Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Eva/HPL] Children of an Elder God 18
From: "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Date: 11/27/2000, 8:41 PM
To: "E.L.Toh" <teloong@cwcom.net>
CC: Rod M <rpm@thekeep.org>, ffml@fanfic.com

On Mon, 27 Nov 2000, E.L.Toh wrote:



        "Two of us are following Langely, Captain."



even the MiBs at it! Hmm. And it seems that they've demoted

Misato too. also...



Doh, screwed up her rank!

 

idly with the sock she had removed from that foot.  "This

little piggy went to market, this little piggy stayed home,"

she began.



        He listened in amusement, wondering if she was

finally going to actually get it right.



        "And this little piggy had roast beef...no, that's

not it."  Her childish face creased in frustration, and then

she tugged at her ear. "Ow."



err. wasn't she on the right track? 

This little piggy went to market,

this little piggy stayed at home,

this little piggy had roast beef (Beware BSE!),

this little piggy had none,

and this little piggy went whee-whee-whee,

all the way home. (i think)



Her train of thought derailed.

 



        "Ignorance is bliss.  It wouldn't help anyway," said

Ritsuko.  "In addition to the LCL, the EVA units were also

developed using genetic material from the Angel and from

humans.  Assuming my mother's secret files are accurate, the

Angel was named 'Adam', and the Old Ones used it as a source

of genetic material to create servitor life forms.  My

experiments give me reason to believe that there is a

genetic relationship between Adam and most life forms on

Earth, although from the records I've been able to pry into,

life originated on Earth before the Old Ones arrived.  

However, I can definitely say that humanity has a strong

relationship to Sector 13's main resident."



Ohmigawd. Ubbo-Sathla the Unbegotten Source right at the

heart of NERV. Probably an Elder Thing as a 'guest' as well.



Give this man a donut!



        Asuka sighed and went back to the search index.  So

far, she'd found so many bogus web sites with the key words

she had been using that she could hardly believe it.  How

could so many people know about these things, and yet not

really know what they're talking about?  It doesn't make any

sense, she thought.  All these rock bands named things like

'Black Goat of the Woods' or 'Blind Apes of Truth'



Well, in the previous century, entities like Cthulhu and 

the King in Yellow reached out to poets and artists? Nowadays,

rock and heavy metal bands as their equivalents. Hmm. Though

given some of the modern art i've seen, lots of art folk do

seem to have walked the streets of R'lyeh in their dreams. ;)



Yep!

 

        She took a look at the subheadings.  'A spell for

bringing about the resurrection of the body', 'meditations

on ghouls', 'collecting moonsilver', 'the Scimitar of

Barzai', 'Gorgo and Mormo', 'how to turn gold into lead' and

finally, 'Commentary on the elder prophecy of the rise of

the new gods of Earth, as shown in various textes'.  She

decided to check that one out first.



Where does a girl get a good love spell these days?



Exactly.



        "Old habits die hard, and old men fret,"  Fuyutsuki

said wearily.  "Some nights I dream that when we come to the

Day of Return, we'll discover that we were doing the work of

the Audient Void all along, that our very striving is the

writing on the wall of the Blind Ape of Truth.  He has never

lost before, that we know of."



Fuyutsuki really sounds like a sage in this passage.

Usually he's a skeptical voice, a foil and an assistant to

Gendou but in the culmination of the plot in this part, he

really comes into his own. Well done.



Yep!

 

        "Yes," she replied.  "But she's dead.  She was

assimilated into Unit00 during a test.  Maybe it was her old

room, and he can't bear to change it?"



Unit00 instead of Unit01. hmm. i wonder how this will affect

how things turn out.



Actually, this is John the author screwing up.  ^^;;;





       "Dave?  What are you doing, Dave?" the MAGI kept

repeating in unison.



Sorry, didn't get that reference.



2001 reference to when Dave starts pulling HAL's memory cards to shut HAL

down.

 



        And then I have to decide what to do about Gendo,

Fuyutsuki thought.  And how to explain it.



        "You couldn't afford to.  We have to stand together

or hang separately," Gendo observed.  "Yes, I made a big

mistake.  I admit it. Can we move on to dealing with the

business at hand?"  He paused. "And...thank you for making

sure I didn't stay that way."



        "You're welcome," Fuyutsuki said.  "We don't just

have an Angel to worry about, however."



where was Gendou? and what happened to him? how did Fuyutsuki

rescue him?



will this be incorporated for revelation in later parts of 

CoaEG?



This will become important later, but there's a hint earlier in the

chapter as to what has taken place.



 

 

as i mentioned earlier, the development of Fuyutsuki's character

stands out in this chapter for me. no longer merely 'Sideshow Kozo'.

Yui was really interesting as well - her innonence and petulance 

leading to corruption and death later was also very sad. 



Thanks.  



this chapter was very very good. hitherto, my favourite chapter

was 'Fear and Loathing in Oklahoma' - but i think that this is

even more excellent - great mix of action, mythos development,

horror and tragedy. continues the dark vein of the story and also

has a sense of things coming together or secrets finally being

revealed. well done.



Thanks!





John Walter Biles :  MA-History, ABD, Ph.D Candidate at U. Kansas         

ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu       

rhea@tass.org              http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html

rhea@maison-otaku.net      http://www.maison-otaku.net/~rhea/



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