Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fic][Altaverse][R1/2 - SM] Misshapen Destiny ch02 [DRAFT]
From: Richard Robinson
Date: 10/3/2000, 8:19 PM
To: Tangent
CC: ffml@fanfic.com
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richardrobinsonjr@yahoo.com

I liked the explanation for Ranma's recovery time. Kho Ome
( go home? ) is quite a character a Happosai without Happi's
morals. After all happi never tried to rape anyone, especially
kids. I always thought the anime Ranko looks younger that Ranma.

I enjoyed the concept that beating Kho Ome got a position as an
amazon warrior. I hope you teach her some of the more rarely used
techniques, Shark Fist, Breaking point, Splitting Cat hairs etc.
As well as Chestnuts Roasting ( Amaguriken ) and Rising Dragon
Blast ( Hiryu Shoten Ha ).

Say maybe they could find the miner who found the scroll that
contained the secret of the Shi Shi Hokodan and maybe some other
scrolls with useful techniques in the mine shaft as well.


Then she berated herself for missing a stupid idiot who had gotten her drowned, cursed,
and then had abandoned her once he had found out that she was still alive. She still missed
him though.


People have been known to miss toothaches, broken bones and
poison ivy. Some people run back to their abusers, until one of
them dies. I hope this Ranma gets better from this disease.

Well having Ranma collapse from exhaustion is certainly a
turnabout. Fair enough as I have seen several fanfics which make
a point that her opponent should be tired.

As before this can be replied to publicly or privately.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@yahoo.com

Why shouldn't truth be stranger than fiction? Fiction, after all,
has to make sense.
  Mark Twain (1835-1910)

"If toast always lands butter-side down and cats always land on
their feet, what
will happen if you strap toast to the back of a cat and drop it?"

Monday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
--Steven Wright




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