Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][Ranma/GL] Bedlam Fire chapter 1
From: Allyn Yonge
Date: 11/21/2000, 9:38 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

The  characters  of the Ranma 1/2 universe  are  the

creation   and   possession  of  the  brilliant   Rumiko

Takahashi.  They  belong  to Rumiko  Takahashi  and  her

licensees   (Shogakukan   Inc.,   Kitty-Fuji   TV,   Viz

Communications   Inc.)  No  copyright  infringement   is

intended.   

          





"The Green Lantern", copyright ALL-AMERICAN COMICS

 # 16 (July 1940)   

               

(Note: Green Lantern #16  provided the inspiration for this

story. However only the colour green remains.)







WARNING: This story contains scenes that some readers may

find sexually suggestive and/or violent.          





Extended author notes will be added at the end of

of Chapter one and again at the end of the final chapter.

Chapters are cut to approximately 30-40KB size.

Entire story is approximately 400KB right now.





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          Bedlam Fire



Chapter 1





     Zhang, the necromancer, turned the stone in his hands. 

It wasn't really stone, but then Zhang wasn't really his name.

Not the one he'd been born with decades earlier, thousands of

miles away in the black forests of Germanica.  Before the

servants of the murdered god had driven him from his home.

Thin bloodless lips curved in a  small, almost smile, recalling

the crackling flames and screams of the monks as he burned

them alive in their monastery.  His parting gift to the

hypocrites who'd crucified their own god, yet begrudged him

a few peasants. 



     Stretching hugely he took a sip from his mug, grimacing

at the bitter taste.  Looking around at the wattled walls of his

hut only fed  anger the dark murky brew had ignited. Once he'd

supped at the table of kings, drunk the finest wines, dressed in

silk and eaten from plates of gold. Now it was beer and rancid

stew in earthen ware plates . . . a blob of mud fell from the

roof and splattered  a scroll he'd stolen from Alexandria  . .

.and the roof _leaked_!



     Turning his attention back to the stone he considered it

with narrowed eyes. At first he'd thought it was star-metal.

The ultra-fine steel that sometimes fell from the sky was

valuable enough to be worth his trouble. Yet this unformed

lump was . . .different. It called to him in  subtle and exciting

ways. Pushing aside his mug and plate he began gently

removing the dark outer crust with a mixture of diamond dust

and fat rendered from murdered children.





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     Zhang, for so he thought of himself now, looked at the

work of years. The irregular lump of stone was now a mirror-

bright polished sphere that glowed with a faint green inner

light. Hundreds of lives had fed his magicks through the years

of endless toil as he'd patiently peeled away layer after layer

of protection, both earthly and other-worldly.  The bones of

those he'd slaughtered rose in a mossy hummock above his

shelter, and his vineyards were richly manured with their

blood.  The spoils of those he'd murdered fed him like a king

and clothed him more sumptiously than the Emperor of Heaven

himself. Costly silks draped his walls and plates of gold

replaced more plebeian ware, assuring that his food, while

rich in appearance,  was always cold.



     The ancient necromancer was indifferent to worldly

comfort now, the last of his human desires had been burnt

away in a quest for power. Power that was now within his

grasp.

          

     "Mama! Mama! I want my mama!"



     Zhang turned heavy lidded eyes on the chubby six year

old boy securely fastened to a cross of ash made of a tree

growing from the grave of a hanged man.



      He had felled the tree at midnight of the second full

moon after an eclipse with a saw made from the teeth of a

hundred unborn children. The cross had been fashioned from a

single piece of wood without metal tools of any kind.



     It had taken years of patient effort and many false starts

and ruined experiments to get to this one sublime moment.



     "You will be with your mother soon, little one." Zhang

said in kindly tones, sounding like a favorite uncle promising a

treat.



     "Mama?" A hopeful light entered the child's eyes as he

searched the small room for his mother. He wanted his mama.

He wanted to go home.



     "But first you have to do something for me." Out of

sight Zhang slid his hand into a bag of newly tanned leather

that was covered with a curious spiral design.



     "No! No!" Chubby legs kicked in protest. "Want

mama!" Hot tears of fear and humiliation streamed down his

cheeks. He'd tried to be brave. Brave like his mama. His

mama wasn't afraid of anything. She'd come for him.



     "I find it hard to believe anyone is _that_ brave."

Zhang replied to the child's unspoken thoughts as he watched

emerald fire pulse in the heart of the star-stone.     



      Almost time . . . 



     "Surely she is afraid of something?" From the bag he

withdrew a thin blade of black volcanic glass.



     "Mama A'zon warrior," he lisped indignantly. "Not

afraid of nothin."



     "An Amazon?" Zhang said meditatively, splitting his

attention between the boy he'd been systematically preparing

for weeks and the star-stone he'd lived with for decades.

