Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][SM/YST]Ronin Summer: Dark Crusade 12
From: K'thardin <kthardin@yahoo.com>
Date: 11/20/2000, 10:09 PM
To: Dataraven_659@excite.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

You know, sometimes I wish I could write this good.  I

seem to have a tendancy to overwrite sometimes (as you

have probably seen ^_^), whereas you've pretty much

gotten it down where you write no more and no less

than what makes the story awesome.



Of course, even I'm not near as bad as say...Robert

Jordan.  Now there is a guy who could write the book

(as long as it would be. ^_^) on overwriting.

Heheheheheh.



Greetings all!



Wassabi!

 

First of all, sorry this one took so long. It's been

a rough couple of weeks

for me in RL. Mid-term exams, assignments,

projects... combine them all with

lack of sleep and there was no way this little gem

was getting out any



Try going out to sea for a few weeks.  Does wonders

for your ability to write. Heh.  You know, I've given

up writing when I'm underway...at least seriously.  I

find I have people like Sasami talking like they

belong at a Pantera concert. ^^;;



sooner. As a compensation, I've made this chapter

just a little bit longer

than usual, hopefully to make up for leaving you all

hanging for so long.

^_^



Make them as long as you need to.  We can hack it! 



Okay, now comes the part of the message where I beg

and plead for C&C.

Seriously, people, I would really appreciate any and

all responses you can

give me. My address is sprinkled liberally

throughout this message, and

clicking the "Reply" button tends to work, as well!

^_~



Remind me to tell you about the Marines and the screen

saver when I get the chance. ^_^

 

<snipity doo da!>



OBLIGATORY LEGAL DISCLAIMER : Some of these guys

aren't mine. The 

Sailor Senshi belong to DIC and Kodansha, while the

Yoroiden are owned

by Sunrise and Graz Entertainment. Okay? So don't

bother suing me. I'm 

a student. 



And I just spent all my money on Majora's Mask and the

Slayers DVD box set. ^_^

 

                   RONIN SUMMER VI : DARK CRUSADE



         A Sailor Moon / Yoroiden Samurai Troopers

cross-over



             by Morgan Hudson

(dataraven_659@excite.com)



Chapter Twelve : Snakebite



Snake Liskin? ^_^  Naa, that'd be more fun than I

could handle if he even made a cameo appearance. Heh.

 

	The room was dark, far darker than she had ever

seen it. Not 



Darkness beyond Twilight...err...naa, I won't complete

it. ^_^



pitch black, but a soft kind of not-light, as though

dusk still 

lingered in this single chamber long after night had

fallen elsewhere. 

The floor trembled under Erdge's feet, barely enough

to be noticed, 

and the various panels and machines that lined the

walls hummed softly 

to themselves as they blinked off and on at each

other like rows of 

Christmas lights, or a sky of multicoloured stars.

The air smelled 

vaguely medicinal, but otherwise sterile, utterly

devoid of any of the 

usual scents that permeated the fortress. Erdge

remained silent as she 



Seeing as how they don't believe or likely need a

medical facility, it's probably not one of those. 



padded through the soft darkness of Pedri's inner

sanctum. It was 

foolish, but she almost felt as though the chamber

itself was sleeping,

waiting for her brother to return and bring it back

to life, and that 

for one such as her to wake it prematurely would be

to invite disaster.



Saw the previews for the second Mummy movie.  Can't

wait. ^_^



In a moment of weakness, she actually wished that

someone were there 

with her, to make her feel safer. In a moment of

brief insanity, she 

even would have welcomed the company of her sister

Tuls. 



That kind of danger would likely turn on that kind of

lady. ^_^  Thought I don't think you need more than

one of these:  moment or brief when describing

insanity.

 

	Erdge paused and looked behind her. Someone seemed

to have 

snuck up and removed the door she had entered

through, hiding it behind

a shifting curtain of shadow. Less than confident,

Erdge inched towards



<Erdge>  That's not fair!

<David Bowie> Fair?  You keep saying that.  I wonder

what your basis of comparison is? ^_^



the source of the ghostly glow that pervaded the

realm. As she drew 

ever closer, the light grew stronger, until she

knelt by the foot of 

the giant crystal tube, bathed in a luminescence

that was as bright as 

day. Within the tube, suspended in a sea of

glimmering blue ooze, was 

the single most beautiful woman Erdge had ever laid

eyes upon. She had 



Now this by far is the best description I've seen  you

write about the Mother so far.  I almost get a

Princess Emeraud type of individual out of this.



a thick mane of golden hair, bobbing and curling

around her head like 

a cloud, buffeted by the invisible currents in the

slime that she was 



the word 'slime' seems to...break the mood somewhat. 

Try 'gel' or maybe even 'fluid'...or perhaps

'suspention.'  Unless it was your intention to break

the mood this way, as a counterpoint to her beauty a

sort of 'ick' to the fluid she's in.



immersed in. It was hard to tell, with her suspended

as she was, but 

she was perhaps even a bit taller than Erdge herself

was, and the two 

shared a similar build. There was an ageless look to

her features, 



Damn Aes Sedai are everywhere. Heh.



composed as they were in sleep. A thick nest of

tubes and wires swirled

about her nude body like some strange form of skirt

and cape, running 

under the woman's alabaster skin at the waist,

knees, wrists, neck, 

and shoulders. 



Nude is good. ^_^  Always up for hitting on a goddess.

Heh...but if I do my girlfriend would likely hit on

me...with a very big mallet. ^^



Hmm...Now I think I know who the Mother reminds me of.

 Lilith in Marvel Comics.

 

	The daughter knelt reverently at the foot of her

Mother, head 

touching the floor as she slid her clasped hands in

front of her in 

genuflection. She remained that way for some while,

as the machines 

around her softly hissed and beeped and clicked to

themselves. Mother 

bobbed up and down slightly, head bowed and eyes

closed. After she felt

enough time had passed, Erdge began to speak in a

low and furtive 

whisper. 



	"I know that I shouldn't be here, Mother, but I

have to talk 

to somebody. Pedri's been getting into one of his

moods again, and 

Vyne is starting to say that maybe we shouldn't take

it any more. But 

Pedri is your Chosen, and I know that we should

never go against 

Mother's Pride..." Erdge sighed deeply. "It's

just... I think maybe I 

want to, Mother. Am I wrong? I'm so confused - what

should I do?" 



A common question that all ask their god, or whoever

happens to be listening, at one time or another.

 

	Mother continued to bob silently in her crystal

tube, her 

composed features utterly expressionless. The

seconds ticked by, 

unnoticed by Erdge as she let her eyes drift shut

and focused on the 

sound of her own breathing. Something was tickling

around inside her 

head, like the sensation she always experienced when

she needed to 

sneeze, only farther back from her sinuses. This

strange, itching, 

tickling sensation was gleefully playing around in

the back of her 

brain. 



