Lovely little spamfic!

 "Mind you," Utena said, "her mother used to tell her she was
 a princess from the Onion Kingdom.  I guess that counts as
 a little weird --"

I don't think I've ever seen any fanfic writers do anything
with that line before.  This story makes me wonder why.

Me too, actually.

Side note:  It's especially embarassing to suddenly think of
something like this at work.  Difficult to explain to everyone why
you're suddenly snickering ...  :)

 > Utena looked down at the rose in her hand.  "Of course," she said

 slowly, "I did always say that I wanted to be a prince ..."

 She pinned the rose to her lapel, produced a top hat from
 somewhere, and ran out of the garden, heading after her friend.

Heh.  No mask?

Even the top hat was puching the envelope, really.

 > Anthy smiled.

I like Anthy's reaction here.  No jealousy at all.

Hey, Anthy specifically gave her the rose!
(In the first version of the story, which I tossed out because it was
far too serious, I made a lot more of this.)

Again, nice job!

Thanks.  About time I posted something, even if it was just a spamfic...

Cheers,
Angus