"Ahhh . . .was she a blond?" He let the child's baby fine hair,

like corn-silk slip between the thin cold fingers of one hand.



     The small head nodded vigorously, hope filling his

eyes. 



     Almost . . .





     "With a blue spiral tattooed on her left cheek?"



     The child's entire body shook with excitement.



     Almost . . .



     "Mama! Mama!"



     "Did she look like this?" Lazily he swung the bag aloft

with his left hand, the long blond hair and tatoo easily

recognizable despite having been  peeled from the living skull. 



     "Mamaaaaaa!"



     NOW! 



     The childish scream of terror was cut short as the

obsidian blade opened him from neck to crotch in one swift

movement, hot blood and blind terror both washing over the

star-stone. Green fire blazed, filling the room with light and

Zhang with knowledge.



     *Three fires burn*



     The voice, older than time, whispered deep in Zhang's

mind.



     *Death, life, power*



     And with that voice came images, strange and terrible.

The ancient magician's centuries of petty murder and torture

were ripped asunder by the stone's mind-rape. A torrent of

visions flooded his mind, things that twisted the sanity of the

necromancer and tore his mind like rotten cloth. A blasted

planet that burned with green fire, populated with twisted

shadows  that crept and crawled on too many limbs or none at

all. Zhang wept tears of blood and hid his face in his hands,

for fear that one of the shadows might look upon him and blast

his soul to the pits he now knew lay beneath his earthly visions

of hell. 



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     Adalwolfa  raised her hand in silent signal. On her left

Galya raised her bow in answer, then disappeared behind a

clump of grass that shouldn't have been able to hide a

chipmunk, let alone an Amazon in full armor.  On her right

flank a bird called softly.  There wasn't even a shiver in the

grass to show an Amazon has passed. But then,  Kynthia was

seen only when she wanted be seen.



     Satisfied that her flanks were secured, Adalwolfa

raised her fist high and pumped it twice to signal her war-hand 

before beginning her advance.  Today she was going to finish

the job her warrior-monk great-grandfather had started. Today

the necromancer was going to die. 



     Crawling slowly through grass close cropped by herds

of goats she listened to the whirr of insects and smelled the

rich soil that she bruised in passing. The sun seemed warmer,

the sky bluer and she wondered if this would be her last day

alive. Death rested lightly on her soul. The thought of failure

turned her bowls to water.  For almost two centuries the

magician had been harvesting the Amazon's like a wolf among

the lambs until a once great people had been reduced to a few

wandering bands. Adalwolfa knew her nation would live or

die depending on what happened today. 



     Finding her position good she froze in place, signaling

the others that she had done so. This done, she waited, patient

as a stone. Or an assassin. The sun had moved barely a  finger

width above the horizon when two whistling arrows screamed

into the sky from the far side of the necromancers compound. 



     In a rush, what seemed to be hundreds of Amazon's

erupted from the ground and hurtled toward the magicians lair.

Those farthest from Adalwolfa screamed their war cries and

fired whistling arrows as fast as they could draw bow, in

hopes of drawing his attention from the main attack.  



     Years of observation had let the Amazon's shaman, Ilu,

know that every great working left the necromancer distracted

and vulnerable. And the greater the magic, the greater his

vulnerability. Her auguries had shown that the disappearance

of Galya and her son was related to Zhang's blood magic. She 

convinced the War Leader, Adalwolfa,  that while they could

not save Galya, her sacrifice might allow the Amazon's one

last chance to survive.  



     As the wooden palisade grew closer and they

remained unchallenged, Adalwolfa began to think they might

succeed. Surely if the magician were aware of them he would

react. The complete lack of activity suggested he wasn't aware

or _couldn't_ act. Ilu had been right, she thought exultantly,

watching the rough hewn wall grow closer. The necromancer

was locked deep in his hellish magic; helpless against their

attack. She could see the yellow mossy bones that fastened the

heavy wooden stakes together, interwoven with rope spun

from the hair of countless murdered women and men.  A bright

scarlet plait gleamed in the sun, and she stumbled, tears

blinding her eyes. Red was a color rare and prized among

these dark haired easterners. Perhaps that was why her mother

and sisters . . . She thrust aside the dark thought before it could

turn her bones to water, and in a practiced motion leapt for the

wall. Two of her war-sisters, ahead of her by only a few

paces, caught her ankles as she jumped and _heaved_,

propelling her to the top of the wall.



     Balanced for a moment she scanned the empty interior

yard for traps, then fastened a line to the wall before letting it

fall behind her. Dropping lightly to the ground she heard the

soft thud as warrior after warrior flowed over the wall behind

her and the other pathfinders. Last came the shaman Ilu,

spending her power recklessly to subdue the protections the

necromancer had woven into his wall. 