	"Help..."



Cool.  She spoke...kinda. Heh.

 

	Erdge's eyes shot open as she lurched away from

where she 

knelt, stumbling over her own feet and landing

solidly on her rump. 

Idly rubbing the injured part as she regained her

feet, the tall blonde

stared up at the eternally impassive features of

Mother, who continued 

bobbing and swaying quietly in her tube of glowing

blue gel. 



See, you use gel here.  That sounds a bit better for

it.

 

	"Mother?" she whispered in awe, and gently pressed

her fingers 

against the side of her leather mask. "Was that

you?" 



	"My child... help... my child..." The voice was

soft, barely



Now the question is...is she asking her child for help

or asking Erdge to help one of the others. ^_^



even audible, if in fact its words were being spoken

at all. The woman 

in the tube remained as dormant as ever, with no

sign of even the 

slightest spark of life. 

	

	"I don't understand," Erdge whispered plaintively,

sinking to 

her knees once again, and clutching her head in both

hands as she began

to rock back and forth. "What are you saying? Which

child do you want 

me to help?"



Erdge took it to mean the latter, but then from what I

can see, she's not open minded enough to consider the

possibility of the former.

 

	"Help... my child... help..."



	"WHO?" Screeching in frustration, the blonde girl

gripped her 

mask, tugging on it with incredible force. Buckles

bent, straps 

snapped, locks were torn from their hinges as the

black case tore 

free from her head and soared through the air,

bouncing and skidding 

across the floor. "Pedri? Or Vyne? How can I be

hearing you at all? 

What is going on here?" 



	"That," an entirely different voice said quietly,

as Pedri 

knelt beside the girl and offered her the mask she

had discarded, "is,

by coincidence, the very question I was wishing to

put to you, Erdge."



Heh.

 

**********



	Clambering over a fallen oak, Nasuti Yagyu heaved a

deep breath

as she staggered to a rest against the trunk of a

large pine and tried 

her best to keep her breathing calm and measured.

Several leaves were 

clinging to the fuzzy pink fabric of her sweater,

and she was sure her 

hair was full of twigs, but there were more

important things for her 



And bugs.  Don't forget about the bugs. ^_^



to worry about. Her calves were aching, her thighs

were cramping, and 

her feet felt as though they had been ironed flat.

Her legs were 

covered in scratches from the briar patch she hadn't

quite managed to 

clear, and sweat was trickling down her face.

Tickling the nape of her 

neck, it made her seriously reconsider her sweater,

despite the chill 

in the air. Closing her eyes, the young woman rested

her hand against 

the coarse bark of the pine and tried to pull

herself together. She 

had stayed out of trouble for nearly a year:

obviously she was getting 

a bit out of shape. 



Bet she attends a gym on a regular basis after this.

 

	Deep in the shadowy gloom of the underbrush,

something moved. 

A huge, scaly form slithered out from the slim cover

of the bushes, 

poking a blunt snout filled with teeth into the open

and sliding a 

long and prehensile tongue between its fangs,

tasting the air. With 

a deep, raspy hiss, the creature moved closer

towards Nasuti, crawling 

towards her on all four of its limbs as a broad tail

swung lazily back 

and forth behind it. The strangely beautiful coral

patterns on the 

creature's bead-like scales seemed to shift

hypnotically with every 

motion as its black, beady eyes drank her in. 



Hypnotically eh?  I wonder if that might not be

exactly what it's doing.  Sort of a way to lure the

prey in...or paralyase it.

 

	It was also, Nasuti noticed, limping severely and

bleeding a 

small fountain of crimson fluid from a gash above

its right eye. The 

sides of its long body heaved as though it had been

running a marathon 

through the Sahara Desert. Slowly, even stiffly, the

huge creature 

jerked itself onto its hind legs, massive head

lowering to keep her 

under its baleful gaze. Inhumanly broad shoulders

rose and fell as the 

monster before her panted for breath. 



	"You," it rasped from deep in the back of its

throat, "are 

lucky to be such a delicacy. I suppose I owe your

little protector a 

favour: dishes such as yourself are always better

when they've been 

allowed to baste in their own juices for a while..."

Lifting a clawed



Kinky. I'd love to eat her myself...err...wait a sec!

DAMNIT!  There the hentai jokes start!

 

digit, the huge lizard-man stretched out his hand

and reached for his 

prey. Nasuti gasped as the thick claws tore through

her sweater, 

scratching along the surface of her skin as the huge

predator closed 

his hand and pulled her towards him. She had just

known, she had just 

KNOWN, that coming to the Dark Kingdom was a bad

idea...



Ah.  I missed this the first time I read it.  I was

wondering why Naaza had to do what he did later as I

didn't recall Tytoung (sp?) actually scoring a hit on

her.



	In an explosion of leaves and twigs, an armoured

form launched 

itself out of the scrub and slammed into the

creature's ribs. There 

was a crack like a gunshot, and the monster's

gigantic jaws swung open 

to release a bellow of pain and anger. Hundreds of

curved fangs glinted



Even Vegita knew the value of getting up some momentum

when attacking something bigger than yourself.  Not

that he lasted too long against Racoom. ^^



in the moonlight as the beaded lizard clutched its

side and staggered, 

falling heavily against a large tree. The tree gave

an almost pained 

groan as it tried valiantly to support such a heavy

weight, then 

surrendered and gave way, cracking and splintering

like a cheap 

toothpick. With a thunderous crash, the huge maple

fell on its side, 

sending up a thick flurry of leaves. 



	In fact, Nasuti noticed with a smile, the trees all

throughout 

the clearing were rapidly losing their foliage, and

the pines were 

dropping needles in bucket loads. Bark shredded,

falling limply from 

the bleached, bone-like wood of the trunks like

snakes shedding their 

skin. The armoured ball which had struck the lizard

lay in the middle 

of a spreading patch of dead and dying grass in the

middle of the 

small clearing. As Nasuti watched, it slowly

unfolded its limbs and 

sat up, rubbing its head with one hand and wincing. 



Does he have that effect usually, or is he doing

something that would cause this?

 

	"Mental note," Naaza mumbled to himself, "don't do

that again.

OW! I had no idea big lizards were that much harder

than water..." 

Shaking his head, the Masho of Poison glanced over

at the young woman 

staring at him and waved. "Hi, Nasuti! How's it

goin'?" 



I can see both their expressions. It's commical!  I

wish I could really get a picture of it! 

 

	"Oh," Nasuti said numbly, staring at the

green-haired man 

before her with eyes wide, "can't complain. You?" 



