Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Eva/HPL] Children of an Elder God 18
From: Edmund Wong
Date: 11/27/2000, 5:36 AM
To: "E.L.Toh" <teloong@cwcom.net>
CC: ffml@fanfic.com, rpm@thekeep.org

Just some minor comments on some C&C since I don't suspect that I'm

actually capable of REAL C&C.



       "Dave?  What are you doing, Dave?" the MAGI kept

repeating in unison.

Sorry, didn't get that reference.

2001: A Space Odyssey. I think. Truth to be told, I haven't watched

it.



Anyway, my other minor nitpick lies here:



From:  anna@Goethe.GNERV.ge Subject:  Weird Stuff



        Just a quick guten Tag and a site you might want to

check out, given the research you're doing.  We had a bad

food poisoning incident here, and I've got to go to our

clinic pretty quick, as I'm starting to feel sick to my

stomach myself.  But I thought I'd send you this before I

forgot.



        

http://armitage.miskatonic.edu/~cwhatley/weird.h tml



        Good luck!



        Your friend, Anna

        http://Goethe.GNERV.ge/~anna/



The Germans don't refer to themselves as Germans. German is Deutscher,

and Germany is Deutschland. Furthermore, the correct two letter

country Top Level Domain code for Germany is .de. Now, I don't think

this is going to change in 2015, seeing as how it would be a major

pain in the neck to implement, so I would expect the people of 2015 to

be using the same TLD for Germany. Therefore, I would suggest that you

use something more along the lines of DNERV.de as their domain.

However, I'm not sure where the D should be since I know nothing of

German grammatical rules.



I don't actually know much German myself past Guten Morgan and Guten

Tag, but I'm pretty sure what I wrote above is correct. When in doubt,

turn to Babelfish. :)



- Ed, the technically correct nitpicker. :P



P.S. i got "Deutscher" from babelfish, so don't ask me if it refers to

the people or the language. :)





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