     They were going to do it, Adalwolfa thought, finally

daring to fully believe. They were----



     The necromancers house exploded in green fire, killing

a dozen warriors instantly, scattering the rest over the ground

like leaves in a storm. Dazed and bleeding Adalwolfa dragged

herself to her feet to see a giant, bathed in green fire stride

across the yard, crushing Amazons, dead and living, beneath

his feet.  



     Kynthia burst from concealment, firing her composite

horse-bow at point-blank range. The heavy iron bolt spattered

against the green fire, like grease on a hot griddle, and

vanished. With a laugh like breaking stone the giant plucked

the Amazon from the ground and pinched off her arms and

legs, like an evil child tearing the wings off a fly.  Casting her

bleeding, dying husk aside the necromancer looked around for

new play things. 



     Sick at heart Adalwolfa watched her Amazons strike

with spear and sword and arrow.  And striking, die. Each

warrior as helpless against the emerald fire as a naked infant

against a steel sheathed warrior.  Knowing she would die but

having no heart to outlive her people,  Adalwolfa snatched a

broken spear from the ground and drove it into the giants side.



     To her shock,  the emerald fire provided no shield

against the broken shaft and the giant shrieked as the splinter

bit deep into his side. For an instant Adalwolfa was shocked

into immobility. Then----



     "WOOD! The magician is not warded 'gainst wood!"

Akalwolfa's shriek carried across the bloody field. Surviving

Amazons, some dying on their feet, snapped the tips from

spears, heads from arrows or snatched splinters from the

shattered walls and charged the necromancer. Howling in pain

and rage he launched himself into the air, buoyed by green fire. 





     Enraged Amazons tore rope woven from the hair of

their dead sisters from the smashed palisade and tied them to

the shafts of their headless spears.  As if gaffing a trout they

pierced the flying magician with wood, tangled him with ropes

and dragged him back to earth. Too new to his power, shocked

and disoriented by pain and fear the magician needed time to

develop a counter to this attack. Time the Amazons were not

going to allow.



     Stabbing and hacking the maddened Amazons ripped

chunks of flesh from the magician with their wooden claws,

rending him like a pig in a slaughter house. At last a wooden

sliver pierced his heart. With a shriek the necromancer

expired, emerald fire vomiting forth from his broken chest to

consume the remaining Amazons, the fields, the trees, the birds

and beasts and every living thing for a hundred li.



     *death* 



     And the first seal shattered.





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     Calina paused at the top of a hill to look back  into the

blasted valley. The green fire had lapped at the base of the far

hills, then fallen back like a storm tossed sea. In it's wake

 . . .nothing. Not a single bird, no fish, no growing thing. Not

even the worms of the earth remained alive. 



     Only the children  remained of the Amazon nation, and

only the fleetest of those. Even if the very land had not been

killed they could not stay. It would be generations, if ever,

before the Amazons would be able to protect their own. They

had no choice but to flee to a land they could hold simply

because no sane person would want it. Shouldering her pack

the new elder of the Amazon nation, feeling every one of her

fourteen years,  led her people south to their new home.



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     One thousand six hundred years later, in the twenty

sixth year of the Meiji Emperor, the year 1894 by Western

reckoning, a woman prostrated herself before the statue of

Senjiu-Kawannon as she prayed for the life of her child. She

had visited the three and thirty temples sacred to the Goddess

of Mercy around Kyouto and walked the thirteen hundred

kilometer pilgrims path around Shikouku, praying and offering

gifts at each of the eighty six temples begging that her sons life 

be spared. 



     Everyday his breathing was a little more labored.

Everyday the shadows in his eyes grew a little deeper and her

heart grew heaver. The doctors had given up hope weeks past,

declaring that his fate was beyond modern medicine. And

perhaps beyond even the help of the gods. 



     And so at last she had come to the Ni-gwarsu-dou on a

path of blood, as she crawled the fifty kilometers from the

coast on her knees. The "Hall of the Second Moon" was

famous for it's statue of Kwannon-of-the-thousand-hands that

remained miraculously warm like living flesh. Perhaps it

would provide a miracle for her son.



       Prostrating herself  before the image she prayed with

all the faith, hope and despair of a mother desperate to save a

dying child. Hour upon hour, she pressed her forehead against

the stone, praying until her voice was gone and her legs went

numb.



     "Your prayer will be answered!"



     The sudden voice almost caused her heart to stop,

thinking the icon had given tongue. Then she noticed the black

robed monk, face hidden in the shadows of his deeply conical

straw hat.



     "R . . .reverend one?" She whispered hoarsely, hardly

daring to hope that this monk might offer some mystic

treatment, some devine intercession.



     "Fashion an image of Hito-Koto-Kwannon," the monk

commanded, "and your piety will be rewarded."



     "I don't understand." The woman stammered tearfully,

pressing her face to the floor in respect.  "I am not an artisan.

How am I to do this thing?"