	Naaza grinned and shrugged. "Hey, never better!

I've got a bit 



<Han> Together again?

<Luke> Wouldn't miss it.

<Han> How we doing?

<Luke> Same as always.

<Han> That bad huh? ^_^



of a headache right now, but other than that, I'm

good." The fallen 

tree suddenly lifted into the air as Tytoung rose to

his hind feet 

with an angry roar. Holding the trunk in one clawed

hand, he swung it 

at the smaller man's head. Without looking, Naaza

performed a backflip 



Before I go much further, I'd like to say this is one

of the best fight scenes I've ever had the pleasure of

reading. ^_^



over the oak, kicking off of it like a diving board

and vaulting 

feet-first into the giant monster's head. Tytoung

staggered back a few 

steps, then swiped again with his makeshift club.

Naaza ducked under 

the flailing trunk and struck at the creature's

ankles, tripping him 

up. 



	"Uh, listen, Nasuti," the Snake Masho said quickly

as he swung 

his arms up to block a devastating strike from

Tytoung's tail, "I'm 

kind of in the middle of something right now." The

tail swept in from 

the other side, and only a swift duck and roll kept

Naaza from losing 

his head. "Think you could maybe get out of here?

I'll catch up with 

you just as soon as I take care of this." 



The nonchalant way he's saying this. ^_^  Ahh...it's

great!

 

	"No problem," Nasuti said, managing a weak smile

despite the 

pain shooting through her stomach. "I'm just glad

you showed up." 



	Naaza grinned goofily as the auburn-haired woman

disappeared 

back into depths of the moonlit forest. "She's glad

I showed up..." 



Tytoung:  Pay attention!  I'm trying to kill you here!

Naaza:  Oh.  That was kinda rude of me, but even you

got to admit the reasons are good.

Tytoung:  Yeah, she is one yummy looking treat.

Naaza:  Definitely good to eat.

Tytoung:  Honey glaze would go well with her.

Naaza:  You think so?  I was thinking chocoalte syrup.

 Or maybe gummy bears.



OK...I'm gonna stop now. ^_^



His large golden eyes seemed even more dazed than

usual as he sighed 

deeply and weakly waved farewell in the direction

she had left in. 

Taking advantage of his opponent's distraction,

Tytoung leapt in and 

brought the battered tree trunk down with all his

prodigious might. 

With a sound like thunder, the tree shattered over

Naaza's armoured 

shoulders, and the Snake Masho fell to the ground,

his emerald helmet 

bouncing across the clearing. Hooded eyes narrowing,

Naaza scowled as 

the lizard planted a foot on his back and snarled at

him.  



	"HEY! I was TRYING to be WISTFUL, dammit!" Planting

his hands 

against the ground, Naaza lifted his body and slid

his knees under 

himself, throwing his opponent off balance as he

stood and drew two of 

the six swords he habitually carried. "Now where the

hell were we? Oh,



Spawn did this in a recent issue when something bigger

than him flattened him. ^^

 

yeah - SUFFER!" With a wild cackle, the green-haired

Masho whirled 



<Inferno> BBBUUURRRNNN!!! ^_^

<snip again!>



	Coughing, Tytoung let his tongue loll out of his

mouth. 

Whatever that devil coated his armour with, it felt

as if he had just 

had a mouth full of hot coals. And the TASTE! Faugh!

That had been the 

foulest thing he had ever come across, and Tytoung

was by no means a 

picky eater. He'd had raw, rotting meat that tasted

better than the 

rancid grease that Masho used on himself. Actually,

rancid grease 

tasted BETTER. And burned less. He retched a few

times, and spat a 

gobbet of his blood onto the ground. Well, to the

Pit with anything 

THAT foul-tasting: he had a rather tender and juicy

young female to 

track down and properly introduce himself to. She

was quite lovely, 



And I'm sure that Naaza has the same plan. ^___-



he reflected, but she would be ever so much nicer

with a light honey 

glaze, and some of those little potatoes that he

liked on the side, 

and maybe he could talk one of his darling little

sisters into helping 

him make an appetiser... or even into BEING an

appetiser...



That one had so many sexual conotations to it I'm not

even going to try to improve upon it. ^_^



**********



	Something rustled in the trees above her, and

Nasuti froze in 

her tracks. What was that? Slowly, the auburn-haired

woman sat up, 

clutching her purse close to her as she glanced up

into the dark 

shadows of the tree canopy. Somewhere high above,

the moon shone full, 

casting some small measure of its cold, pale light

down through the 

foliage. A strange, winged shadow glided past the

large disc, soaring 

overhead without a care in the world. As Nasuti

watched, her neck 

aching from the strain, the winged form swooped and

twirled out of 

sight, flying off into the distance. 



as is screamed, "Do you want me to gut Ultra Magnus?"



Yeah...I got the DVD.  Special edition! ^_^

 

	"Hey, Nasuti! What are we looking at?" 



Naa, you need him to come up and look at it with her

for awhile...kinda like Indiana Jones did when he

nearly fell over the side with the Tank in the third

movie. ^_^

 

	Nasuti screamed and leapt to the side, landing

heavily on her 

shoulder. Squatting next to where she had been

sitting, Naaza looked 

at her quizzically. 



	"NAAZA! Where did you come from?" 



	The Snake Masho raised an eyebrow. "Well," he said

patiently, 

"a very long time ago, a big, nasty snake demon took

human form and 

went into the nearby village of Kagoshima, in

Southern Kyushu. There, 

he met a young prostitute named-"



ROFL!



	"No," Nasuti groaned, smacking herself in the

forehead, "I 

meant where did you come from JUST NOW, Naaza?" 



	Naaza blinked and pointed up. "Trees," he said, as

though it 

was an explanation.



LOL!!  Heh...heheh...yeah.



	"Oh. I guess that makes sense." Nasuti sighed and

adjusted the 

strap of her purse. "Naaza! You're bleeding!"

Leaning in close, she 

examined the armoured Masho's side, which was

liberally covered with 

puncture marks and broken teeth. "Does it hurt?"



	Naaza shrugged. "Only a lot." After pausing and

looking at the 

sky for a while, he sighed.



Yeah, injuries like that usually do. Heh.

 

<respect the power of my snips!> ^_^



	"Huh?" Naaza looked almost stunned for a second,

then rolled 

his eyes and pursed his lips. "Uh, yeah, a PLAN!

Sure, I got one of 

those, I guess."



Or at least he can fake it really good. ^_^

 

	"You don't have a plan," Nasuti slurred, sliding

down to lie on

the ground and clumsily folding her jacket into a

pillow. "Nope, no 

plan at all..." 



