Okay... the most I can say for this is nice premise, but the whole action seemed to fall aback by the time Katsuhito reveals to the reader his true intentions... in other words, I'm sorry, a very half-baked punchline in the end. Other than that, it was an interesting thing to think about... only, the most negative emotion we've seen Tenchi sport around the Masaki household is a certain hopelessness in his eyes, ne? :)

Peace and love,
Jules


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