I'm not really into lemons, but the thought of a xover between RK and ST
caught my attention. I like it a lot... (one reason is cos I don't like the
pair-up between Sakura and Oogami--she's too good for him.^^) oh, and I
don't get this part (forgive me for being obtuse) :
Sakura nodded slowly. She didn't believe him; there was more to him
than he would tell, if he was able to defeat her enemies so quickly.
After a few minutes she spoke up. "Kenshin-san, may I travel with you?
I've nowhere else to go and I don't think I can make it alone here."
Does Sakura have amnesia or something? Cos knowing her as the caring,
kind-hearted girl she is, she probably would've gone straight home, knowing
that there were people who were worrying about her. (uh... right?)
Another thing, though... you gave no explanation about Sakura's sudden
departure. I skipped the love scene, but all in all, I liked it a lot and it
has a lot of potential. Hmm... I wonder why no one's ever thought of a xover
like that? Has one been made?
::waves:: Matte!
Itsumo,
Natsuki
ICQ #42864627
natsukichan@Mailops.com
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Ranma-sama!! ^_^
"Why rail against fate; what pure love has brought
together let no man pull asunder. Come, let us
enter the bath together!"
"Are you nuts? Help me, Ryougaaaa!"
--a half-naked onna-Ranma & Kuno in the bathroom
(& a naked Ryoga in the bath ^_^); One Grew Over
the Kuno's Nest
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