Very nice, Mike. And even better since Miyu is one of those series that
deserves so many more stories than get written for it. My only complaint
so far is that you should add commas between statements and names during
your qoutations. For example:
WRONG: "Is that a threat I hear Miyu?"
RIGHT: "Is that a threat I hear, Miyu?"
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Andrew Dynon
"Now, we can do this the hard way, or... well, actually, there's just the
hard way."
- Buffy, _Welcome to the Hellmouth_
Doyle: I've been sent by The Powers That Be.
Angel: The powers that be what?
- Angel, "City Of..."