Nope...no hope at all. ^_^



	"Hey, I got a plan!" Naaza leapt to his feet, a

determined set 

to his jaw as he pointed at the prone Nasuti. "A

perfect plan! A plan 

that's such a perfectly planned piece of planning

that you'll be 

stunned that a planner like me planned it! There's

only one flaw in 

the whole plan!" 



	"What?" Nasuti groaned, burying her face in her

makeshift 

pillow. Naaza seemed to be saying something

important, if only the 

world would stop spinning long enough for her to

listen to him. Or 

at least be kind enough to pick a direction and

stick with it. What

was wrong with her? Wrapping her arms around her

stomach, she bit 

her lip and squeezed her eyes shut. She just needed

sleep, that was 

all. She was exhausted. 



	"I have no idea what it is," Naaza admitted

sheepishly. 



That would be the cue for a facefault. ^_^



Lowering his head, he waited for some kind of

response from Nasuti. 

The young woman didn't even twitch. "Uh, Nasuti?"

Using his foot, the 

Snake Masho rolled his companion onto her back, and

looked down at her.

Her eyes were half-shut, and her face was as white

as a sheet. "Wow, 

you didn't tell me you were that scared, Nasuti. I'm

sorry I shocked 

you like that, okay? Don't go and faint on me or

anything..."



	There was still no response. Worried, Naaza knelt

next to the 

woman and felt her forehead with his hand. After a

few seconds, he 

groaned, smacked himself in the forehead, and

thought to remove his 

armoured gauntlet before trying again. The emerald

and ruby yoroi of 



Hehehehehehehe...stupid human tricks.



Doku seemed to hiss angrily as it steamed from his

form in a cloud of 

pinkish-purple smoke. The vapour hung above him for

a brief moment, 

forming the shape of a cobra with a flared hood

before drifting away 

on the breeze. With the sickly-sweet scent of his

armour still hanging 

over them, Naaza rolled up the sleeves of his white

dress shirt and 

placed one hand over Nasuti�s forehead as he checked

her pulse with 

the other, gently pressing his fingers against the

nape of her neck. 



	"Oh, come on, Nasuti," he muttered, as he felt the

fever 

raging through her, and her pulse racing wildly.

"Don�t fall asleep, 

hon. You have to stay awake for me."



After all, it's no fun if I cannot have my way with

you awake! err...damnit!  There I go again!

 

	The auburn-haired woman stirred, and wearily

cracked one eye 

open. "I�m tired," she mumbled, and let her head

loll to one side as 

her eyes began to close again. "Leave me alone."



5 more minutes momma...just 5 more minutes...

 

	"Nasuti," Naaza said firmly, "I need you to listen

to me very 

carefully. What's my name?"



	"Naaza."



	"And I am...?"



	"Cuckoo." 



ROFLMAO!!!

 

	Naaza blinked. He had a bad feeling that it was

going to be a 

long day. 



Well, at least he didn't deny it. ^_^

 

	It had started raining almost with the dawn, and a

decidedly 

waterlogged Masho of Poison staggered through the

forest with a 

drenched armful of university professor. The water

had dampened his 

usually enthusiastic hairstyle, and the green locks

hung limply about 



This from a guy whose armor gets power from water.



his face, dripping rainwater into his eyes with

every motion of his 

head. There was a flash of light, burning his

sensitive eyes, and a 

sensation of searing heat amidst the omnipresent

chill washed over his 

body. Almost the same instant, thunder roared

throughout the forest, 

buffeting Naaza and his cargo like a solid thing.

Eyes wide, the Snake 

Masho turned and looked over his shoulder at the

tree burning less 

than a dozen feet away. 



	"Right," he said quietly. "Well, I may be a nut,

but I can 



At least you don't make any jokes about busting the

nut. ^_^



take a friggin' hint." As the rain drummed against

the steel plates of 

his armour, Naaza hunched forward a bit farther,

doing his best to 

shield Nasuti with his body. The poor girl hadn't

even put up a 

struggle when he scooped her off her feet: he had

known town drunks 

that walked faster and more surely than she had been

managing two 

hours ago. Whatever the devil was wrong with the

girl, Naaza had a 



He helped town drunks? ^^



sick feeling that the big lizard was behind it. He

looked down at the 

face of his burden, covered in a sheen of rainwater.

Her eyes were 

shut, and her lips parted slightly, as though in

sleep. 



	"I am going to peel Spunky like a grape," Naaza

decided, and



So has he figured out what is wrong?  If so, how and

when did he do it?  You might want to include that.  I

mean, the how might be very interesting to delve into.

 As well as for what he does in a bit.

 

nodded reassuringly to himself. "But first, I have

to get you 

somewhere dry." Sighing, the green-haired man looked

around. "Hey! 

There's a place!" The mud squelched under his feet

as he changed 

direction and began to amble towards a dilapidated

and ramshackle old 

building. The walls were weathered, and made of

carved stone that had 

worn itself silken smooth with time. The door fell

off of its hinges 

when Naaza kicked it, and he shrugged. 



Which leads one to wonder what sort of people once

lived there?

 

	"Guess there's nobody home." Naaza gingerly stepped

down onto 

the soft remnants of a straw mat, long ago rotted

and mildewed. The 

thatched roof wasn't any better off, but it was

still keeping the rain 

out, and that was good enough for him. The rest of

floor was carved 

stone as well, he noted with surprise as he walked

over into the main 

room of the house. Whoever built this place had been

planning to stay 

for a while. He was apparently in a kitchen, or some

kind of eating 

room. Lowering Nasuti onto a dusty old wooden table,

Naaza groaned and 

stretched his arms wide to relieve the kink in his

shoulders. No 

food, of course, but then, this place felt like it

had been empty for 

a very long time. He wondered idly who had lived

there; it had been 

left in very good condition, considering it had been

abandoned for 

enough centuries that the forest had overrun any

farmland and 

swallowed the building whole. There were two other

rooms, one off 

either side of the main kitchen. Both were bedrooms,

one large and 



And the grin just widens on his face as he thanks the

gods for providing him with a bed. ^_-



<snip city!>

 

	Her condition had only worsened in his absence. The

girl was 

still sweating profusely, and not merely from her

face. Even her palms 

were dripping with perspiration, and yet her teeth

chattered from 

cold. Her skin was practically chalk white, and she

was moaning 

faintly under her breath. Most worrisome to Naaza,

though, was the way 

in which her body would randomly spasm, the muscles

contracting and 

releasing on their own accord. 



Lucky it wasn't one of those 3 steps and you're dead

type poisons.



	"Okay," he muttered, "alone in an old farmhouse, in

the middle

of a forest, in a thunderstorm, with Nasuti Yagyu.