     Silence was her only answer. She looked up to find the

monk gone and a polished stone that shimmered with a soft

green glow resting in his place. With trembling hands she

reached out and took the thing from the floor. Turning back to

the icon of Kwannon she found the statue had vanished.

Trembling in awe at further evidence of heavenly intervention,

she bowed once, very low. Gathering up her skirts she hurried

out of the temple toward the home of relatives where she was

staying with her son.



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     Seven days it had taken her. Seven days without food,

drink or sleep. Yet she felt as if she'd just begun. She'd been

terrified that any inattention to her task would be taken as a

lack of faith by Kwannon and her son would die. As she had

told the monk, she had no skills as an artesian, certainly no

skills in working metal. Yet the icon of Kwannon-who-

answers-a-single-prayer had appeared with surprising ease.

Indeed it had seemed not so much that she was making the icon

as that she was uncovering something that already existed

within the metal.



     Sitting beside her son's bed she listened to him fight

for breath. Her family had thought she was crazy to depend on

Kwannon to save her child, rather than science, in these

golden days of the Empire.  They would have been certain she

was insane had they seen her make a lamp without a place for

oil or wick. But she knew that the goddess would provide.



     Placing the lightless lamp beside her dying son she

knelt and prayed.



     "Goddess of Mercy, make my son well."

     

     Emerald fire blazed, bathing her son with a cold light.



     "Mother?" The boy turned his head weakly on his

pillow. Already he looked stronger. 



     "Eiku! Kiku, my son!" Tojo Yuko wept on her son's

shoulder.



     The future prime minister of Japan returned the hug

weakly as the rising sun filled the room with a ruddy light, like

new spilled blood.  A new day had come to Hiroshima.



     *life*



     And the second seal shattered.



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     "What a lovely birthday party,"Tendou Kasumi smiled

at her baby sister while she deftly removed the decimated

remains of cake and ice cream, "and so many lovely presents."



     "Let me help you with that Oneesama." Akane started

to her feet, only to be waved back.



     "No work for the birthday girl," Nabiki smiled

sardonically from her position holding up the wall. "This is

_your_ day."



     "Yeah, don't spoil it by goin' in the kitchen." Ranma

mumbled through a mouthful of cake.



     "WHAT! What did you say?" Akane's voice was tight

with anger, and perhaps something else. "Are you making

 fun----"



     "RANMA!" Ryouga slammed an elbow into the top of

Ranma's head. "How DARE you insult----"



     "Two hundred yen says Ranma gets another three

lumps before he loses consciousness." Nabiki waved a wad of

yen in front of the small group of party goers still remaining.



     "I've got fifty that says they both end up in the koi

pond." Sayuri countered as Nabiki rapidly scribbled bets in a

small notebook.



     Mention of the koi pond froze Ryouga for a moment,

allowing Ranma to apply a head lock, while Akane searched

for a blunt object not in use to hold food, gifts or guests.



     "More party games?" Kasumi returned from the kitchen

to scoop up soiled linen and crumb filled plates. How nice."

She paused in the midst of her cleaning to pluck an irregular

object from the debris. Turning it in her hands she examined

the thing, which looked like a Salvador Dali painting stuffed

inside a Klein bottle during a storm at sea. "Did you bake this

Akane?"she asked in a mildly accusing tone.



     "Aaaaaak!" Ryouga wrenched free of Ranma's hold

and made a desperate grab for the thing in Kasumi's hands. 

"T . . .that's mine," he stuttered. "Ummmm . . .it's for you," he

said blushingly, thrusting what was now revealed to be a

badly wrapped package, rather than a genetics experiment

gone horribly wrong, at Akane. "H . . .h . . .happy birthday!"



     "Ryouga . . .how sweet," Akane left off adjusting

Ranma's attitude with a souvenir marble ashtray and took the

package from Ryouga, accidentally brushing his hand with

hers as she did so.



     She . . .she touched me, Ryouga thought, weeping tears

of joy. Now I can die a happy man.



     "Oh . . ." Akane exclaimed as the last of the paper and

tape finally yielded to her determined efforts.



     "My . . ." Kasumi said softly as sunlight hit the object,

causing it to shimmer with a faint green light. 



     "God, it's ugly," Nabiki commented, collecting money

from the losers, paying off winners, and taking the house

percentage off the top from both sides.



     "It's beautiful," Akane assured Ryouga, shooting a

darkling look at her sibling. "I'll treasure it always." She

clasped the statue to her breast, absently noticing how warm it

felt to the touch.



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     He hadn't been invited to the party. Obviously an

oversight. He should be angry. But as Master of the School of

Indiscriminate Grappling he was above such petty emotions as

revenge.  Besides,  it was so late at night he didn't want to

chance waking the birthday girl. He would just leave her 

gift . . .quietly. Caressing the magically charged  "Staff of

Eros" he had "found" someplace he could no longer recall, the

evil master hopped nimbly to the roof top. A quick move left

him dangling outside Akane's window.



