Well, well, well... lookie what we have here.... ^_^
Yes, I am still alive and kicking, and no, the story is not dead by a
longshot. I've been a bit busy in the RL department, and I'll touch on that
at the end of the latest installment of Kasumi 1/2. On to some
semi-important things.
I've mentioned it beforehand, and I'll bring it up again. I have been
simultaneously rewriting the previous chapters. Most of it is fixing up
sentence structures and uniforming my style (I dropped out a lot of
superfluous Japanese words and replaced those with standard English ones, for
example). Some parts have been expanded upon; for example, Chapter Four has
an entirely new scene added in that I had originally forgotten to write in my
haste to send it off to RAAC and the FFML, so it should now make a whole lot
more sense instead of coming off as a convenient excuse for sex (ah, now you
know what I'm referring to).
[Spoilers of Chapter 4 if you haven't read the series yet.]
Speaking of which, a few people have asked me about that scene and what
happened after Kasumi dropped the teacup on Ranma's head. Well, it pretty
obvious that somewhere after that fateful moment, they had sex, but they want
to know just how did it come about since, as far as we know, Kasumi isn't an
easy woman and to blatantly and purposely sleep with her sister's fiance just
does not seem her style at all. Well, rest assured it certainly was _not_
planned or anything; just think of it as a victim of an impulsive snowball
effect. A couple of planned chapters from now, I'll detail these events and
a few other things in a lemon side story.
That's all from me now. On with the main event.
Enjoy
Adrian D. Rainman
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