Left to my own 

devices, as it were." Clearing his throat, he slowly

turned in a full 

circle, scanning the area carefully. "Anybody out

there planning to 

leap in here and come to the rescue?" he whispered,

and waited for a 



Naa.  You're the good guy this time. ^_^ That's your

job!



response. Getting none, he groaned and let his

shoulders slump. "Man," 

he groused, "I just pick the worst damn times not to

be evil..." 



Or at least not do evil. Heh.

 

	Nasuti groaned softly, and Naaza stood up. Reaching

down, he 

gently pulled on the neck of Nasuti's sweater,

stretching the fabric 

down over the curve of her shoulder and baring an

expanse of pale, 

creamy skin. Closing his eyes, Naaza hooked his

fingers under the 



You sure he didn't peak?  Just to see what color they

were? ^_^



exposed strap of her bra and slid it down her

shoulder as well, 

pressing his face against nape of her neck and

feeling her pulse race. 

Carefully, he brushed a few stray locks of auburn

hair out of his way. 

Sluggishly, the woman began to squirm, trying to

move away and 

beginning to lift her arms. 



	"Now," he whispered, licking his lips slightly, and

grabbing 

her bare shoulder to hold her in place, "I know

you're a bit confused, 

and not all here right now. Just trust that I'm

being a good guy... 

please?" He cleared his throat. "I'm going to help."





	Nasuti calmed slightly, and lay still. Naaza

glanced up at her 

face, which was composed and serene. Was she

trusting him, he wondered,

or had she just fainted again? Either way, he

figured, and licked his 

lips again. "You may feel a slight pressure," he

rasped. "More like a 

pinch, really..."



Actually according to some legends when vampires and

other similar creatures did this it was really quite a

pleasant experience...probably some kind of drug they

released into their victim's system to keep them

docile.

 

	He opened his mouth, and his canines extended.

Nasuti's eyes 

shot open, and she cried out as Naaza sank his fangs

into the soft, 

exposed flesh of her shoulder. Her back arched,

slamming her body 

against his own until he placed one hand on her

stomach and forced her 

back down against the table. He wanted to say

something to calm the 



Blade anyone? ^_^



poor girl, but frankly he was a bit busy. His fangs

pulsed, releasing 

a megadose of the antivenin his body had created,

and Nasuti cried out



And this would be an interesting little explanation

technically.  I mean, he created this antivenin...but

was it the right one?  Wouldn't he have needed a

sample at least?  Also it's quite interesting how his

body seems to be a sort of makeshift chemical factory.

 

again, louder than before. Her arms flew up and

clutched him to her 

reflexively, her fingers tangling in his hair as she

threw her head 



Personally I think you should have gone with a slight

bit of...aphrodesiac...or some other drug which would

have made her feel REALLY good. ^_-



back and grimaced. Naaza tried to ignore her hands

slowly and steadily 

tightening their grip on his head and back,

respectively, as he placed 

his free hand behind Nasuti's head, holding her

steady. 



	Nasuti started fidgeting again, moving her legs

this time. 

Her soles of her sneakers scraped against the wooden

surface of the 

table, and an old metal cup rang off of the stone

floor as it fell. 

She had stopped whimpering, but her breath was

becoming more and more 

ragged as her pulse rate accelerated. Naaza smiled

mentally. He had 

been sure to include a slight stimulant in his

antivenin, so that her 

system would deliver it faster. His fangs pulsed

again, and Nasuti 

all but screamed, her entire body spasming as every

muscle in her body 

clenched, and then slowly relaxed as Naaza pulled

his fangs free and 

sat back, wiping her blood from his lips. 



Or maybe licking it clean? ^_^

 

	The chair Naaza had been leaning on tipped over,

and he 

sprawled on the floor. What a nice floor, he

thought, as he let his 

eyes drift shut. Perhaps he would stay there for a

while. It helped 

that he wasn't sure he could get back up. His throat

was aching, and 

he was pretty sure there wasn't enough venom in his

whole body to give 

a mouse the sniffles. This, he reminded himself as

he dragged his body 

across the floor and towards one of the bedrooms, is

why I never, 

ever, use all of my poison in one strike. With a

weary groan, the 

youngest of the Masho made it onto the bed before

surrendering 

consciousness and drifting into a deep, dreamless

sleep.



Honestly, and this is not hentai, I'm surprised he

didn't crawl onto the table with her.  To keep her

warm.  Or to keep himself warm.  I'm dead serious

here.  It's done all the time.  I'm kinda surprised he

didn't put her in the bed to begin with though.



**********



	Nasuti Yagyu slowly opened one eye. Several seconds

passed, 

and nothing seemed immediately out of place. Warily,

she opened the 

other eye and sat up. Things remained normal. 



	Obviously, something was wrong.



Heheheeheh.  Sorry your trip to the Twilight zone is

canceled, but we had this nice Dark Kingdom tour we

KNEW you'd love to go on as an alternative. ^_^

 

<Ultra Snip Zord Power!>



	NAAZA! The Snake Masho was nowhere to be seen.

Still a bit 

unsteady on her legs, Nasuti wobbled across the room

and opened one of 

the two doors she had seen. There was no knowing

what had happened 

while she was out; Naaza might have left her behind

to go get help, or 

maybe tried to lead Tytolung on a false trail. He

might even have been 

drawn away by Tytolung, or fighting with him right

that moment. He 

could already be dead!



Awwee...that's just so sweet that she's so concerned

about him! ^_^

 

	Or, she thought wryly as she entered the other

bedroom, he 

could be right there, sleeping like a baby. With a

soft sigh, the 

auburn-haired woman leaned against the doorframe and

looked down at 

the slumbering form. Sprawled on his back, the Snake

Masho was snoring 

lightly, his mouth hanging open just wide enough

that Nasuti could see 

the tips of his fangs peeking out from behind his

lips when he inhaled.

His emerald hair spilled around his head on the

pillow, falling over 

his face as he rolled over. He actually was kind of

cute, Nasuti 

reflected with a soft smile, and shook her head.

Where the hell had 

that come from?



Had a scene like that in one of my fics. Heh.

 

	Naaza rolled over, and Nasuti gasped. His undergear

armour was 

gone for some reason, and the entire left side of

his shirt was torn 

to shreds, stained red with blood. The sheets

beneath him were 

equally incardine, and the pool was slowly

spreading. 



Don't you hate it when those really nasty wounds break

open like that? ^_^

 

	"Naaza!" Nasuti knelt by the side of the bed,

grasping the 

Masho of Poison by his shoulder and shaking him

awake. "Naaza, wake up!

What's wrong with you?" 



	"Snuh?" A single eye cracked open, and the young

man flopped 

onto his back. "Nasuti? What? Are you okay?"



	"I'm fine, but-"



Naaza: *looks her up and down* I know you're FINE. 



