introduced the two.

 "It's nice to meet you Mr. Yamada," said Mitsunari bowing, "this is my

wife," pointing at Hotaru, "Hotaru, and this is my ex-wife, Shiiko." now

pointing toward Shiiko.  "And these are my children, Kisato, and Shiiko."

 "The pleasure's all mine, Tamaki has told me all about you."

 "Erk, she has, he he... well um, lets all eat, the chicken's getting cold.



 The dinner went well, and it was around midnight.  Mitsunari's two children

were asleep in little Shiiko's bed.  Tamaki, Shizuke, and Hotaru were

chatting it up in the livingroom.  Mitsunari himself had gone to bed because

he had had a little too much to drink.

 Shiiko had just excused herself to the bathroom, she too had been drinking

and needed to relieve herself, emotionally as well as physically.  She shut

the door, but faild to lock it.  Sitting on the pot, she began to cry.

Hotaru's words from earlier in the evening had hurt, a lot.  When she

finished her business and flushed, she started washing her hands, when

Mitsunari stumbled into the room in his boxers and a tanktop.  He just

ignored her and began relieveing himself right infront of her.  Shiiko

looked around, then locked the door bedhind her.

 When Mitsunari finished, he just turned to wash his hands and finally took

notice.  "Sh'ko, wadda you doin' here?"

 "I was using the toilet right before you came bumbling in here" she said

smiling while she straitened out his hair and underclothes.  "My my, you're

a mess.  I do wish you wouldn't walk around like this.  It makes Hotaru look

bad." she said jokingly, refering to what she told him when she caught him

having his love affair with Hotaru.

 "'tain't like ah'm goin' nowhere, you?"

 "No, it would seem that I'm not." she said sadly.

 "Ya've been cryin'?  What for?"

 "Do you remember your last words to me when I left you that night?"

 "Uh, ah think 'day were, uh, somdin' like, "Dammi' Sh'ko jus' shuddup an'

go!" yeah, thas it!"

 "Yes, somthing like that, she said with an introspective smile.  Shiiko

wrapped her arms around him and rested her head on his chest.  "We never

said good bye, Mitsuru, I never wanted to say good bye."  She began to cry

on his chest again.  Her resolve strengthend and in a much more forceful

tone she said, "I love you Mitsunari Tobe, and even if I can't have you as a

husband, I would like to be able to at least say good bye."  She gently

gripped his already growing manhood.

 "SHIiko, I can't!" he cried.

 "Shhh..." she said as she began to unbutton her blouse.  "That sure sobered

him up!" she thought.  "You had no problems cheating on me when we were

married, so what's the difference?"

 "That was different!"

 "Yes it was, wasn't it?" she smiled and started rubbing his chest under his

tank, and began pulling it off of him.  "I pushed you away, and Hotaru was

there to catch you when you fell.  I know that I don't deserve you, but you

don't deserve me either, so that makes us even.  Please Mitsunari, I only

want to make love to you once more...to say good bye."

 While his speech may have come out a lot more clear now, Mitusnari was

still quite drunk, and in his drunken haze, Shiiko's reasoning made perfect

sence.  Besides, Shiiko's hand stedily pumping his erection made his

decision for him.  He bent down and began kissing her furiously, one hand

carressing her breast and stroking her nipple, the other messaging her still

perfect ass.  His menistations earned him a contented sigh, urging him on.

 He undid the button on the top of her skirt and unzipped it all the way

down the back.  Letting the garment drop, he returned to his ministrations.

 Shiiko broke the kiss.  "Oh Mitsunari, even when your drunk you can be a

caring and gental lover!  I miss that about you."

 Mitsunari suddenly remembered an episode involving him almost raping Hotaru

when he was drunk, a tear crawled down his cheek as he kissed Shiiko.  He

began kissing down her neck and chest, placing playful liks at her nipples

and then further down to her belly.  By now he was down on his knees and he

had Shiiko up against the bathroom wall.  He gripped the waist of her

panties and pulled them down.  He could already smell the heavy musk of her

womanhood, and the undergarment stuck slightly to her lips as it was pulled

away, causing a sensation to run up Shiiko's spine.  She shuddered as they

were pulled down and he began to lick her in her most sensitive areas.  She

could feel her clitoris begin to harden and peek out of its hiding place,

and his tounge slide fully over it.  Shiiko bit back a yelp of pure extacy.