     "Happy birthday to you," he sang softly, blowing his

special powder through the open window. It wouldn't do to

have her wake up and spoil the surprise. "Happy birthday

_dear_ Akane." Watching her breathing deepen as the dust

took effect, he slipped inside. "Happi---- Birth----Day . . .

to . . .you."



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     **A _spider_! The size of a dinner plate with bulging

eyes. And fangs. Dripping venom. Akane turned to run, but she

felt as if she were swimming in glue. She opened her mouth to

scream, but not a sound came out.**



     Akane moaned in her sleep, thrashing weakly, locked

deep in her nightmare by Happousai's drug.



     The Master of All Evil's eyes gleamed in the

moonlight as he stared at Akane. Licking his lips he moved

closer. This would be even better than the time he hit her 

shiatsu sleep-spot, or when he used the dream incense, or that

time at the hot-springs , or . . .



     **Wildly Akane fought to run away, step by agonizing

step,  as if she were running through mud. And the spider just

kept coming, skittering across the floor, closer and closer. It's

many legs making a horrible chittering sound on the floor.**



     All he had to do was touch Akane with the "Staff of

Eros" and she would fall madly in love with him. Almost

swooning at the thought Happousai stretched out his hand . . .





     **A single hairy leg reached out and stroked her side

with a feather light touch. Bile burned her throat like acid and

horror lent her the strength to break free of the invisible bonds.

Frantically she reached for a weapon . . .something, 

anything . . .**



     Happousai froze as Akane's back arched and she half

rose from her bed with a gasp. Strange. She shouldn't be able

to move----



     **Her shinai! Gratefully her hands closed around the

smooth familiar shape----**



     A sharp flash of green light blinded the ancient master

for a moment. Just a moment----



     **With all her strength she brought the flexible bamboo

down across the spiders fat body. Again. And again. Until she

felt it crack like a strawberry basket. She kept smashing at the

loathsome bug until it's legs stopped twitching. Shuddering in

revulsion she flicked the horrid thing out of the window with

the tip of the practice sword. Grimacing at the bug guts

smeared on the end of the shinai she tossed it out the window

as well. **



     On her bed Akane's sleeping body gave one last

shudder, of relief this time, and passed into normal sleep. All

alone in her room.



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     "Hey Akane, get movin' or you're gonna be late," a

voice called from outside her door.



                Bleary eyed, Akane struggled from the tangle of bed

clothes and staggered from her room and down the stairs.



     "Man, you look like sh----" Rama stumbled over his

tongue as Kasumi moved gracefully from the kitchen with miso

soup and rice. "Ummm . . .thanks for the breakfast, Kasumi."

Ranma said, hastily warding his food from his father.



     "Ranma's right, sis. You do look like shit." Nabiki felt

no need to curb her tongue in front of her sister. Either sister.

"Bottle of sake in one of your presents?"



     Akane peered muzzily at her soup. With great

deliberation she began an epic battle with a cube of tofu

floating in her miso. The tofu was winning.



     "I didn't sleep well." Came the mumbled reply. Maybe

if she snuck up on the sucker? Tofu was tricky.



     "Too much cake?" Kasumi asked solicitously, trying to

find a tactful way to let Akane know the tofu had slipped out of

the bowl and was making a getaway across the table.



     "Nightmare," now where had that sneaky . . .ahaaa . . .

behind the salt shaker. The little devil. Akane prepared to

pounce on the escaping bean curd. "Spider." she added

simply, as if that explained it all.



     "Ooooo," Ranma said tauntingly, dangling some

noodles on the end of his chopstick in front of her face. "is the

gorilla girl afraid of a little----"

     

     "Eeeeeeeee!"



     "That's got to hurt!" Nabiki finished her breakfast and

neatly replaced her chopsticks beside her plate, on the floor.

The table being otherwise in use. Upside down. On top of

Ranma's head.



      "Great as always Oneesama." She absently patted the

groaning Ranma on the shoulder as she walked past. "Don't be

late to school. I've got four to one odds you'll make it to class

on time. And six to one Kuno gives a gift to his pig-tailed-

goddess before lunch." At Kasumi's questioning glance she

added, "He doesn't want her to feel slighted because he gave

Akane a gift." She nodded in the direction of the life size Kuno

bust that recited poetry when a button was pushed or when a

heat sensor indicated someone was in the room. It had taken

her two hours to figure out how to pull the plug on the darn

thing. And she'd only charged Akane three hundred yen for the

information. It was her birthday after all. 



     She paused on her way back up the stairs. "I think it's

dead, Akane." Her sister ignored her and kept hammering

away at the spider/blob-of-soba-noodles that were,

unfortunately, on top of Ranma's head. Sighing,  Nabiki

continued on her way. One of these days they were going to

have to do something about Akane's spider phobia. 