	"Good." Naaza groaned and tried to sit up, before

Nasuti pushed

him back down. "All that being sane was driving me

crazy. What's up?" 



All depends on one's definition of sane and insane.

Heh.

 

	"You're still bleeding! Why didn't you heal your

wounds?" 



	The Masho smiled sheepishly. "Er... I thought they

made me 

more interesting?" 



	Nasuti scowled. 



Oh.  Already falling for the GF scowl.  Poor guy is

already whipped.

 

	"Fine," Naaza sighed, "TAKE the boring old truth.

By the time 

I was able to figure out what was wrong with you,

you were pretty far 

gone. I figured you couldn't afford to wait until I

had healed myself, 

so I did you first. I didn't know I'd drain myself

doing it." 



	Thunder boomed, and Nasuti smiled. "Can you walk?" 



	"Walk? But it's pouring rain out there!" Naaza

pointed at the 

far wall, then blinked and snapped his fingers. "Oh,

yeah! It's 

raining outside, and water makes my armour stronger,

so..." 



	"So suit up." Nasuti crossed her arms across her

chest and 

gestured towards the door with her head. "We may as

well look for 

everyone else while you get your strength back."



Maybe they should bandage that wound as best they can

first? ^_^  Even if he heals it, he's still losing

blood after all.

 

**********



	Tytoung sat in the underbrush and ignored the chill

seeping 

through his bones. He could handle something as

insignificant as the 

sudden downpour, if it meant victory in the end. He

would NOT return 

to his brother Pedri with news of failure. Just

picturing the 

egotistical smirk that bastard would get made his

talons twitch. Maybe 

Pedri didn't intend to reward Tytoung for his

services: in his current 

frame of mind, it didn't bother the large and scaly

creature. He'd 

just rip through Pedri -or whoever else was in his

way- and goddamn 

TAKE what he wanted! 



So why doesn't he do that now? ^_^  He seems to think

he can, after all. Heh.

 

	Speaking of things I want, he thought, licking his

lips, here 

comes one now. The door of the small farmhouse swung

open, and the 

morsel he had been tailing walked out of her haven.

Foolish frail. 

Indoors his immense size would have been too great a

disadvantage, but 

he'd known she had to come out eventually. 



Why bother with worrying about property damage?   Why

not just wreck the place?

 

	Next out was a figure that made Tytoung's throat

ache all over 

again. The protector, the annoying gnat that kept

buzzing around his 

head just long enough for his snack to escape him.

Didn't even taste 

good. He'd just squish the bastard and get him out

of the way, once 

and for all. He had rather hoped he had already done

that.



Naa.  Even we computer guys don't get that kind of

luck.

 

	The pair staggered off into the brush, leaning on

each other 

for support, and Tytoung snarled. It was too damn

wet. Too cold. He 

didn't like it. Hunting at night had been bad

enough. For a moment, 

he was tempted to just leap out of the scrub and

finish them both, but 

he knew better than to give in to his baser urges.

He would wait until 

they had lowered their guard, until they thought

they were safe.



	The pair staggered off into the brush, and Tytoung

followed.



**********



	Naaza scratched his head and looked around. Hey, he

thought to 

himself, a bunch of trees. Who would have expected

that? And over to 

the left... another bunch of trees. Placing his

armoured fists on his 

hips, he strained his eyes and hoped something would

start looking 

familiar really quick. 



	"Right," he said finally. "Well, I give up. Where

are we, 

Nasuti?" 



The society of men is going to hang him.  We NEVER ask

for directions...Ryouga being the exception to that

rule, as even if he did, he'd STILL be lost in a

moment. Heh.

 

	"What?" Nasuti turned and gave Naaza a look of

surprise. "Why 

should I know where we are?" 



	"Well, I WAS following you..."



	"You were supposed to be in the LEAD!" Nasuti

groaned and 

tugged on her hair, stamping one foot in the muddy

earth. "What the 

hell were you doing following ME?" 



	"Now, Nasuti," Naaza argued, making a placating

gesture, 

"let's be fair. Between the two of us, which one is

more likely to 

know what they're doing at any given moment? I mean,

I was just 

playing the odds."



Truth hurts. ^_^



	"Are you telling me we've been wandering aimlessly

for hours? 

You have no idea where you are, and no idea where

you're going?"



	"Yeah." Naaza grinned and scratched behind one ear,

laughing 

nervously. "Pretty much business as usual, I

guess..."



And you know what that means. Heh.

 

	The auburn-haired woman stared at the Snake Masho

for a moment,

an undefinable emotion simmering in her eyes. Very

slowly, she lifted 

one leg and reached down, removing her sneaker.

"Come over here," she 

said, lifting the shoe like a weapon, "and let me

smack you with this."



At least she didn't pull out a mallet.  Be thankful

for that. ^_^

 

	"Uh," the Snake Masho stuttered, backing away from

the slowly 

advancing woman, "I really think I'd rather not,

actually..."



Damn...he knows the laws of anime.  Heh, and the laws

of GFs.

 

	"Come here!" Nasuti yelled, and lunged at the man,

swinging her

sneaker like a club. Caught off-guard, Naaza barely

had time to yelp 

before the young woman slammed into him and sent

both crashing 

backwards through the thick underbrush. The mud was

a bit of a 

surprise, and freezing cold as both Nasuti and Naaza

skidded down a 

steep incline of ebony slime. Slipping and sliding

in the mire, Naaza 

finally glided to a stop and managed to make it to

his knees, wiping 

helplessly at the goo covering his armour. With a

groan, he shook his 

arms in disgust, splattering mud everywhere. 



	"Serves you right," Nasuti said imperiously, as she

watched 

the Masho of Poison lose his footing and slam back

down into the black 

muck. Struggling to her own feet, the young woman

took three steps 



Nazaa:  More?

Nasuti:  What?!

Nazaa:  Can I have some more mistress?  I'LL BE YOUR

SLAVE!



and slammed face-first into the loam. Naaza chuckled

and released his 

grasp on her ankle. His smile suddenly died as he

looked up, his eyes



Heh.

 

going wide as his jaw hung slack. Looking over her

shoulder at him, 

Nasuti could swear that his face lost all colour. 



	"Oh, no," he said quietly, barely audible over the

driving 

rain. "My sanity and I made a deal, damn it! I put

up with being looked

at funny, and it makes sure I never, never, NEVER

think about that! It 

shouldn't even BE here! It's supposed to be

somewhere far away from 

me!" 



Denial is not just a river in Egypt. ^_^

 

	Blinking, Nasuti turned and looked into the thick

curtain of 

rain that surrounded them both. Squinting, she could

just barely make 

out a tall spire of ebony dominating the vast plain

of black slime. 

