DB Sommer wrote:
The military docks and shipyards were built on metal orbital
platforms that adjoined the commercial docks.
They had tried building them out of straw and sticks, but some damn wolf
kept blowing them down.
"Little pigs, little pigs, let me in!"
"Are you calling us fat!?" screamed every female member of the crew.
The wolf angel big-sweated as Unit Zero emerged, wielding a very
large
and very sharp progressive knife.
"I will skin you alive," stated Rei in her usual emotionless tone.
And the wolf was afraid.
"And then, we will dine on you with some fava beans and a nice
Chianti... wai."
Make that 'very afraid'.
"Even though our defences at Ursa Major, Proxima-Centauri and
Jupiter intercepted most of the asteroids in this latest attack, that
one still managed through and come within several thousand kilometres
of our home world," noted UNSC Rep East Asia & Oceania.
So the Angels are throwing spitballs in this one. Interesting.
Spitballs about the size of Texas. For maximum gross-out factor.
"But you are! My heart belongs to you and you alone!" declared
Maya as she glomped onto Ritsuko's arm.
Heh. Different Maya this time out.
most of the cast will be quite different - with the exception of
Misato who's fun just the way she is.
"... this pilot," resumed Kihl, "is your own son. Aside from the
suspicion that you're packing the crew of NEGEV with your relatives,
in-laws and former colleauges, he has got quite a disciplinary record.
Three counts of insubordination."
Definitely a different Shinji.
Think 'smartass Shinji'. I confess to being influenced by Anand
Rao's very excellent 'His Only Begotten Son' and the monumental
CoaEG by John Biles and Rod M (esp the scene in #17 when Shinji
has that big fight with Gendou over Rei). Though it is my own
fault if this Shinji didn't go down well.
"Indeed," said Kihl as he acknowledged Gendou's points. "And to
ensure that we stay within the schedule, NEGEV should launch and then
proceed to rendevous at Ursa Minor in 72 Earth Standard Hours. There,
you will take the S2 engines, Unit Two and Valkyrie onboard."
And Asuka as well. Wonder how she'll be different.
MWAHAHAHAHA...
"It looks disgusting!" protested Shinji, pointing at the outgrowths
from the new cockpit that had spread throughout the body of the
prowler. They looked like a cross between varicose veins and tree
roots.
Largely in part because they were.
Well, I haven't stolen *that* much from CoaEG. ;)
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those 'file' signs are quite annoying.
Yes, will change to normal double inverted commas.
Didn't realise that this would create a problem... :O
Interesting work. I'll keep my eyes open for more.
Thanks! On my side, I'm keeping my eyes open for more of 'Avenging'!
Nice work on 'Through the Eyes of Infinity' btw.
Many thanx for the proof-reading as well! ^_^
regards
elt