Mitsunari continued this for a little while longer untill she arched her

back and pressed her cleft hard into his lips, as she exploded in orgasm,

she continued to suck and lick at her nubbin.  She finally callmed enough to

grab his shoulders and push him away.

 "Please Mitsuru, put it in me, I need you in me, I love you, please!"

 Mitsunari was more than happy to comply and stood befor her.  Gabbin her

buttocks, he lifted her off the ground and up against the wall.  She wrapped

her long beautiful legs around his waist and he slowly began to slide into

her.

 "Oh Shiiko, aah, your still as tight as the first time we made love!"

 "I haven't had sex since you left me.  Do you like it?  Do I make you feel

good?  I only want you to feel good Mitsuru."

 "Oh Shiiko, you feel so wonderful!" Mitsunari grunted out as he moved in

and out of her first with shallow, slow trusts, which let them establish a

pattern, and brought Shiiko over the edge a second time.

 "Mitsuru, ahh, your wife, uhn ahh, AAH, do you know if its gonnaaaAA, gonna

be a, aah boy or a girl, AAAHHahhhaaaah" she stammered out as she was

brought to climax again.

 "Huff, It's gonna be another Girl," Mitsunari grunted as he began to speed

up.

 "Whaaaht, a, ah, are you, gonna naaahAAAAHAAAame herrrrr?" she huffed as

she came for the fourth time.

 "Tamaki, we're ganna namer' Tamaki, oh shit, Shiiko, I'm gettin' close, I'm

gonna cum!"

 Shiiko was rapidly building towards the point of no return and knew it was

going to be big.  "Cum in me, my love, let me feel your hot cum fill me, I

miss it soo much!"

 "OH FUCK, SHIIKOOOOO, YES!!!!!" he wispered loudly into her ear as he held

her tighly to him, pumping in and out as he exploded in her tight vagina.

 The combination of her fith orgasim and the feeling of Mitsunari's cum

filling her passage, sent Shiiko right into a sixth one and she bit his

shoulder, not hard, but enough to muffle her screams of utter joy and

pleasure.  Mitsunari could feel her vagina spasming on his shaft as he

continued to move in her unloading his seed, and it caused his orgasim to

intencify two fold and he nearly collapsed.

 Both were huffing and puffing and locked their gazes.  When they recovered,

Mitsunari spoke first, "Shiiko, you'll always hold a place in my heart, but

I belong to Hotaru."

 "I know, and while I'll always love you, my wonderful Mitsunari Tobe, I did

this to seal our good bye."  With that said she lent over and kissed him

passionately.  When she broke the kiss, she wispered in his ear, "Good bye

Mitsunari, and thank you for the love you gave me when you did, take good

care of Hotaru, she needs you more than I ever will."

 Shiiko got up, rinsed herself off and redressed.  When she felt that she

could go out again, she left the bathroom to get her daughter, Kisato.  She

bade everyone farewell and drove home.

 Meanwhile, Mitsunari splashed water in his eyes, redressed and went back to

bed.



THE END.



Author's notes:  First off, in Japan, it has actually become a tradition

that on Christmas eve, the KFC's there are flooded with patrons and they

sell out very quickly.  They all eat strabarry short cake with their asorted

wings and breasts (no pun intended).  Anyway, women over 25 are

derrogitorily called "Christmas cakes" because they are "left overs" like

left over cakes from Cristmas eve.

 Well I certainly enjoyed wirting this, and I hope you enjoyed reading it.

Finished 5:24 AM 12/1/00.



-Shitsureishimasu ^_^

[Goodbye (very polite)]

-Jason Monti

jmm769s@smsu.edu (primary)

jmm314@yahoo.com

http://www.student.smsu.edu/j/jmm769s/home.htm







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