"What the hell is that? Looks like we might be able

to take some 

shelter..."



	"No. No, no, no, no, no! We're leaving right now,

Nasuti."



What's in that place?

 

Naaza turned and began slogging back the way they

had come. The bushes 

shuddered slightly, and the Snake Masho watched in

surprise as a tree 

lifted and hurled itself in his direction. The

green-haired man leapt 

to the side, and the venerable old pine skidded down

the incline like 

a giant's toboggan. 



	Thunder rumbled threateningly, and a shadowy form

crawled out 

of the thicket, lifting its massive head and hissing

threateningly. 

Naaza responded instinctively, spreading his feet

wide and holding his 

hands far to the sides of his body, slowly beginning

to sway back and 

forth as he bared his fangs and hissed in return. 



Reminds me of Zelda 64 when you fight Gannon.  The

guys watching me play and myself actually craned our

necks when he rose up out of the ashes of his

fortress.  I imagine that's the kind of thing we're

seeing here.

 

	"I'm afraid you won't be going anywhere," Tytoung

snarled in 

a menacing and rasping voice. "Not ever again." The

soft loam squelched

between his thick claws as he rose to his hind legs,

drawing up to his 

full height and glaring down at his opponent. 



	"Good to see you again, Spunky!" Naaza replied

cheerfully, 

drawing two of the four katana that hung at his

waist. "Such a shame 

you have to leave so soon..."



	Tytoung laughed, a dry chuckle that rattled off as

he stepped 

forward and tilted his head to one side. "How droll.

You think you can 

actually defeat me?" 



Alright!  Evil villain stock dialouge!  You ever think

the 'good guys' would make fun of it?  Then again,

they have their own stock dialouge. Heh...I suppose

that's why Ash made such a cool good guy.  Never used

that stuff.



After all...good...bad...he had the gun. ^_^

 

	"Well, I was planning to rough you up a little

first, on 

account of I don't like your face, but we're in a

bit of a rush." 

Naaza began to step forward eagerly, when Nasuti

grabbed him by one of 

the spikes on his shoulderplates. 



	"What are you thinking? You aren't even at full

strength, and 

you're actually going to pick a fight with a god?" 



	Naaza shrugged. "Well, I'll be damned! Looks like I

am." 



As Rob Zombie's "Super Beast" plays in the background.

 Just out of curiosity what sort of music did you

write to here, if any?



<Getting out the popcorn and doing a bit of snipage>



	Naaza met the charge, crossing his wrists and

slamming his 

forearms across Tytoung's throat. The scaled

creature brought his 

fists down on the Masho's armoured back, and Naaza

slipped, falling to 

his knees. As Tytoung let his jaw drop in a

triumphant grin, the 

Snake Masho shot his arm up, reaching straight into

Tytoung's maw and 

down his throat. The lizard gagged as he felt five

steel-sheathed 

fingers close around the base of his tongue and

squeeze. With a sharp 

tug on his tongue, Naaza forced Tytoung to double

over and swung his 

armoured feet against the creature's scaled belly.

Planting his feet, 

Naaza stretched back one fist and grinned, narrowing

his hooded, 

golden eyes. The fist flew forward with blinding

speed, slamming into 

the side of Tytoung's head with a sound like a

gunshot.



	It was Naaza who screamed, however, as he felt

something in 

his gauntlet crunch, and flex in directions it never

had before. 



Or at least not recently.  Heh, never hit something

your bones or your ki shield can't break...otherwise

you get this. 



Fighting off a sudden wave of nausea, he gritted his

teeth and slammed 

the broken hand into Tytoung's thick skull seven

more times before the 

titanic lizard wrapped his claws around Naaza�s head

and peeled the 

Masho loose from his body. With a violent flick of

his muscled wrist, 

Tytoung sent the smaller man flying. 



That is some serious pain tollerance.  I mean I'd be

going into shock by now, and I'm sure so would most

other people.

 

	Naaza landed hard, mud splashing up in all

directions as he 

flopped onto the ground like a dead fish. His head

was pounding, and 

the feeling of nausea was getting worse. He tried to

flex his fingers,



Looks like that's what is happening too. Heh.

 

and was rewarded by a jolt of pain running from his

nails to his 

shoulder and back again. So far, he was right: this

had been a very 

long day. With every breath, his ribs reminded him

that they weren't 

feeling too happy with his idea of fun. 



	Tytoung pounced, swinging his head low and butting

Naaza with 

his snout. Flailing, the Masho soared through the

air as another bolt 

of lightning flashed in the distance, hitting the

earth headfirst. 

Facedown in the mud, he barely had the strength to

lift his head and 

gasp for breath as the ground trembled with the

weight of the 

approaching monster. 



	"I will honour your bravery," Tytoung rumbled.

"Know that the 

one you have sought to protect will suffer only

after you have died 

defending her." Rising once again onto his hind

legs, Tytoung raised 

one massive scaly fist, fingers curved and claws

trembling with 

anticipation. He brought the killing hand down... 



That's refreshing.  Kinda.  ^^;;;

 

	And Naaza rolled to the left, barely dodging the

strike and 

rising to his knees in the deepening mire. What was

once a beach of 

fine volcanic ash was quickly becoming a bog.

Coughing, wheezing, and 

feeling a familiar ache in his other side that told

him he had just 

managed to reopen the wounds he received in their

prior fight, it was 

all the battered warrior could do to force himself

back onto his feet. 



	Tytoung was there, and a scaled fist smashed into

the side of 

Naaza's unarmoured head. His neck snapped back, and

the Masho fell to 



Did he lose his helmet again?



the ground again. Tytoung raised his hind leg,

stamping down with his 

foot just as Naaza mustered the strength to dodge

again, sitting up 

and forcing the lizard's leg to bend the wrong way

with a lightning 

fast strike to the kneecap. Tytoung dropped back on

all fours, 

favouring the limb even more than he had before.

Naaza staggered to 

his feet once again, weaving back and forth. The two

locked gazes, 

and Tytoung nearly flinched. 



I wonder what he saw?

 

	In that moment of hesitation, the Snake Masho

launched a 

desperate strike, wading through the mire and

slamming his reptilian



Heh, reminds me of the King of Fighters and their

desperation combos. ^_^

 

opponent with punches that moved faster than human

eyes could follow, 

blurs of green followed by explosions of red as he

rained blow after 

blow upon the head of Tytoung. A left to the head, a

right to the 

stomach, a knee to the ribs, a kick to the injured

knee, Naaza was 

like a dervish, driving the larger creature back

with the sheer volume 

of his attacks. 



Yep, definately the King of Fighters and their

desperation combos.  Course you'd think he wouldn't

hit the head after his recent umm injury.  You might

want to say something about that, if he's even feeling

his crushed hand anymore.

