From: Stefan Gagne
Oh, I know. It's intense and fast and slams you upside the head with a
crazy
situation without giving one pause for breathing.
Eh? After they got thrown out of the dorm, the pace felt rather slow.
Perhaps it was just me in a rush.
And you should think about dropping the (*). It really upsets the intense
pace you want to set.
And I have some thing to say about this:
On one level, Belldandy was his contractually bound willing living fantasy
and sex toy
On another level, she was a goddess first class unlimited and not likely to
take this sort of thing lying down.
Can you think of all the "fun" they can have with her magic? You should.
Roll with it, Bell doesn't get enough as it is.