In a message dated 9/20/00 11:23:13 AM EST, kleppe@mediaone.net writes:
I don't really see why Ranma would duplicate Keiichi's wish.
He was being a smart aleck at the time, hence he didn't really think she was
for real.
If he believes that he's going to get what he wishes for (it wasn't really
clear
to me whether he did in the story), he'd most likely ask for a cure for his
curse. If not, there's a lot of things he might say, but I don't see any
reason
for him to pick this one.
Well, I could...just not in the way he does it here. It would most likely be
an ofhand remark like so.
Ranma: A goddess... yeah right. [flippant] If you're really a goddess, I
wish you would become my fiancee, and send all the other girld after me
packing.
[Goddess granting wish sequence]
Ranma: [blinks] What the?
Belldandy: Wish granted.
Ranma: [snubs his nose] Sure, right. I believe ya.
[Enter Akane, Ukyou, Shampoo, and Kodachi]
Ukyou: Ranchan, I've decided to give up on you. You don't love me, and you
never will. Bye. [walks off]
Ranma: [blinks] Huh?
Shampoo: Shampoo go home to China. Stupid boy no worth it any more. Bie
liao. [leaves]
Ranma: [tips over] Wha...?
Kodachi: The veil has been taken from my eyes. How could someone as noble as
I fall for an uncouth ruffian such as you? Goodbye forever, you freakish
parody of a man. [disappears in a flutter of black rose petals]
Ranma: [twitches, pulling a Kenshin] Ororo...?
Akane: [quiet for a moment] We're through, Ranma.
Ranma: [falls over] Hanh?
Akane: We're no longer engaged. Now get out of our house and take your "new"
fiancee with you. [taps a toe impatiently]
Ranma: [whips around to Belldandy] Y-y-you're for real!!
Belldandy: Yes, I am.
Ranma: Take it back! Take back the wish!
Belldandy: I'm sorry, but I can't. Once a wish has been approved, it cannot
be changed. Now, I am your fiancee.
Ranma: [bangs his head on the table repeatedly] This isn't happening. This
isn't happening! I just blew my chance at getting a cure for my curse!!
ARGH!!!
A better version of this kind of spamfic would be _Oh my...Ranma?_ on
<http://fanfic.tass-anime.com>. A full-fledged story, it is indeed and is
somewhat complete (for now at least).