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     "Nihao Airen!"



     "Aaaaaak!" Ranma jumped and screamed like a girl.

Which was especially embarrassing as he was presently male.

With a Chinese female grafted to his back.



     "Shan Pu bring too, too good lunch."



     Akane looked up wearily from where she sat beneath

the tree, too tired to chew, almost too tired to breath. The brief

spark of anger was quickly quenched and she shuffled a little

out of the way without rising from the ground.



     "Why you Chinese hussy," Ukyou stomped forward

and wedged her uber-spatula between the two. 



     "Get----," she wiggled the spatula back and forth as

she pushed forward, 



     "Off----," grunting with effort she put her back into it,



      "MY----," Damn, she was going to have to order that

new hydraulic upgrade from Spatula Monthly.



     "FIANCEE!!!" 



     Ukyou gave a tremendous heave and Shan Pu broke

suction with a wet popping sound. Flipping neatly through the

air the amorous Amazon landed on her feet, facing the

obstreperous okonomiyaki chef. 



     "Interfere Amazon and husband mean death." Shan Pu

asserted, producing a matched pair of Goloks. The heavy

Malaysian knives were a gift from her father and she hadn't

had a chance to try them out yet.



     Dispiritedly Akane poked at her bentou,  trying to

figure out what to do with it. Her hands felt swollen and

clumsy, her head stuffed with cotton-wool.



     Ukyou countered with her battle spatula held high over

her head in both hands, the blade slanting down behind her

back in what looked like a modified "molinello" stance. The

apparent opening was offset by the tremendous power of the

stance. It was also an attempt to lure the Amazon into an

attack.  As soon as Shan Pu thrust, Ukyou would counter with a

time-cut to her leading arm to remove the offending limb and

follow that with a return cut to her head that, if successful,

would leave Shan Pu staring back at her own body from

several feet away.



     _ If_ she were serious. 



     A little reluctantly Ukyou decided using the edge

_might_ be just a tad extreme. At least with so many

witnesses. She would have to be satisfied with just hurting the

little tart.  Repeatedly. 



     "Oh yeah!" Ukyou thrust her chin forward

pugnaciously. "Well, to interfere between the Master of God-

Sent-Okonomiyaki and her fiancee, means a beatin'."



     "Ha!" Shan Pu tossed her hair, producing an interesting

sympathetic reaction a few inches below her collar bone that

caused three passing middle-school boys to instantly hit

puberty. "Spatula girl no can beat _Amazon_ warrior."



     "Yeah?" Ukyou frowned, noting  male reaction to Shan

Pu's "personality". "Well, no silicon strumpet's gonna get

_my_ sweetie!" She stalked forward a step.



     "SILICON!" Shan Pu half-shrieked in outrage. "What

you saying?" Replacing her knives Shan Pu stomped to within

a few feet of Ukyou. "Spatula girl just jealous because goodies

flat like okonomiyaki."



     "I am NOT flat," Ukyou screeched. "It's just the

bindings.



     "That good excuse," Shan Pu scoffed, "for woman

built like stick."



     "STICK!" Ukyou ripped open the front of her blouse.

"Does this look like a stick?"



     "Look like dried up cow poo-poo," the Amazon

sneered. "husband deserve only _Best_!" Shampoo whipped

off her chignon. Three boys and two girls became men on the

spot.



     "Oh YEAH!"  Ukyou ripped off her bindings and,

aggressively, went nose-to. . .nose with the Amazon, proudly

upholding the honor of Japan. "Top _these_ you bimbo."



     Ranma, completely forgotten in the heat of battle,

looked worriedly at Akane who seemed completely unmoved

at all the female opulence  being bandied about in his vicinity. 



     "Hey, it ain't my fault. I didn't do nuthin'." He excused

himself on general principle.



     "I can't find my noodlestooper." Akane replied very

carefully.



     "Huh?" Ranma looked closely at Akane and noticed

her eyes weren't tracking. "Are you OK?"



     "I'd like to buy a vowel." Akane slumped back against

the tree, a faint buzzing snore coming from between her lips.



     "Ahhhh man," Ranma glanced around to see if anyone

was watching. Grateful to see that Ukyou and Shan Pu were

fully engaged in their battle to see who was the breast . . .errr 

. . .best, he scooped Akane up in his arms and bounded for

home. 



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     "Oh Ranma," Tendou-san, weeping a river,  fell on

Ranma's shoulder as the young martial artist hit the bottom of

the stair. "Have you heard what happened?"



     "Hey, I didn't do nuthin!" Ranma defended

automatically, looking for an opportunity to run. "Anyway,

Akane's OK, she's just asleep. I just put her to bed. Ask

Kasumi if you don't believe----"

          

     ##It's Party time!## Genma waved a sign excitedly,

slapping a paper hat on Ranma's head.



