I have to agree with Jamie, Speed.. it's
an interesting story, but very hard on the eyes.
You need to indent and double space between
paragraphs. Just like this letter I'm writing to
you. Note the blank line between each paragraph.
Notice the indent setting off the beginning of
the paragraphs.
To be sure, it's better to indent with spaces and not
tabs, or to not indent at all. Tabs are not always the
same size for everyone, which makes a big difference
when you have to break lines. As it stands, Ed, your
first line in each paragraph is apparently wrapped two
characters longer than the rest when viewed on my
computer.