"Ryoga P Hibiki" <carrotglace@juno.com>
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Subject: [FFML] SV: Re: [FIC][NEW!]R.5] Amazing Spiderman Issue Ten
Date: Thu, 16 Nov 2000 15:09:47 +0100
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I have to agree with this, even though I haven't read or even cared
about Spiderman for years (since before Carnage, in fact).
Hans Holm
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Secondly, I'd like to point out several major problems with =
the
new stuff. I realize that this is an alterniverse and all, and =
involves
Ranma. You're changing things a bit and that's cool. Just don't do too
much. I've pointed out some of the major things that don't sit well =
with
me, it seems you've rushed the Venom story out for some reason.
Because he thinks all the older, classic Spider-foes aren't as cool?
Where's Beetle, Scorpion, Sandman, Electro, Vulture, Mysterio et al.?
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Four: Kuno was in no way involved with Mousse kidnapping =
Akane.
There's no real reason for him to know anythijng about it, much less =
have
memories of it.
Not to mention that the first time Mousse showed up (which was at =
Furinkan,=20
complete with after-school challenge, so Kuno would probably know), he
didn't kidnap Akane. That was the second time, which may not be public=20
knowledge (i.e. known by Kuno).
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I suggest a complete rewrite of the past three chapters. Why =
you
might ask?
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Because Ryoga is the perfect host for the Venom Symbiote. He's
gone often enought that he could fill the roll easily, he can just =
show
up when he's needed and vanish just as easily and nobody would =
suspect.
His character is much more in tune with the roll. [Please don't make =
him
Kraven!]
Wouldn't Shinnosuke be better for that?
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I can see that you're probably planning on making Carnage
Kodachi. That's cool too, but Kuno would be better as she's mostly a
running gag more than anything else. She's crazy and maybe psycotic
enough to do it though. She's also a little smarter than Tatewaki, but
that could work against the Symbiote more than anything else.
Green Goblin! Green Goblin! Green Goblin!
I seem to recall someone called Carrot Glace who argued that in =
Batman-Ranma
fusions Kodachi should be The Joker, and she fits even better as Green =
Goblin.
(rich, skilled in chemistry etc.)
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Keep it up, it's really good despite the rushed appearance of =
the
last three chapters. I hope to see more of this soon!
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Ja!=20
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Carrot Glace
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