Akane nodded and blotted her lips on a tissue. "Just
one of my friends. No one you'd know."
Keiichi + Instant Nannichuan = Una!
No... Keiichi + Instant Nannichuan = Keiichi who won't be able
to be affected by jusenkyo water for the next few hours
or did you mean Nyannichuan?
The party was progressing pretty decently. Ranma and
Akane's dance number had been a big hit and now other partyers
were taking turns singing kareoke.
partiers ?
karaoke.
delightful in others, especially those which she had chosen
not to cover with underwear.
You mean her legs? her stomach? her arms? Personally, i typically
choose not to cover up to 90 percent of my body with underwear,
leaving that task solely to my other clothes.
herself - Hmm. Seen the picture of Miss Spears in the red
latex outfit?
heh.
Ranma shuddered and squeezed both her breasts so
tightly it very nearly hurt. In response, Akane increased the
tension on his sac.
Ouch! Let go! *squeezes tighter*
No, you first! *clench*
OW!
ARGH!
heh.
In only a few precious seconds, Akane felt her self
regaining the sensation she had lost. Her toes curled in
anticipation and every hair on her body seemed to be standing
on end.
herself
After he finished drying himself, Ranma picked her up
again and took her into the other room and laid her down upon
her futon.
Her futon? Ranma is male at the moment. Is Akane living there
now? Are they in Megumi's room?
I think it's Megumi's futon, which Ranma is borrowing until he
can afford to buy his own furniture. However, i don't think this
was the meaning the author was trying to convey.
Before very long, he realized that she was becoming
wet again as he stroked her clit.
Well, that's the general idea, isn't it?
i think the general idea means wet in a place -other- than the
part being sprayed by the showerhead, which they forgot to turn
off.
"Thanks."
After the young man passed out, Ryouga picked up some
clothes from the floor of the apartment. He quickly pulled
them on and ran out the door.
Stepping over the now unconscious young man in the process.
now-unconscious
"He's not 'begonning'!" Skuld lamented.
Ranma: Boo.
Skuld: *runs screaming* Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
LOL!
i think that if ranma said "begone" in response to that it'd
be a lot more funny though.
Ryouga slung the bandannas at Ranma's feet and rushed
the pigtailed martial artist. Ranma hopped over the bandannas,
allowing them to cut through the carpet and padding and embed
into the concrete underneath. Flipping over him, Ranma caught
the other young man by the shoulders and sent him sprawling to
the ground.
Should that slung be flung?
wrong tense in either case, you need preterite, not orphaned
past participle (unless i'm mistaken)
"Let's take this outside before we destroy any more of
my security deposit than we have to," Ranma sarcastically
sniped at his enemy.
anymore
BZZZZT!
"I suppose that asking you why you didn't tell me you
were living in the same apartment as a shape shifting martial
artist is out of the question, then?"
shape-shifting
shapeshifting
"How did you get here, P-chan?" Akane cooed to the
piglet. "And where is Ryouga-kun?"
Who was it that just commented that complete obliviouslness
takes skill?
Well at least there's one thing Akane at least comes in second
for... with Kuno first.
"There!" Skuld gleefully shouted, waving her sensor.
"There's another one!" she cried, pointing to P-chan who was
trying to give Ranma a red-eye from his position in between
Akane's vinyl clad breasts.
Give Ranma a late night plane ride? Or an eveeeel-eye?
Responded to by someone else
"I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU..." she
screamed, over and over again as she struck.
I think the words will hurt more than the kicks.
Nah. Just fuel for Ryouga's ki blasts
Ryouga blanched and turned green at Akane's
imprecations. He stood, only to be angrily slapped. He watched
for a second as Akane turned away for him and ran into Ranma's
waiting embrace. Burying her face in his chest, she began to
wail like a lost soul.
having trouble with your ls? ;> implecations
no, he's right. i think i and someone else both already said
that though.
"Oh, Nabiki, your tree costume was very cute! You
should have stayed for the kareoke. You would have been a big
hit."
karaoke
You missed it earlier.