Speed, just one word:

"Formatting"

Either provide indentation at the beginning, or put a space between 
your paragraphs. Do something, because my eyes started to swim when 
I attempted to read this - which is a shame because on the surface, 
you seem to have written something well worth reading.

Jamie
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