(18 and over only, please: very absurd adult material within
in full defiance of plausibility and common sense.)
Also, if you read this expecting accurate canon
characterization and such, I reserve
the right to mock you openly. Call it an elseworlds;
I have plans for how each character is different in this
remix.
Oddly enough, I thought your characterization almost dead
on. The Keiichi we know from the manga _would_ rephrase
the wish like that, given slightly different starting
circumstances (the whole Peorth story-line suggests that
this is almost as much his 'true intent' as the canon
wish); and his reactions in the rest of the story
are dead-on. Ootaki also seemed right to me; where is Tamiya,
though?
Belldandy, obviously it's harder to say. Given the wish's
phrasing, though, why not? I'm not sure there's any place
in canon where we learn for _sure_ that Belldandy has no
previous 'experience' (as we do for Urd).
PS: Loved the footnotes!