Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][Robotech/Ranma] Silent Battles - Chapter 6 - Revised
From: "Anand Rao" <jouve25@hotmail.com>
Date: 10/31/2000, 12:52 PM
To: "Latin_D" <latin_d@uol.com.ar>, "FFML" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Hey! Nice Revision!

Ranma-the-Trainer works better than Ranma-the-Pilot.  Also, if we are seeing
more from his point of view, you won't need to re-write everything that
happened in the Robotech series verbatum.  Veritech battles are cool
visually, but can get dull in reading.  :)  Definitely looking forward to
more dialog and interpersonal stuff.

The whole bathroom scene was classic!  Poor Rick, he's never gonna know what
hit him!  I can definitely see one big mess though, between Kyle, Minmei,
Rick, Ranma, and Lisa.  They are all interconnected in some way.  Ranma
fighting Kyle is definitely one-sided, but Ranma training Rick to beat Kyle?
THAT would be fun!  :)

Later,

Anand


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