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Hi, Latin D!
Hi, Morgan! Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Yes, it's been a long while since I've sent anything. No, I wasn't
dead.
Hurry up and post the next chapter of Dark Crusade then, m'friend. I
don't think I can hold your fans back for much longer! ^_^
It's mid-terms, okay?
Ugh. Sorry 'bout that. I guess it's not the best time to tell you my
classes finish in less than a month, ne? :-p
But I'm not about to let a chapter by my good friend
Latin D go by without a comment or two from me, no sir! ^_^
Heh. Oh, yes? Well, I guess I'll have to comment on every little piece
of literature you write, then, to return the favor. ^_^
Okay, first of all, I'd love to do a line-by-line on this, but I
can't. I
Not needed, really. After al, this is simply a revision, no matter how
much I changed the original.
can't for two simple reasons. First of all, I'm trapped in the middle
of
mid-terms, and it would probably take me more than a week to finish. I
thought you might prefer something a bit more timely. ^_^
Heh. The truth is, while I like receiving comments quickly, I have a
motto: it's NEVER too late to receive C&C.
Second -and I mean this- I'm speechless. I had a few problems with the
original version of this chapter (namely the no-Rick thing, and the
ease
with which Ranma got shovelled into the RDF), but those were all taken
care of quite nicely this time around. I think the aspect of
Ranma-as-trainer is brilliant, and allows for a slower introduction to
the RDF.
That's the idea, and I came up with it after a log discussion with Jason
Miao and MageOkhi. So I owe it all to you two!
It's also lovely
to see Rick getting some screen time, after all that while he spent
trapped in the bowels of the SDF-1.
One of my biggest mistakes. Rick's fans are a powerful lot! ^_^
The bathtub scene was wonderful - it seems Ranma
wound up picking up more from Soun and Genma than just martial arts,
ne? Next thing you know, he'll start playing shogi with Max all day.
^_^
Actually... You'll see. ^_^
No grammar or spelling errors that I was able to notice, and I pretty
much
Oh, I owe it all to my wonderful team of prereaders. Thanks again, guys!
used up most of my bad jokes for this one on the original copy. ^_^
That is the one thing I can't believe. You have tons of those! :-p
Wish I had the time to give you more detail, pal: maybe next time,
huh? I swear, chapter 7 gets the full Hudson treatment! Whether
that's good or bad is up to your opinion, I guess. ^_~
Heh. It's defenitely good, believe me. Even better than the dreaded
Latin_D treatment, which involves a number of horrible jokes and few
constructive commentary. ^_^
Anyway, I just wanted to congratulate you on a job incredibly done.
Now get to work on your next chapter, already! ^_^
Heheh. A DBZ shortfic comes first (gee, I just can't get tired of DBZ,
it seems. To think so many people hate it...), but then chapter 7 will
arrive. I'm like the turtle: slow, but... ^_~
See you, Morgan!
Latin_D