So... Ranma goes up to a mountain to train with his father in how to
'think before he acts', while Akane is training about rage control with her
father. Not a bad concept, but as I read this I couldn't help but think how,
with a slight adjustment, this could end up an even more interesting story
that goes full circle. Of course, this is -your- story, but here's a rewrite
idea I had which would be damned interesting in my opinion:
Firstly, be a bit more ambiguous as to -how- and -why- Akane is being
trained by her father. Second, make Ookami into a <hint> she. I'm sure you
can figure out where I'm going with this. <grin> :) Leave the rest of the
story -exactly- as it is, as it would fit perfectly.
-Troy