     "Stupid old man," Ranma slapped the hat away, "You

ain't a panda."



          "Heh!" Genma grinned insincerely. "I forgot."



     "It's wonderful news," Soun blubbered, gathering

Ranma in a big hug. "The master . . .the master . . ."



     "The old fart is in the hospital," Genma finished.

"Someone beat the stuffing out of him." He pushed a bottle at

Kasumi. "Join the celebration!"



     "I just got off the phone with the hospital." Kasumi

waved the bottle aside with a smile. "They say grandfather

Happousai should be out of recovery in a few hours. We can

go visit then."



     "He's _alive_!?" Genma's face fell.



     "There's no justice, old friend." Soun took a healthy

swig from the bottle.



     "There's always the chance of infection." Nabiki put in

from the corner where she was reading a fashion magazine.



     "You're a good daughter," Soun wept, taking a deeper

pull at the bottle. "to cheer your old father so."



     "Geeez, you two are pathetic." Ranma decided to see

if there was anything in the kitchen to eat.



******************************************************



     "Are you sure you're OK?" Ranma tried not to look

like he was hovering as he walked beside Akane down the

hospital corridor. "Not that I'm worried or nuthin." The sweet

sour smell of antiseptic, sickness and stale urine assaulted his

nose, making him regret eating such a big dinner.



     "I was just tired," Akane replied, still lacking her

usual spark. "I didn't sleep very well." Trudging down the

corridor her pasty skin was a good match for the nasty green

color of the hospital walls.



     Kasumi felt Akane's forehead. "You don't seem

feverish. Perhaps it was something you ate." She smiled gently

at Ranma. "She always overdid the eel jelly on Girl Day and it

gave her the most awful nightmares."



     "Heh," Ranma smirked, "a gorilla girl even when you

were little."



     "Fortunately she out grew the nightmares at about the

same time she stopped wetting the bed."



     "Kasumiiiii!" Akane hissed, blushing furiously.



     "Here we are," Kasumi interrupted cheerfully. "Room

893." She pushed open the door and led the others into the

room.



     A tiny figure, wrapped in bandages and splints lay in

the middle of a hospital bed with tubes and wires running in

and out of the body. 



     "How is he, doctor?" Kasumi asked softly.



     The green clad figure turned away from the monitors,

making a notation on a clip-board before hanging it on the end

of the bed.



     "It's amazing," the doctor whispered. "Six broken ribs,

both arms and legs broken, fractures of skull and mandible as

well as a shattered pelvis . . ."



     "And he's still alive?" Nabiki raised an eyebrow.

"That _is_ amazing."



     "No, what's amazing is he tried to grope a nurse as he

was coming out of the anesthesia," the doctor confided in

astounded tones.



     "Ohhh, the master is on his way to recovery," Soun

wept softly. "What a . . .happy occasion." he added, just in

case the bandaged figure could hear him.





     "Buck up Tendou,"Genma patted his old friend on the

shoulder. "The master is sure to recover . . .barring an

accident." he jerked his head toward the oxygen line, IV tubes

and power plugs just sitting there. 



     Where someone could stumble over them.



      Accidentally. 



     "The old freak is pretty tough," Ranma opined, moving

closer to the bed. "I bet he's outa here in a few weeks."



     Soun wept harder.



     "I wonder what could have happened?" Akane added,

moving up beside Ranma. As she moved into view the figure

started to shake and jerk about, muffled whimpering sounds

being accompanied by shrill alarms from the cardio-monitor.



     "He's having some sort of seizure," the doctor swore

softly. "I'm going to have to ask you to leave." He started

hustling them out the room.



     "Hey doc," Nabiki stopped just inside the door, "any

idea what happened to the old guy?"



     "The police report is still pending," the doctor moved

her aside as several nurses rushed in with a crash cart. "but it

looks as if he were beaten rather savagely with a stick."



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End Chapter 1



General Update:

I've got about another 50KB left to go on

BF, which started as a short piece

for the SLR_AE New Writers Newsletter.



Sukeban Senshi Chapter 8 is back from

pre-readers. They put in a LOT of hard

work and I'm doing what amounts to

 a complete re-write on some parts.

Don't expect anything for a while.

Sukeban is very hard to write

or re-write.

On a more positive note, I've already

got some of chapter 9 done. I'm sorry

it's taking so long, but I'm writing as 

fast as I can.



{note, I've had trouble replying to some

people who've e-mailed me. 

Eg. ::"Are you Alive?" I keep getting

a return saying you're not accepting e-mail

from me. ^_^ I've had similar

problems with other people. I reply

to EVERY e-mail, though it may take a

while in some cases. If you don't hear from

me in two to four weeks, write again. It got

lost in the back log, or my reply was lost, or

something happened. I really do like hearing

 from you. ^_^ }

                    



Other fanfics::



"I'm a  Guy", "Tyger,Tyger",

"With Friends Like these. . .",

are still being worked on.

