Hey! Nice Revision!
Ranma-the-Trainer works better than Ranma-the-Pilot. Also, if we are seeing
more from his point of view, you won't need to re-write everything that
happened in the Robotech series verbatum. Veritech battles are cool
visually, but can get dull in reading. :) Definitely looking forward to
more dialog and interpersonal stuff.
The whole bathroom scene was classic! Poor Rick, he's never gonna know what
hit him! I can definitely see one big mess though, between Kyle, Minmei,
Rick, Ranma, and Lisa. They are all interconnected in some way. Ranma
fighting Kyle is definitely one-sided, but Ranma training Rick to beat Kyle?
THAT would be fun! :)
Later,
Anand