 

	Surprise can only last so long, however, and

Tytoung brought 

his long, ponderous skull down like a piledriver,

smashing into the 



<Rao> Now DIE, DAMN YOU, DIE!



crown of the Masho's head and dropping the youthful

warrior into the 

mud yet again. Slamming his hand into the small of

the man's back, 

Tytoung lifted Naaza from the ground and held his

limp body up to the 

heavens like an offering before slamming it back

down and grinding his 

heel into the Snake Masho's kidneys. 



Ouch. ^^

 

<yet even more snipage!>



	The female had fallen in the slick mud, and was

simply staring 

up at him with wide, frightful eyes. He lifted his

killing hand, 

planning to break her neck with a single swat, when

something suddenly 

felt wrong. The female had raised one hand to her

mouth, and seemed 

to be looking down... following her gaze, Tytoung

stared numbly at 

the two steel katana blades protruding from his

stomach. As he watched,

they slowly twisted, and began to pull away from

each other with a 

horrid tearing sound. 



Nice.  Though why didn't he just cut the guy in

half...then again, that was proving to be somewhat

troublesome.  Then again, this is about as much

trouble.

 

	"YOU!" Tytoung howled, looking under his arm to see

the Masho 

of Poison perched on his back, straining to complete

his task. "Why 

in the nine hells can't you just STAY DOWN?" 



	"I'm insane," Naaza growled. "What's YOUR excuse?"

Biting his

bottom lip until it bled, the Snake Masho wrapped

his legs around 

Tytoung's torso and began to squeeze. "What's the

matter? Feeling a 

bit constricted?" 



And so the PUN-ishment continues. ^_^

 

	Tytoung staggered backwards, trying in a vain to

reach the 

tenacious Masho, but his blasted arms were simply

not long enough for 

the task. Raising his tail, he bashed Naaza

repeatedly in the back 



So much for the itch. Heh.



and head, but the Snake Masho merely tightened his

grip. Finally, the 

huge reptile threw himself into the air, landing on

his back in an 

attempt to crush the man under his body weight. Mud

flew in great waves

and flurries, as the two rolled around and thrashed

wildly. Nasuti 

covered her eyes and looked away as a great

undulating wall of flying 

muck splattered over her, and then it was over. The

rain still fell, 

and the boggy ground was calm. Tytoung lay on the

ground, to the left 

of a motionless Naaza. 



	The other half of Tytoung lay on Naaza's right. As

Nasuti 

watched, the corpse began to hiss, dissolving into a

sizzling mound 

of featureless flesh, then evaporating completely. 



Damn Zoanoids. 

 

**********



	Mother's eyes snapped open, her mouth stretching

wide in a 

silent wail as the wires and tubes swirling around

her body came to 

life, whipping and snapping like a nest of snakes. A

thick cloud 

of bubbles washed up into the tube, making its

contents impossible 

to see for several seconds. 



	Pedri stepped back in surprise, staring up at the

tube as his 

glass tumbled from his fingers, forgotten. Erdge

spun on her heel, 

long braid of hair curling around her neck as she

gazed at the 

spectacle unfolding before her. 



	"Did she just-?"



	"Yes," Pedri said breathlessly, "that was Mother.

She's in 

pain. And that can only mean..." 



	The shield of bubbles boiled away into the top of

the tube, 

leaving Mother floating as serenely as before. A

single thing had 

changed, however: marking her left cheek was an

indigo tattoo that 

hadn't been there a moment before. The marking

appeared to be 

Japanese kanji. 



	Pedri leaned in close, pressing his hand against

the surface 

of the tube. "Houshoku," he read aloud. "That means

that they must 

have gotten Brother Tytolung..." He turned back to

Erdge, a determined 

look on his features. "Come with me, Erdge. This

require our immediate 

attention!" 



Is this where we get to see what they mean by "killed

again?"



**********



	Nasuti slid across the mud, gently lifting Naaza's

head in her 

hands and resting it in her lap. The green-haired

man hadn't moved 

since the battle ended, and his eyes were closed.

She wasn't sure if 

he was even breathing. Heart in her throat, the

woman pressed her 

fingers against his neck, feeling out the carotid

artery. 



	"Please, Naaza," she whispered, stroking the side

of his face, 

slick from rain, "you can't die when you've won!

What kind of hero 

would do that? Please?" The pulse was there; weak,

but there. 



Lots of them.  Ever watch Gladiator?  Or even

Braveheart? Or Transformers the Movie for that matter?

 

	Naaza's eyes fluttered open. "I-is he... dead?" 



	"I'm not sure, Naaza. But he's gone." 



	"Oh." Naaza lifted his head slightly. "Am I dead?" 



	Nasuti chuckled. "I don't think so." 



	"Well, that's good, then." The Snake Masho closed

his eyes 

again and laid his head back in her lap.

"Nighty-night..."



Still...as beat to shit as he is, you might want to

get him someplace else. ^_^

 

	Nasuti smiled as the Masho began to snore almost

immediately. 

Slowly, she became aware of someone standing nearby,

and looked up. A 

tall and slender man with long silver hair and an

eyepatch looked 

back down at her, holding out an old-fashioned

bamboo umbrella. 



	"Well," he said with an almost resentful tone, "I

suppose that 

you'll be wanting to carry him into the Keep.

Hotaru's already waiting 

back there, so we'd better be going." 



I like how he doesn't even bother to pick Naaza up

himself.  Or even offer. Heh.

 

	"How long were you here?" Nasuti asked Rajura

suspiciously. 



	"What?" The one-eyed Masho of Deception almost

looked hurt at 

her implication. "I was willing to help, but I knew

he didn't NEED me! 

Honestly, Ms. Yagyu, you can be quite paranoid, at

times." Turning, he 



With good reason. Heh.  Course I wouldn't be at all

surprised if after this she starts throwing out the

occasional Kame Hame Ha's, or even pulling out REALLY

BIG GUNS when someone so much as startles her. Heh.



began to walk towards the ebony spire Nasuti had

seen earlier. "Are 

you coming, or not?" 



	Nasuti looked down at Naaza. With a sigh, she slung

him over 

her shoulder and began to follow the silver-haired

Masho into the 

pouring rain.



Nice!  Very nice!  One big long fight scene!  What

more can you ask for?  Especially for a DBZ fanatic

like myself. Heh.  You know though, when you make it

this perfect you make it very hard to do anything

remotely resembling correction on these things. ^_-



Hehehehehehe, I hope this helped.  Sorry for the

delay, but I've been rather busy recently.  



Take it easy.



K'thardin

"I'd have 4 million years to scrape you off the walls.

 I might just chance it!"

	-Optimal Optimus



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