Again, I'm working as fast

as I can.



C&C and Pre-reading.

Sorry I'm so slow. I can't 

write and pre-read/C&C

at the same time. Also Real

Life gets in the way.

Working as fast as I can. ^_^



Notes for Bedlam Fire:

[Notes cover the _entire_

story to date.]



(Meanings of names are ONLY _approximate_ renderings

into English. Spellings are phonetic approximations. )



Kynthia:     Moon           [greek]

Ilu:         Light          [greek]

Adalwolfa: Noble She Wolf   [germanic]

Galya:     God Shall Redeem [germanic]

Calina:    Shining Light    [germanic]         

                 



Guri: Plenty          [Norse]

Aziza: Precious one   [Arabic]

Mani: Tenacity        [ Norse]



Ranjit: (m) Strong, intense      [Sikh]

Wanet: (f)  Idealistic, generous [Philipino]

Gerde (f) Guarded                [Tutonic]



Harolda: (f) Strong in war       [Tutonic]

Kerta:   (f) Warrior             [Tutonic]



Er Shangtan (f) stone eagle        [chinese]

Bao Xianmeng (f) bright butterfly  [chinese]

Shen Xuannu (f) snow effort        [chinese]

Juan        (f) graceful           [chinese]

Baojin      (f) Protects the Family[chinese]







Tojo Hideki: Prime Minister of Japan during WWII, was

born Tojo Eiku, taking the name Hideki later in life.



8-9-3 or Ya-Ku-Sa is the worst possible hand in the card

game Hanafuda (flower cards) where the last digit of the

total counts as the number of the hand.8 + 9 + 3 = 20,

the last digit is zero. Therefore the hand is 

worth . . . nothing. 

                           



Ito Soda, a samurai in the Nabeshima infantry. Prince

Hizen of the Nabeshima family,  was ill from the magical

attack of a demon taking the form of O Toyo his favorite

among the palace women.  Ito Soda was the only one who

resisted the magic of the vampire-cat demon and thus

saved the life of Prince Hizen by staying awake all

night, every night,preventing the demon from sucking the

life from Hizen. "Myths and Legends of Japan" F. Hadland

Davis, ISBN: 981-218-030-3,  p. 265. 





Hello Kitty Lips: Japanese snack food.(honest. I

couldn't make up something like that.)

                 

http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Troy/2855/ratings.html

http://www.japanesesnacks.com/main.shtml





Notes on "The Amazon Nation":

I'm assuming the Chinese Amazons are the remnants of a

group of the original Amazons that, according to legend,

were captured in battle and carried of into slavery. On

board ship they killed their captors. Unfortunately the

Amazons weren't sailors and couldn't find their way

home. I've changed the legend slightly by assuming that,

for various reasons, they or their descendants

eventually ended up in China. I've used

several existing or past  mountain cultures as a

template to build the present day Chinese Amazons. I'm

also assuming that the Chinese Amazons have a great deal

of adoption from outside the tribe to keep the gene pool

diverse. Further I'm assuming that names are not 

necessarily reflective of racial characteristics. For

instance, Aziza had an Arabic name, due to familial

relationships, but was more nordic in type. ^_^



Dancing Butterflies: inspired by Joachim Steuben's

"White Mice" (David Drake's "Hammer's Slammers" novels)

and based on the concept that the Greeks called the

Furies the Kindly-Minded Ones. 



War-hand: five warriors

War-band: five hands or twenty five warriors

                 



MY GOD! The Japanese aren't Christian, so why do your

characters use Christian sounding expletives? Actually

the Japanese, especially the royal family, have been

heavily influenced by Western and Christian ideas. (A

member of the Society of Friends is usually part of the

Royal Household.)However the real reason is that

translating Japanese epithets and exclamatory remarks is

more difficult than it's worth. I use Japanese where I

think appropriate but strive for readability.  I

don't want readers to have to stop and read  end note to

figure out what a character is saying nor do I want

emotional content to be lost in "translation."









King Pyrrhus: Hey! What's with all these non-Japanese

reference's. It's not likely that Nabiki would know

about an obscure fight between the Greeks and Romans. 

Possibly true. And you _could_ have used something

like Hideyoshi's Korean campaign that destroyed Korea

as a nation, left China ripe for 

conquest my the Manchu and dealt Hideyoshi's government

a mortal blow economically and politically. However,

since my readers are mostly English speaking I thought

this a more easily understandable reference. 









founding-buster-cluck:: a situation that's _really_

messed up. (I understand the armed services use a _very_

rude expression that sounds similar  ^_^)

  

*******************************************************



End Author Notes



"The next time someone hands you an exploding ham, I'm

going to pass the mustard."

Jack Deth, Trancers II



(Now if I can just figure out how to use this line in a

fanfic.)

          











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