Which of you didn't like the ending of Chapter 5 of One War, Three Sisters?  I was, and so was one of my prereaders.  So after banging ideas for a bit, I've written some more and made the end a bit more in line with Nabiki's character.

You can find it at

http://abnighthawke.homestead.com/ABNightHawkeMain.html

Enjoy and let me know how you liked the new ending.

Thanks much!

Adam


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