Nidoking <Matthew.P.Katinas@rose-hulman.edu> wrote:
Ranma 1/2 -- The Contract
Chapter 1: Shampoo Kisses Like a Cat!
An interesting read so far. The change in Shampoo's curse has a lot of
comic potential -- especially with Akane not understanding it correctly
-- and you've used it to good effect in this chapter. I do want to see
(soon) some sort of potential way by which Shamps might get out of the
curse; if it continues to be as inevitable as it seems, there's not
going to be much room for story.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
Gary Kleppe
http://www.akane.org/gary/comics.html